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Posted: 13 years ago
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😳Hello everyone ...thanks for showing such interest
in this FF...😊

here m updating the next part of it..
enjoy reading..😳
"YOU ARE MINE"
When I saw You-VII


Avdhesh was lost in his own thoughts…so lost in checking his own feelings that he didn't even noticed when Arpita and Shikha entered his room.

Avdhesh to himself-"No I can't…but I have to or ….No! But I should not…I can't hurt..."

"If you have done with your… I can n can't can we have dinner Bhaiya?"

Shikha sat by his side and placed the dinner on the table next to her, while Arpita was just standing at the door leaning to it and staring him…

Shikha's voice made Avdhesh realizes that he was not alone in the room, and so of his tear filled eyes. He flip-over and pressed his face into the pillow next to him to wipe his tears off and hide it from them too and replied back-

"Told you naa m not hungry…leave me alone Shikha…I don't want to spoil your mood."

"Yeah Shikha..tu jaa…he want to spoil my mood only, or I should leave too because some baby wanna cry alone now!"

Arpita popped in to taunt Avi…which worked this time and he sits back firmly to prove her wrong…

Avi-"Uh really Arpita Ji…you wanna cry kya?"

Arpita gave him an angry look as he called her ARPITA JI but controlled herself some how-"NO. Certainly not …and why should I? I thought Mr Avdhesh Singh Thakur wanna cry alone."

She stepped in toward Avdhesh …roaring this time.

Avi-"And why you thought so?"

He stand straight in front of him like arch rivals facing off after ages, they were staring each other angrily…

Shikha thought they must start pulling each others hairs as they use to do in their old childhood days…so she find it better to step in the matter.

Shikha-" Arpi please…stop it..and bhaiya aap bhi bas karo…why are you guys fighting?"

Avi-"chutki apni friend ko samjha le…she don't need to step in my personal matter…and I don't like anyone's comment on my mood or life specially when she is standing in my room."

He roared looking straight into her eyes.

Arpi-"Your room…Mr. Thakur you are forgetting that this is my home…this family is mine…and what is this… 'Apni friend ko samjha le?' Am I no one to you? You are just impossible Avi…"

She roared back at him and left the room in anger.

Avdhesh was speechless to her reaction her words as she said it all in one go and her voice vibrated when she said "am I no one" and her eyes turn red too. He was just staring at her with open mouth, Shikha smiled at this and bring the plate and hand it over to Avdhesh,

"Ho gaya jhagda khatam…now have your dinner...and yaa Arpi ko bhi khila dena…even she is hungry, no no was hungry aapne to lad ke hi uska pet bhar diya…bechari ne aap ke chakkar me kuch nahi khaya…aap log khao, main Ice cream le ke aati hun."

Avi was already surprised to see Arpita's reaction and Shikha's word brought him to more surprise…That mean Arpita was pretending at the dinner table, that she had no effect of anything…whatever happened at canteen, why she didn't had anything? Why was she waiting for him? And most important she called it her home…and the way she objected at his words when he called her only Shikha's friend…but why she said it herself in front of Suraj and others that he was just Shikha's brother to her…

She was turning a mystry for him now her behavior was just impossible to understand for him now. First he was tangeled about his own feelings and now Arpita's reactions made him more confuse…He stepped out of his room to search for Arpita and for his surprise she was standing in corner of the same terrace as if she was expecting him to came and mollify her anger. (When Arpita occupied Avdhes's room, Avdhesh had no other option except to stay in the room at terrace.)

He stepped toward her with plate and placed it on boundary next to her…realizing his presence Arpita quickly wiped her tears off and turn face to another direction.

Avi-"you are still mad naa Arpi…"

Arpi-"Arpita for you…only friends and my family can call me that."

Avi-"please yaar don't start it again."

He placed his palm on her shoulder and gently tried to turn her around toward himself but she pushed his hand off.

Arpi-"You don't want it then don't talk to me…waise bhi tumne hi kaha naa I am only Shikha's friend then why are you talking to me?"

Avi-"Aree baba I just repeated your words naa…forgot you said that in collage today…just few hours ago, am just respecting your words."

This time he held her both shoulders and succeeded to turn her around and face himself.

Arpi-"Hatto…baat mar karo hamse…haan kya galat kaha humne…sirf Shikha hi humari friend hai…tumne to hume pehchaana bhi nahi tha…vo Ria hai naa..jaao uske paas…"

She pushed him hard this time while tears rolled down at her cheeks.

Avi smiled at this as he realized that whatever she had done in collage was her way to take out her frustration only…

"accha to us baat ka gussa nikala jaa raha tha canteen me haan!

