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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 22
🤣🤣🤣
Sujal Crystal ko bhul gaya, kaun Crystal?????
Raj aa kar Kashish ko uske kamre main sota hua dekh kar almost gir jaata hai
Ria to aapne saath aapne friend laayi hai
why???? sab jante hai, Kashish ko chod kar
Ria Kashish ko uske ki room se bhaga di, aur muh pe door close kar di
Kashish Beti, yeh Vegas tumhare liye nahin, tum abhi bacchi ho, balike, need trainning😆😆😆
ab Kashish ko uske ek laute dost ki yaad aata hai😛😛
waise Sujal ki Italian, woahh, kuch bhi bol de, Kash ko samajh thodi naa aayegi
nice update
good going.
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 24
oh Kashish is gonna kill Sujal for sure if comes to hear about this...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -purnima-

sounds like a plan sujal 😆😆😆 just wait for kashish to know it jis sir ko daba rahi thi ussi sir ko fod degi 😆😆😆 already girl is Jealous 😆...by crystal 😆😆😆 god save sujal & crystal 😆😆😆



he he he...danda leke dono ke peeche bhagegi...jst imagine😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sania_58

Part 19

Sujal gadha nahin hai, ki Kashish ki harkate naa samajh paaye
so ab Kashish Ria aur Sujal ki jodi banane ki kohsish kar rahi hai
very bad match making dear...socho kashish jodi banane lag gai to lag gai watt logon ki😆
Kashish bohut hi frickle minded hai....kya kare...dil ki maane yaa dimaag ki
now, in Vegas
yay, yay...haan tum bada khush ho kash ka taste dekh ke😉..., I know, Kashish ke taste ka nahin hai
so bharosa Sujal
chalo dekhte hai dono ke beech kya development hota hai...dekhna vegas se kya kya development hota h😉
good part

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sania_58

Part 20
boo,...boo kyun kiya... ultimately Sujal ki yaad aa hi gaya
Sujal ke sibhya tumhara koi nahin hai balika😉😉...he he ...ye bata to sahi kahi
arre lekin Sujal to kisi aur ke saath no.exchange karne main busy hai
Kashish ko bhul gaya...bhula nahi...wo to hai hi constant...baaki to aati jaati rahengi😉
so Kashish approached Ria
yeppy, Ria samajhdaar nikli, Sujal interested nahin hai samajh gaayi, so naya pakad liya...ab bandar kya jaane adrak ka zwaad...jo jiske lie sahi h...kyun h naa
Kashish hi nahin samajh paa rahi hai Sujal interested hai...haan tumne kaise samajh liya😉
Raj ke paas gaayi to musibat
ab bhorosa Sujal
lekin woh to Crystal ke paas jana chati hai...majboori h naa...kash kahan line ka response karti h
Kashish jaane nahin degi
but yes, ek chiz to hai Kashish Sujal ko aapna khud ka property samajh rakha hai...he he he sadda haq
soberness not allowed in Vegas trip
Kashish tera kya hoga??...jo hoga...manzure sujal hoga...he he he
all the best...thxs😃
nice update

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Posted: 12 years ago
part 23
Kashishji Italian dictionary kharidne se kuch nahin hoga
learn Italian
ek chiz to humne dekh liya hai woh hai Sujal jab zyada romantic yaa phir zyada drunk hota hai, to Italian hi bolta hai, jaise main gusse main Bengali hi bolti hoon, to future main problem hoga darling
Sujal ne Raj ko bhaga diya
bechara Raj aag aag kar ke balcony main daud raha hai, too good😆😆😆
Sujal ne Italian ke aad main kaafi kuch bol diya😳😳😳😳😳
poor Kashish, kuch nahin samjhi
next day morning, Kashish ne Sujal ka dress pehen liya, Sujal ka reaction kaisa hoga, main imagine kar sakti hoon😉😉😉
Kashish Sujal ko trust karne lagi hai, bohut zyada dependent ho rahi hai, shayad aise relationship share karnewale logo ko Soulmate kehte hai.dono ke beech ka trust, woww👏👏
Kashish Sujal ko dekhne main busy hai, good job, good time pass dear.
lekin aisa tum roz kar sakte ho Kashish baby, i am sure Sujal bilkul mind nahin karega
lekin ki mourn sun kar Kashish puch rahi hai woh pain main hai😲😲
nahinnn, she needs trainning😳😳😳
good part
beautifully written
well done dear.👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
they r really getting wild in vegas...

love it...

poor k...all alone...
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 24
chao sujal Kashish ko bikini se zyada uske cloth main dekhna pasand karta hai😉😉
she looks cute & sexy😳😳
Sujal Crystal ke saath plan kar raha hai, Kashish jealous, natural hai baba
Ria, Sujal, Raj sab ko maaza aa raha hai😳😳
except Kashish bechari soch rahi hai yeh kaha phas gaayi main
so Raj night store room main bitayi😆😆😆
ab hotel main aag aag karke shout karega to yehi hoga naa😆😆😆
Sujal ka yeh idea thik hai, drive karne ke liye kisi ko sober rehna chayiye😉😉😉
lekin Sujal aur Raj drugs ka plan kar raha hai
arre Sujal bawra ho gaayi kya chora,😲😲 nahin tu to bewra hai, 😆😆😉par samhal kar, i just hope Kashish tum he maar naa dale
good update👏
waiting for the next.
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Posted: 12 years ago

PART 25

s-What damn it?

