OS: MR AND MRS. LAAD GOVERNOR part 2 (last) page 8

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noclapsplease

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

how badly i wished something like this to happen..😭
thank god atleast here they completed their kiss😉
u amalgamated every emotion in it 😳
last part of the os was outstanding. i was continously blushing as if he was saying all that to me 😳
loved it yar..😊
great work as usual 😃

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Crazy4IPK

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

Omg, that was one romantic OS.

Loved it so much. I was blushing while imagining the scene!😳

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chatterbug

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

This seems more sensible and romantic than the current track !

Very sweet and romantic post dear!

tfs 😃

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PhoenixRadar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

Aww...Aww...Aha!!...Aye Haaye!!...*giggle*... Phew!! *fanning myself*...🤣...☺️...Hailaah!!...🤣

These were my reactions as I read the part!! Hahahaahh...It was wonderfully written, Avi!
Very sweet, cute, hilarious (in terms of Khushi), *sigh* dreamy and lovely (in terms of Arnav confessing), funny (in terms of Khushi illustrating so easily), and Wow!!
Thank you for the next part, pal!! This was definitely worth reading and enjoyable!😃

Annie

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Jyothi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#65

awesome OS...loved it totally !!!!!!!

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susi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#66

amazing confession N romantic reunion😳😳

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Avi64

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Posted: 13 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: mariam42
Just read both parts together,
And have to say, u r an AMAZING WRITER!
Would love to read more of ur work so have sent a buddy request
Please accept and send me pm's with anything u write!
Again, LOVED THE OS!
😳

Thank you so much for such a sweet comment😊

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Avi64

@Avi64

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Posted: 13 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: glamourbird
very nice OS!!

something like this should have happened in the show too!!

CVs should get ideas from u!!😉

write an epilogue plz!!

tahbk you...

i didn't plan on writing an epilogue... but if i come up with something I'll definetely pen it down😊

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Avi64

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Posted: 13 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: Maddy1270
thank you for both the pms... loved this heart-warming os, with its doses of humor! arnav and khushi are truly the incarnations of tom and jerry: love how khushi never backs down and always wants to have the last word! your os had many beautiful moments but the best one was: "When I thought I lost you Khushi," and Khushi could hear her voice crack on the words as moisture took over his eyes "I cannot even tell you how I felt' it was like' it was like' I had lost a part of myself' no, it was worse." this was a long overdue confession, which then nicely flowed into the humorous scene where khushi realised that arnav had tricked her again... nani knocking on the door and the two not wanting to be found in their semi-dressed state was simply hilarious!

khushi blushing in arnav's arms as he smirks gleefully at her is always a sight to die for... the morning after convo with its touch of humor was very nicely done!

thanks so much dear! you always find something worth appreciating and always let me know...
thank u...😊

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Avi64

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Posted: 13 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: iluvarshi15

wooo Lovely work Avi (can I call yu that?) OMG I just read both parts that was incredible ... wow this was Awsome 😉. I wish this happened in the show, its better than wat happened .. yuur really talented and I love this OS its Cute, Hot, Funny x all the best things in one ... and wat a great Ending 😳... its really sweet I just love it ... Man I can't describe it -_-' it was just "BEAUTIFUL" ❤️
Great OS keep it up 👍🏼

Love Aqsa x 😉 😛 😳

thanks Aqsa for such an incredibly sweet comment😊 😳and yes you can call me Avi...😊