But why Suraj? He is not good guy Arpi, he don't deserves your friendship Arpi."

Arpi-"Arpita kaho hume" she replied back and continued "aur Gussa! Hum kyun gussa hone lage tumse? Lagte kaun ho humare? Aur jab kuch lagte hi nahi to tumhe kisne haq diya hum par hukam chalane kaa? I will talk to Him..i will make friends, can't I? Don't know what is your problem with him but I find him far better then your poor gal Ria. "

Avi get that she was really angry just like him…so he find it better to surrender and not to talk about Suraj at that time.

Avi-"As you wish Arpita ji. But please don't bother your self for any stranger like me, (his voice turn husky andit compelled her to look up at him with her quite, innocent deep dark tear filled eyes she looked up and bind him in some kind of spell…but some how he continued) You are our guest please have your dinner (till now he was looking straight into her eyes but when he find himself unable for it..he lowered his sight) and go to sleep…good night." Avdhesh turned to leave and stepped ahead, away from Arpita.

Arpi-"Bas Ho gaya!(she bang her heel at floor with anger and shouted at him from back) You are really changed Avi…you have forgotten everything…everything…(by now she started to cry bitterly…)I am your guest! Is it? Then I don't wanna be it.I Am leaving your home Avdhesh ji. Thankyou so much for your hospitality and everything you have done for me till now. Thank you so much."

She said it in a hurt tone and stepped towared stairs fastly but Avdhesh cought her by arm when she was about to cross him.

Avi-"Arpi…why are you behaving like this…you know you are saying that I am changed but I feel like…OK..Sorry…but I was not expecting you and don't know from where you appeared that day at collage and everything was so fast that I was just unable to think… and today…"

He stepped close to her and wiped her tears softly while she was just gazing down with anger.

Arpi-"I don't wanna talk about today…I haven't done anything wrong just replied you in your manner."

Avi-"OK…OK…I will not talk about that…ab to kuch kha lo…Please yaar…muhe bhi bhookh lagi hai please have mercy on this poor soul."

He made an innocent face to make her smile.

Arpi looked up at him, controlled her smile and said-

"You forgot again Avi...whenever we had fought you were the one who had to say sorry…and after that Amma or you had to feed me…otherwise am not going to eat."

"Ok baba I will feed you…come now" Avdhesh held her hand lightly and asked her to go to his room for dinner, but she stand still and smiled at him, he looked back at her to find her smiling at him , her smile compeled him to forget everything and smile back.

"What? Ab kya? Ho gaya jhagda khatm! Ab to kuch kha le meri maa sacchi me bhookh lagi hai." Avdhesh said with a smile.

Arpi-"Haan to bhookh to hume bhi lagi hai…khilaao naa..."

Avi-"Yahan…! Khade –Khade?"

Arpi-"Stupid…Yahan baith kar…in open cool atmosphere…tumhara dimaagbhi thanda rahega."

She said while sitting on the railing and looking strait into his eyes with all her innocence.

Avi was just looking at her some where his mind asked him…

"..How can she be so calm…and strange but her presence made me to forget my own worries…"

"Avi…what ab bhookh nahi lagi kya? Tumhe nahi lagi to naa khao hume to khila do naa…" Arpita called him as he was standing at his place.

Avdhesh smiled at his own thought and sat beside her and start to feed her-

"Arpi…tu sacchi wali Pagal hai…pata hi nahi chalta kab aur kyun gussa ho jati hai….Oh I called you Arpi again…hope you are not going to break that Pot on my head." He said in reply of her previous tease...

"Dimaag thanda rahega"

She looked up at him coldly and he shift back a bit as she would realy bang the pot on his head while his hand was about to her mouth to feed her.

She grabbed his hand and bites his finger tip while having the last bit of food.

Avi-"Ah…..chod chod…wild cat…"

Arpi-"chup chaap khana khilao…or I will eat you, and yaa I don't need any Pot to break your head OK…m enough to kill you by my own hands..."

Avi-"yeah…Can see how hungry you are!...may I eat from your plate Arpi Ji? Hum bhi bhukhe hain…"

He asked to confirm as he don't want to make her actually angry now, what if she didn't' like it.

Arpi-"no…you can't."

Avi looked up at her but this time he wasn't shocked thought they use to snatch each other plates in old days but that was childhood and things are not same now and he accepts it.

"Humare hote tum apne haath se khaoge!"

she took a piece of bread, dippeded it in curry and offered it to Avdhesh to eat as she used to do in those childhood days, sometimes in those corridors of her palace whenever Avi used to come with food to pacify her anger on someone, sometimes at His place whenever they had fight and Amma n Baba solve their differences.