Raj-I told youuu...the thing that won't let us pas out

s-Drug?

Raj-Well...it's not drug...drug..but...yeah kinda and don't tell Kash about it..she'll freak out

s-Have you tried it?

Raj-Well..no Zach has tried it. We can try it today. It's f***** awesome, I heard. It's just a pill kinda thing. What's your say? It's better to have it than...pass out in a gutter and make a fool of yourself. It's not narcotic

s-Any side effects?

Raj-Nope

s- So how do we get it? Any side effect?

Raj-Nopeee side effects.I have it with me

s-How much do I pay for that?

Raj-oh shut up! Pop in

Raj throws the medicine towards him

Sujal ek le leta hai

Aise 1 dedh ghante baad Ria knocks

Ria-Should I come?

Dono Ria ko andar bula lete hain..

Raj Ria ko bhi pills offer karta hai

Dono pii rahe the tv par koi movie dekh rahe the... Kashish bhi peeche peeche aa jaati hai

Teeno pasre hue the, peete hue lazy lamhe

Ria a beech mein dono ke

k-Yeh kya kar rahe ho?

Sujal to reply nahi karta...shehzaadon ki tarah pada hua hai

Ria-Aise hi lete hain. Aaja

Kashish jakar nudges Sujal-

k-Ye kya kar rahe tum log aise kyon pade ho?? Chalo na sab bahar chalte hain.. yahan baithne thodi aaye hai nandar...chalo ab kahin ghoom ke aate hain

s-ok..chalo...kahan jaana hai..[He takes a giant swig and gets up]

k- Ishhh ye kya hai!! Tum log din mein bhi pii rahe ho?!! Bottle chodo.. yahan sirf peene aye ho kya!

s-So? Is drinking reserved for night only?

Raj-Ab to pii chuke...Sujal puri vodka ghatak lia aur main adhi rum...ye Ria abhi beer pe hi sip laga rahi hai

Three of them chuckle

k- Tum log pagal ho gaye ho kya!! Chodo sab chodo..

Kashish jakar sab ke hath bottle cheenti hai.. alag rakhne ko

Ria-Par jaa kahan rahe hain?

Sujal to bottle Kashish ki reach se bahar kar deta hai

k-oh maine suna hai koi ahaa dance show hone wala hai kisi mein wahan chalte hain

Kashish says to Ria uchal uchal ke bottle lene ki koshiish kar rai hai Sujal ke haath se

Dance to Kashish ne padh liya.. par wo exotic dance show hai wo nahi pata Kashish ko

Sujal mischief wali grin ke saath Raj ko dekhta hai

s-Achcha dance show..sahi hai..let's go

k- Haan han chalo chalo.. aba tayar ho jao... din bhar iss gand mein rahne se to acha hai

Sujal takes a huge swig aur bottle khali karke Kashish ko finally de deta hai

s-Go and change

Kashish frowns at bottle and then at Sujal.. cutely pout karte hue..

k- Aur mat pio please

s-Gimme a solid reason

k- It's useless? Matlab kya mil jaega tumhe peekar jo aise nai milega?

He comes closerrr to Kashish...touching his nose to her and whispers

Kashish is stunned ki ho kya raha hai

s-I become hotter when i am drunk...you know

He moves back takes his clothes and goes to change

k- huh...?

Kashish goes after him what ?What was that? Matlab kya hai? Kya hotter? Temperature badhana hai jakar kitchen mein baith jao!!

s-You actually wanna know?

k-Main pooch to rahi hoon

He turns to face her..without the shirt

She shakes gulping, lowering her eye to thef loor

She remembers ki kal raat hug kiya tha...and kuch bhi ho he was there for her...uppar se bura bhi nai dikhta...hye koi to rok lo

Sujal walks into the washroom throwing the shirt he removed on her that is full of his smell

She pulls the shirt off her face

k- Seriously, bekaar ke baatein mat karo

She was going to drop it or throw away the shirt par pakad raki hai cradling the bunch to her chest

k- Sab pagal ho gaye hain...tum bhi pagalon ki tarah mat piyo...Main nahi keh rahi ki bilkul mat piyo lekin hosh to rahe.. .aise poore time piina sahi nahi hai.. upar se agar tabiyat kharab ho gai to? Huh? Tumse baat kar rahi hoon!!!

