Master Class...part 20 updated (on Arnav-Khushi)

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shivu124

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Posted: 13 years ago

#781

loved it pm me wen u write again

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lovespell

@lovespell

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Posted: 13 years ago

#782

I was silent reader all along. It was indeed a beautiful story. Loved the business zeal of khushi and the way she kept on going to build herself is just amazing. Also the transformation of the ruthless ASR to sensible one is beautiful I should say. His alias RRJi to tutor khushi in business is a new change. The kiss was unexpected to khushi but a vision for us all😆😆😆😆😆😆. We all know that ASR will get khushi to sit with him but the words at the end was suprisingly shocking for us too. I am really looking forward for the next update.

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moomin4455

@moomin4455

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Posted: 13 years ago

#783

Brilliant story - I am thoroughly enjoying it!

Khusi is wonderful in this - I really want her to succeed. Arnav is ...well he's Arnav isn't he and completely unapologetic. The last line probably would have had any other woman swoon. But Khushi...would she even understand what he means? I mean "I want you!" means "I want to sleep with you!" for some people and I'm pretty sure that's how she would take it. But we all know she is very much a traditional girl and not versed in the ways of men...I can't wait to see how she reacts! At this point is Arnav even thinking beyond his libido?!

My heart goes out to you juggling that hectic life of yours! But brava for doing everything you do and being a fabulous writer!! :-)

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arshifan04

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Posted: 13 years ago

#784

WOW did he just say I want you!! OH can't wait to see what happens in the next update!
Amazing update!! 😃

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farheen75

@farheen75

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Posted: 13 years ago

#785

Loved it...it was an awesome update...a bit shocked at the end though,how bluntly he said it that he wanted her...can't wait to see Khushi's reaction in the next part.

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zehra

@zszs

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Posted: 13 years ago

#786

Ok, not even joking. Every time I got a PM, before checking it I would say "Please let it be Masterclass, please let it be masterclass"... and all of the above comments will let you know why!

Absolutely loved it! Loving this competition between Arnav and Khushi! But the wait was too long 😉 Update soon iA!!

Awesome job as usual 👏

xxx

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Amrita

@Amti4u

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Posted: 13 years ago

#787

Loeved it... Loved it.. Loved ittt... sooo much and love you so much for this awesome updateee...

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Tanya

@tanya_vi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#788

WoW!! What an update!! This is going to be one entertaining flight with those two fire crackers on board...can't wait to read more...

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vittoriA Giardano

@kbtr

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Posted: 13 years ago

#789

Wow! Well, what can I say? I'm giggling like an idiot right now. KKG tried to get one up on ASR! Haha! And she almost succeeded. I can't wait to see how this unfolds. What will she say? What is she going to do now? Her goose is cooked!! I know I shouldn't take pleasure in this, but I'm so happy that he got his way! I just hope he's not the kind to sip and discard!

Thanks for letting me read your amazing work! Thumbs up!

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Maya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#790

It is unfortunate that i did not come across this story before..

But luckily for me..it was good...cos i got to read all 16 parts in one go!!

You brought back the office magic!! Its an awesome storyline...i always thought the office setup has so much scope and so many possibilities..but it was never explored sufficiently in the serial...

I absolutely love the concept of their online chatting without her knowing its asr...i love the way you made asr acknowledge (in fact, even admire) her skills and her efficiency, albeit grudgingly...

I especially adore the devil n angel voices inside arnav's head...really naughty and giving him a dose of rality from time to time...loved it!!

Please keep writing and enthralling us...this tale is so entertaining and so much fun to read!!

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