Avi looks at her in surprise…that she still remembers that he too liked to be feeded by her in return…Even he had forgotten that before her arrival.

He was just looking at her with all longingness when a gust of air stroked her lock of hair and caused it to flutter on her left cheek across her beautiful right eye…in that dim moon light; once again her eyes compelled him to forget himself and the world around them he raised his hand and satteled that strand at her right ear…

Na de pyaar itna ke main iske kaabil nahi,

Na dikha khwab ye hasin ke inka koi haasil nahi.

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This is all for this update friends

please hit like if you likes(if the button permits you😆)

and please comment and let me know how was it as i wrote it after a long break from writing 😳

hope you liked it..

thanks for reading😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
Res !!! (Kitne din baad)

I wanted to be the first !! LOL !!😆😆

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*Unresed*

Okk...This update is just fantastic !!!!👏👏👏

So much roothna & manana in a single update...I was like...OMG !! Both of them r so hot-headed !! Pata nahin kahan pahoonch dega inn dono ko inka gussa !!


The last part..feeding each other was so sweet !!😳😳😳

Neha...as I said u haven't lost the touch...really ur style of writing is still there reminding me of the old times !!⭐️⭐️⭐️

Waiting for the next update !!

Cont soon !😊😊


Edited by jes_jade - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Heyy Samo😉😉

Whhoooaaa..!! That was cute..

Friendship with shades of Love😳😳😳



Ek disre ko Khaana khila rahe hain.. Awww😳😳😳

I love their fights.. thts the essence of their relationship😳😳😳

Waiting fr next update..

aur ek aur baat.. zyada soch mat😃 U write perfectly!!😉😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: jes_jade

Res !!! (Kitne din baad)

I wanted to be the first !! LOL !!😆😆

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*Unresed* Jessie...😃😃

Okk...This update is just fantastic !!!!👏👏👏 Sacchi... 😳😳😳

So much roothna & manana in a single update...I was like...OMG !! Both of them r so hot-headed !! Pata nahin kahan pahoonch dega inn dono ko inka gussa !!


Hehehe..don't know about Gussa but just wait for their love obvious full of hatred n anger lol😆😆😆

The last part..feeding each other was so sweet !!😳😳😳

Neha...as I said u haven't lost the touch...really ur style of writing is still there reminding me of the old times !!⭐️⭐️⭐️

Awww...luv yaaa yaar for such big comment that i remind you of our old days 😳😳😳

Waiting for the next update !!

Cont soon !😊😊

Continuing today..😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: prash_t

Heyy Samo😉😉

Whhoooaaa..!! That was cute..

Friendship with shades of Love😳😳😳



Ek disre ko Khaana khila rahe hain.. Awww😳😳😳

I love their fights.. thts the essence of their relationship😳😳😳

Waiting fr next update..

aur ek aur baat.. zyada soch mat😃 U write perfectly!!😉😉

Mrs.Thakur 😊😊😊

love yaa yaar...for such encouraging words 😳😳

know its forbidden but Thanks hehe😆😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks dear..😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi everyone...
its Friday...and am back with another updte of

"YOU ARE MINE"
"When i Saw you"

Part-VIII

Arpi-"Avi…khana hai ki nahi?" she shouted at him to bring him back to reality.

Avi-"Haan…h yaa ofcourse m hungry…" he came back into reality and ate the food quickly to coverup his state of mind.

Arpi-"Aree…tum to sacchi bhukhe ho…hahaha"

She said and burst into laughter, Avdhesh smiled at his own childish reaction.

They shared dinner together from same after long time and this way shared those moments just like they use to do in their childhood days...

After few minutes Shikha came up with Ice cream and the trio enjoyed it…

Avdhesh was having his ice cream when Arpita stopped him all sudden-

"Avi…ruko ruko…wat's that…"

Avdhesh-"Where?"

Arpita's hand reached to his nose tip-"Here.." and she put some ice cream at his nose tip… "Ha ha ha kuch nahi…gussa tha..ab thanda ho gaya…"

And she satteled her strand at her ear by same hand forgetting that there was still some ice-cream, she rubbed some ice-cream on her temple too.

Shika and Avdhesh both enjoyed her innocent foolishness.

Avi-"Haan…dikha raha hai…haha ab to tumhara bhi thanda ho gaya hoga…hahaha"

Unaware of her act's out come she had her ice –cream while brother –sister duo was enjoying the way she was having it. While Avdhesh wipped his nose just after the moment she put it there.