Kashish shouts jab Sujal kuch nai bolta

Sujal nikal ke aata hai washroom se

Kashish to ab bhi shirt pakde khadi hai

He looks at his shirt and the place where it is with halki wali grin

Kashish bhi looks down ki kya dekh raha hai...

k-Kya? Poorani shirt pehnni hai? Don't tell me tumhare paas saaf kapde bhi nahi hain...ufff!! Maine aaj subah hi to dekhe the..

s-You should have told me that you love my smell so much

k-Kya? What?

Then she realized ki kar kya rahi thi...

k- oh ye.. nahi ..wo mei..wo..wo to maine.. laundry mein dene ke liye pakad rakhi hai..

Sujal aaram se grin karte hue tashan mein nikal jaata hai

k-Tum sab to pure din piite ho... ye kaam bhi mujhe karna pad raha hai

Bahar Raj Ria aur Zach wait kar rahe hain

Kashish aati hai bhagte hue catch up karti hai.

She gives Sujal a killing glare ki jab se wo samjhane ki koshish kar rahi hai sunn hi nahi raha.. ignore upar se

Aate hi Zach announces

z-Avoid hangover ! Stay drunk !!!!!!!!!

All repeat in chorus

k- Tch idiot!

They reach the place

z-Man you know what...there's is place where they serve 1024 cocktails. Wicked isn't it!

Sujal nods happily floating in his bubble of cloud contentment

s-Let's go there tomorrow

Ria kisses Zach,

Ria-oh u have so much knowledge

k-Pagal, sab ke sab pagal..

Kashish is muttering sullenly..

Ab wo bhi baat nahi kar rahi Sujal se since Sujal usse aise ignore kar raha tha

They reach and sit on the round tables, dim lit jagah hai

Kashish is happy ki chalo kisi achhi jagah aye hain..

But she notices skimpy kapde pehnke waitresses drinks serve kar rahi hain

Lights off ho jaati hain and the dance starts

Ss dance starts Raj announces ki

Raj-Let's start a competition. Dance ke start se akhir tak short lagayenge non stop

Sab agree

k-NO! Hum yahan isliye nhai aaye hain. Ye kya matlab hai..?

Par koi sunta hai kya kabhi bechari Kashish ki

Dance hota rehta hai to hooting start ho gai thi as kapde utar rahe the dancers ke

Par itna andhera tha ki samajhna mushkil tha ki kaun kya kar raha hai

Kashish is getting embarrassed by the moment...

Socha ki uthkar chali jaun as it gets really skimpy

Par realize hua ki itna andhera hai, kahan jayegi

She tries to leave lekin jaa nahi pati to side ghumkar ankhein table par gada kar baith jati haai

Par zara curiousiti Kashish ko bhi hai, thoda vulgar hai par dance to acha kar rahi hain...

Kashish thoda hichkichai phir socha dekh leti hoon, mujhe kya main bhi to ladki hoon, sab dekh sakte hain main kyun nahi

To side long glances se dek bhi rahi hai beech bech mein and getting shocked at every new item being removed..

Ab dance chalta hai 2 ghante

Lights jalti hain

She is red as tomato

Kashish ke table pe to baaki log adhe ludke aadhe gire se pade hue the

It looked lik a glass ka kabaad khaana

Sab talli se ho rakhe hain and they are all thanking ki wah Kashish mazze agaye tum to bhadiya show mein le aayi, kal bhi hai kya aisa kuch..iska repeat kab hai

Piike sab to ludke se pade hain table pe koi chair pe koi zameen pe...koi blabbering..koi laughing...koi kissing...

Zach and Ria are kissing

Sujal was reaching another shot

Sujal ka phone baja

s-Huh? ...hic-...

Ankhein si kholta hai, searching for his phone

Jaise taise tatolke milta hai

Kashish bhi khush hai ki phone baj gaya ab nahi piyega..

He glares hard to understand the keypad

Crystal- Hey handsome..

s-Heyyy -hic-kryszzzal

c- Are you drunk?

s-emm...jzt...buzzed...

c- Are u sure.. I mean I thought we were getting together tonight.. but I guessed you are too buzzed to really do anything...

s-Yuppp...we are...-hic-rivvishhh..try meee...I tor you..I ger hotter..when I am drrrunk

c-Eew Sujal.. really..Ii don't want a drunk slobbering over me.. goodnie

<click>

She hangs up

s-huh? b****

k- What?!

He puts away the phone nd takes another swig

k-Tum gali kisse de rahe ho?!

She grabs the drink out f his hand, usse laga ki sko ko kuch ulta seedha keh raha hai

Sujal turns his head drunkly and looks at her with his red intoxicated eyes

She looks angrily at him

Edited by storywriter - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
bechari kashish apna idea khud hi blooper hogaya 😆😆😆 now she must be regretting the dance show 😆😆😆...

dont know if sujal gets hotter after being drunk or not but he surely goes crazy 😆😆 & starts his italian 😆😆confusing poor girl 😆😆😆

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