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Fari

@SmileyStar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: divus14
Beautiful...😊</font>

Thank Youuu 😳

Originally posted by: angie_g82
Loved it ;)

Glad to know you did! Thanks 😳

Originally posted by: Arshisarunrocks
Lovely!❤️

Thank Youuu 😃

Originally posted by: swetha_ch
Its beautiful..

Awww Thanksss! 😛

Originally posted by: zohakhan59
Beautiful os❤️

Glad to know you liked it! Thank Youuu 😃

Originally posted by: Josupra
Loved it.. Hope they talk so openly in the show which they never do

Yes! They never do! We can only imagine these wonderful things in OS's etc 😉

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Fari

@SmileyStar

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Sweet_Ashum
Gahhh!
Did I ever tell you I hate you? No?
UgHHH!
I Hattte you!!!!!

I wasnt able to connect the net in the first place, I panicked thinking about evryone's reactions, then I started thinking about the computer repairwala, then I was thinking about his fees, the Allah ta'ala better knows why ur thought popped up in my mind, n I started thinking about the comments I wrote on ur OS n diary, n that u din reply n what ur reply would be n then I msged my sister asking her what do I do...she tried helping me between her lectures...poor she...she's doing her M.Tech n is in 2nd year

Allah ta'ala helped me n net got connected...I log in n what do I see?
Fari madam has written an OS n gotten 7 comments already
I quickly resd hoping to get a place on 1st page n BAM!!!!
I inaugrated the 2nd page

Grrr!!! I sooo hate you

Coming to the OS
It was so beautiful n touching!
Esp the way Arnav confessed
Hope he reads this n get tutorials rather than from "lowe" guru NK😆
I've always marvelled at your ability to string in words together, Masha Allah n I say again I wished I too could do it. Coz when I sit to write no dialogues pop up in my head
I have to rack my brains to put a piece together
Brilliant OS sista!
Hate you🤣

P.S: BLOOPER!
I remembered that you never told you what
It suppose it should be you never told me what

First of all, your comment cracked me up big time 🤣 Allah Ta'ala helped you alot in logging on to the forums, huh? 🤣

Awww it sucks you aren't on the first page but Allah Ta'ala ki marzi 😆 Awww you like my dialogues? I think they're so fazol 🤣 But yeah, dialogues come easily to me but the describing part doesn't. 😛

And your P.S has me completely confused?! What is it? Huh? *scratching her head and thinking* Tell me quickly! Tell tell, bolo bolo! 😆

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Fari

@SmileyStar

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Lalaland222
Cutteee.👍🏼

Thanks 😳

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claireDD

@claireDD

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: SmileyStar

Ohhh! Dilruuu!! You're on first page?? 😲 😆 I'm joining in in your dance 😉

Ok enough dancing done! I'm out of breath now 😆 You liked it?? You did? Yayyy! I wrote this one without thinking 😆 When I saw the precap I was like I have to write something and this is the outcome 😉 Joining hands with Arshad Khan... Hmmm... If that happens I'll have Arhi have Ashar and Asmara within a month 🤣 🤣

Thanks Dilru! I love you sweetie!! Mwahhh! ❤️

really...then u must must join with arshad😉..

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Sweet_Ashum

@Sweet_Ashum

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: SmileyStar

First of all, your comment cracked me up big time 🤣 Allah Ta'ala helped you alot in logging on to the forums, huh? 🤣

Awww it sucks you aren't on the first page but Allah Ta'ala ki marzi 😆 Awww you like my dialogues? I think they're so fazol 🤣 But yeah, dialogues come easily to me but the describing part doesn't. 😛

And your P.S has me completely confused?! What is it? Huh? *scratching her head and thinking* Tell me quickly! Tell tell, bolo bolo! 😆

Of course! Allah ta'ala is the only one who helps me

n the PS is a blooper from ur post

Check the 1st line n the line under it according to me should be the one

Mistakiya ho gaya Fari se

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barathjoyce

@barathjoyce

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Absolutely incredible
I really want Kushi to wear that red satin arnav gave her!

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Fuj

@-ElmoFuj-

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Farriii, this was sooo beaautifulll! 🤗

I looovvveddd it!!! So you wrote something different this time, eh? Loved it seriously!😃

Loved how Khushi questioned him about his medicines! Heheheh funny! 🤣

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lakraj80

@lakraj80

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Tht was really awesome! Tfs

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Swati Hansraj

@swati-89

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

"Oh! Did you take your medicines this afternoon?" Khushi asked thinking maybe losing his head was one of the conditions of not taking his pills on time.

"What? Of course, I did!" He said, before it dawned on him what Khushi might be thinking and he quickly added, "And no Khushi, missing a dose of diabetic tablets does not make a person sit in the closet if thats what you're thinking." He finished, smiling a crooked smile.

So beautifully written and so easily imaginable too. Just hope the CVs do a good enough job abt the scene at least something like u have written. this was so sweet and the above lines from ur OS were the best part. I just laughed after reading those. Good job!👏 👏 👏 👏

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Fari

@SmileyStar

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Sweet_Ashum

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Of course! Allah ta'ala is the only one who helps me

n the PS is a blooper from ur post
Check the 1st line n the line under it according to me should be the one
Mistakiya ho gaya Fari se

Ohhh Thank Youuu sooo much for pointing it out 😉 Yes stupid fari se stupid se mistake ho gae 😆 Ran off and corrected it 😉