New OS: The Confession

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Hey there Everyone 🤗

I don't know what I was thinking when I wrote this but I just started typing and this is what I ended up with 😛

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She sneaked a peek inside the home and breathed a sigh of relief on finding it empty. Thank God he wasn't there. Being angry with this changed Arnav was a difficult task. She wasn't sure if she could keep it up much longer.

She quietly made her way to the closet to grab her clothes before heading in for a quick shower. She slided the glass door of the closet open to get the biggest surprise of her life, making her eyeballs almost jump out of their sockets while her mouth formed a perfect circle.

"What The?" She gasped as she automatically moved back.

"Thats my line, Mrs. Copycat Raizada!" Arnav said, smirking.

Khushi just couldn't believe her eyes. The high and mighty Mr. Arnav Singh Raizada was sitting inside the closet as if it was the most natural place on Earth to be. She gaped at him wide eyed trying to comprehend what she was seeing while he smirked, evidently enjoying her reaction.

"Arnav Ji?" she gasped as she reached out her index finger to poke his knee making sure he wasn't just a fragment of her imagination. No, he wasn't. He felt pretty solid.

"Yes Khushi?" He asked smirking down at her.

"Have you gone insane?" She almost shrieked.

"Hmmm..." He thought for a moment before continuing with a smile. "No, I don't think so."

"Oh! Did you take your medicines this afternoon?" Khushi asked thinking maybe losing his head was one of the conditions of not taking his pills on time.

"What? Of course, I did!" He said, before it dawned on him what Khushi might be thinking and he quickly added, "And no, Khushi, missing a dose of diabetic tablets does not make a person sit in a closet if thats what you're thinking." He finished, smiling a crooked smile.

"Then what are you doing here?" She stammered, flabbergasted.

"I don't know." He shrugged his shoulders lightly.

"You. Don't. Know?" She asked her eyes getting more wider than it was possible.

"No, actually I was just remembering the time I found you in this closet at Di's wedding anniversary and I remembered that you never told me what you were doing in my closet so I decided to try it out too... See if I can figure out what you were doing here but I still don't know." He explained.

A soft smile made its way to her lips as her mind flashed back to the time he was mentioning. She used to be so afraid of this Laad Governor that she had hidden in his closet just to avoid facing him but fate as usual had other plans and he had opened his wardrobe to find her sitting inside. 'Wow' he must be as surprised as I am right now, she mused, smiling softly.

Arnav's heart leapt on seeing her smiling softly to herself. He had finally made her smile! It wasn't one of her 1000 watt smiles but he promised to himself that he'll bring that one back to her lips as well.

"So Khushi, what were you doing in my closet, may I ask?" he asked breaking into her thoughts.

"Its none of your business." she snapped at him.

"Okay! I'll find that out later but can you now please wear the red saree I got you?" He pleaded in a soft voice, his eyes smoldering. "You'll look perfect in it." He added.

"No, Mr. Raizada! I won't look perfect in it cos I'm not perfect! Only you are perfect in this world!" She said sharply trying to control her tears which were threatening to fall.

Arnav sighed softly as he jumped out of the closet lightly before he cupped Khushi's face and whispered softly, "No, Khushi. I'm not perfect either but what I do know is that we are perfect for each other. I couldn't have found myself a more perfect life partner than you even if I spent my entire life searching."

Khushi tried looking away from his tear filled honey brown eyes which shone with honesty and love for her and she felt her resolve breaking as he continued after taking a deep breath.

"I'm sorry for lashing out at you that night Khushi. I know that it was very wrong of me and I completely understand your anger but you're the only person in front of whom I can be myself. Cos I know that you'll always understand me... Understand that all I said that night was only in my anger and frustration on seeing Di trying to hurt herself. I'm sorry Khushi. I know I shouldn't have said all those lies because you're the best thing that has ever happened to me." He let his words sink in before continuing.

"Every time I look into your eyes Khushi, I realize that I'm doing the exact thing I promised myself that I would never do and that is to fall in love. I'm completely in love with you Khushi and it doesn't really matter to me if you love me back or not cos I love you enough for the both of us."

