--Just You--*Kriyaansh OS* - Last part updtd 24*

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jahnavi

@Jahnavi_KRAS

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#51

nice updt meow...

bt i'm confused...rey feels for kria rite

updt sooon

n sorry for commentin late

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prrk86

@prrk86

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#52

omg so much different 😲

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Hey liked d start of os.

But y is Rey showing dat much interest in knowing abt Taani? 😕

Obviously Kria will nt feel comfortable at this n that's y she was drunk.😒

I think Rey wanted to say anything else.

Update soon to sort out our mu's.

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Shailja

@---Shailu---

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Dee you have totally took my senses away,...by ur heart delighting

Os !!!!

I seriously mean Wowww !!!! Wat a Os !!!!

Am toh going mad day by day by seeing ur sense of writing skills !!!

This one is totally different from whatever u write...

I should say that this Os is and will be one of the best wrks of ur's till date and in future too !!!!

Main seriously bata nai skti ki am feeling sooo Proud of my dee !!!!

Such an Amazing and awesum concept is really rocking !!!!

I should say that the way u made Taani is too gud !!!!

The pinch of jealousy is nice for the fresh start for the imagination !

A serious ''Wow'' for ur commendable thinking skills too !!!

On Totality, the Os is damn Rocking and something new !!!!

I totally Loved the new flavours u've add up to the story !!!!

It's something like beyond mah imagination...

So keep it up!!!!

Well done...

And Dee pls FASHION vala FF update kro nai toh main hartaal

krungi !!!!

Sorry for short comment as u noe i've a major finger problemo !!!!

ND Muaaahhh !!!! *hugs & kisses*

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scorp1AN

@scorp1AN

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#55

Okie... Taani is in the OS... I do not want to jump to any conclusion.. Can't wait to read few more updates! Have a feeling that the story is abt to get interesting... Please update soon!

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Aarushi Gupta

@cool_star14

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#56

AMAZING update!!!!!!!

loved d starting...

but hell confused y is rey asking for that taani...😕

waiting for d nxt update...

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Saumya Rathore

@Saumya_D3

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#57

snigdha di...confusing tha yarrr..!!! kya h kriyaansh ke bich..???? jaldi se upda karo i wanna knowww...!!!!!!!

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Riya Kapoor

@RiyaArShaKapoor

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#58

luved it...👏 awesum..❤️. but taani's name make me angry ...😡

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Meera

@MirageSwaron

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#59

Snigs...jaldi update kar yaar...mindblowing script is OS ka...this Kriya is so luvable & this Rey is ambiguous...jo dikh raha hai woh hai nahi... I hope so

Edited by meevee - 13 years ago

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Namrata Jadhav

@nj_SRKholic

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#60

Meow...
Snigy..piggyy..
Ye kya tha?...
Literally i was lyk wat d f...!!
Kya he yaar yaha bhi taani... N rey drunk..omg!!
Jaldi update kar ye os mujhe age padna he...
Plz...!!
Loved d 1st part...