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thank you for both the pms... loved this heart-warming os, with its doses of humor! arnav and khushi are truly the incarnations of tom and jerry: love how khushi never backs down and always wants to have the last word! your os had many beautiful moments but the best one was: "When I thought I lost you Khushi," and Khushi could hear her voice crack on the words as moisture took over his eyes "I cannot even tell you how I felt… it was like… it was like… I had lost a part of myself… no, it was worse." this was a long overdue confession, which then nicely flowed into the humorous scene where khushi realised that arnav had tricked her again... nani knocking on the door and the two not wanting to be found in their semi-dressed state was simply hilarious!
khushi blushing in arnav's arms as he smirks gleefully at her is always a sight to die for... the morning after convo with its touch of humor was very nicely done!
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