He ended, as a lone tear made its way down his face but soon a relieved laugh escaped his lips as Khushi launched herself at him, hugging tightly as tears of absolute joy ran down her face and he hugged her back, unable to speak due to the overwhelming feeling of happiness.
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SmileyStar thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks Hun 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wooohhooo
ahh i love my timing...
first page ...yipeee...
im running around in circles doing the merry dance...wanna join in???😆

fantastic ...fabulous...all together FANTABULOUS!!!!!!!
ah how much i love to see this in today's episode...
is there anyway u cud join hands with arshad khan???
ipk will have 10.00 trps...😃

this ia awesome fari...👏👏
i loved his excuse for being inside the closet...😆
i wonder how she manages to resist him...😲

keep writing baby...
U ROCK...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

umwahhh

🤗🤗

Edited by claireDD - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Reserved😳 Will edit later- had a very very tiring day!!!
-edited-
Ok, I had to edit soon because reading your works always refresh me!!! Big hug to you Fari🤗And yes, by the way, am on first page🥳
It was a wonderful OS, perfectly blending Arnav's and Khushi's emotions, with a mix of fun as well as a heart-soothing touch!!! Loved it!!! ❤️ The confession at the end was truly superb!!!
Can't tell you how I am waiting for tonight's episode to see cutie pie hiding in the closet and Khushi's reaction🤣 And your OS was just in time!!!
Edited by tash10 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Good one, sweetie. . . .

Fab concept!! 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Gahhh!
Did I ever tell you I hate you? No?
UgHHH!
I Hattte you!!!!!

I wasnt able to connect the net in the first place, I panicked thinking about evryone's reactions, then I started thinking about the computer repairwala, then I was thinking about his fees, the Allah ta'ala better knows why ur thought popped up in my mind, n I started thinking about the comments I wrote on ur OS n diary, n that u din reply n what ur reply would be n then I msged my sister asking her what do I do...she tried helping me between her lectures...poor she...she's doing her M.Tech n is in 2nd year

Allah ta'ala helped me n net got connected...I log in n what do I see?
Fari madam has written an OS n gotten 7 comments already
I quickly resd hoping to get a place on 1st page n BAM!!!!
I inaugrated the 2nd page

Grrr!!! I sooo hate you

Coming to the OS
It was so beautiful n touching!
Esp the way Arnav confessed
Hope he reads this n get tutorials rather than from "lowe" guru NK 😆
I've always marvelled at your ability to string in words together, Masha Allah n I say again I wished I too could do it. Coz when I sit to write no dialogues pop up in my head
I have to rack my brains to put a piece together
Brilliant OS sista!
Hate you 🤣

P.S: BLOOPER!
I remembered that you never told you what
It suppose it should be you never told me what
Edited by Sweet_Ashum - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: claireDD

res
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edited to add...



wooohhooo
ahh i love my timing...
first page ...yipeee...
im running around in circles doing the merry dance...wanna join in???😆

fantastic ...fabulous...all together FANTABULOUS!!!!!!!
ah how much i love to see this in today's episode...
is there anyway u cud join hands with arshad khan???
ipk will have 10.00 trps...😃

this ia awesome fari...👏👏
i loved his excuse for being inside the closet...😆
i wonder how she manages to resist him...😲

keep writing baby...
U ROCK...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

umwahhh

🤗🤗



Ohhh! Dilruuu!! You're on first page?? 😲 😆 I'm joining in in your dance 😉

Ok enough dancing done! I'm out of breath now 😆 You liked it?? You did? Yayyy! I wrote this one without thinking 😆 When I saw the precap I was like I have to write something and this is the outcome 😉 Joining hands with Arshad Khan... Hmmm... If that happens I'll have Arhi have Ashar and Asmara within a month 🤣 🤣

Thanks Dilru! I love you sweetie!! Mwahhh! ❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved it.. Hope they talk so openly in the show which they never do
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Originally posted by: tash10

<font color="#660033" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Reserved😳

</div>Will edit later- had a very very tiring day!!!</font>
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<font color="#660033" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">-edited-</font>


<font color="#660033" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS">Ok, I had to edit soon because reading your works alwaysrefresh me!!! Big hug to you Fari🤗And yes, by the way, am on first page🥳</font>


<font color="#660033" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS">It was a wonderful OS, perfectly blending Arnav's and Khushi's emotions, with a mix of fun as well as a heart-soothing touch!!! Loved it!!!❤️The confession at the end was truly superb!!!</font>


<font color="#660033" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS">Can't tell you how I am waiting for tonight's episode to see cutie pie hiding in the closet and Khushi's reaction🤣And your OS was just in time!!!</font>



Tashuuu 🤗

Its almost becoming a habit seeing you on the first page 😆 I don't know how you do it girl! I'm dead impressed! *bows deeply* 😉 you're sooo super efficient and look at me! I haven't even replied back to comments on my SS and my last OS... I'm such a lazy person, like seriously 😆

Glad to know you liked it and I won't thank you for writing such lovely comments everytime cos it seems very monotonous 🤣 you just guess this from now onwards 🤣

And I can't wait either!! Arnav is just looking sooo adorably cute these days! Awww hiding in the cupboard! Isn't he such a sweetheart? ❤️ I Luurvvee him sooo much 😆
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Originally posted by: -_-harsh42

Good one, sweetie. . . .

Fab concept!! 😃



Awww Thanks Harshu 😳 Glad you gave it a read 😃

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