Shikha was bit surprised too to see them playing as they never had a fight ever before…after ice-cream it was time to bid good night , Shikha took utensils and left first...

Shikha-"Arpi..Come on we should sleep now..or we will be late for morning classes…RV will be here to pick us on time."

And she left.

While Arpita was still sitting on the same railing…enjoying the breeze and weather..-"Avi…look at the moon so beautiful naa…seems like trying to peep at someone from behind the clouds…hehehe"

Avi looked at moon then at her moon like face and smiled-"hun…seems so…and I can see something more then that…"

Arpi-"What?"

Avi-"That literature classes are really affecting you...haha come on go to sleep now its realy late now."

Arpita jumped down from railing and groaned at him-"BORING person…"

Avi-"Hey wait wait…" he stepped toward her and wiped the ice-cream from her temple by his finger. "Good Night."

Arpi-"Oh so dat was the reason you both were smiling at me…"

Avi-"Ha ha..yes what you were thinking hehehe…come on go now." By that time clouds covered the whole sky around them and it started to lighteing too…

Arpi-"wow Avi lagta hai Baarish hogi…"

Avi-"so what's to say Wow haha..Don't tell me you still love rain."

Arpi-"so…whats funny in that..Don't you love it now…remember…how much we enjoyed rains at palace!" and it remind her of those rains too when he was not there with her.

She stepped back to leave-"Ok..Good night..Sweet dreams…"

Avi-"Wha…uh…Good night" he didn't get what made her suddenly so upset, but he thought to not discuss and he too turn for his room.

Arpi-"Avi…." She stopped at first step and looked at him.

Avi-"Yes" he looked back at her.

"Sorry for what ever I said in collage." And she left without looking back at him.

Avdhesh was again surprised to see her behaviour, when he was talking about the same incident she was so stubborn and now without any reason she asked sorry for hurting him by her words.

They both were in their respective rooms but at the same time in other's mind too..Avdhesh was trying to sleep but he fined himself unable for it…as her face was appearing again and again in front of his eyes…after almost half an hour when he get that he can't sleep like that he sit back at his place and start thinking about his bet with Suraj…He thought a lot and find that he should not take any indecent bet like that specially when it was related to Arpita…

"What the hell I have done…I accepted his bet…why? Inspite of accepting it I should break his jaw…but …no I can't stop him by that…I need to make sure that Arpita is away from his reach..but the way she behaved today am sure he is not going to leave her…(at the same time the sky get filled with thunder and light and started to rain heavily…Avdhesh looked up at his window, it was open so he step down from his bed and closed the glass window.. but sat beside it..lost in his own thoughts..) What to do…shall I Talk to Arpita about this…? No…She is too stubborn, she will not get why am asking her to stay away from that guy…shall I tell her about our bet..!!! No..no ways…she should not get even a mere idea of my this foolishness..what will she think of me…so cheap..i will loose my best friend forever…Kya karun…ek kaam karta hun…kuch nahi karta hun…she did all that today to make me jealous….when I will be with her then How can he came near to her..but I have to make sure that she will never come to know about his intentions or she will do something stupid for sure …waise bhi I have whole year…may be mean while she can meet someone..who actually deserves her…(and with this his mind stopped working with a kind of shock, and realization, he found a way to save Arpita from Suraj by accompanying her always while keeping their bet a secret from her, but at the same time he realized that she had done everything to make him jealous..may be as punishment for not recognizing her at first sight…but was he really jealous…was his restlessness, pain…and all that anger was feel of jealousy! If yes then why?)

Avdhesh was shocked at his own realization…

"Leja leja re……haaannn le jaaa…ni muiyeee…ni muiyeee….

From somewhere the music get started Avdhesh was shocked to hear it at that hour of night…specially at terrace…and the surprisese were not over yet for him, next second he saw Arpita stepping in front of him, but certainly on the other side of window , She was there in the mid of terrace, she turned back toward him and waved someone to join her…for a second Avdhesh felt as she was calling him, but next second he realized that she can't see him as there were no lights in his room at that time and more then that he was standing behind dark glasses of window from where he can see the view of out side but she can't…she stepped ahead toward steps and drag out Shikha from the shade… and they just started to dance in the rain to enjoy it in her way…

(when Avdhesh was stucked with his own thoughts and it started to rain , in Arpita's room…

Arpi-"Uh seems I can't sleep tonight, all thanks to Avi…wait a sec, if I am unable to sleep how can he sleep peacefully, (She looked up at her window )Yes….Baarish…what else I can wish for right now…hahaha..Mr.Avdhesh Singh Thakur…I am coming to wake you up..hahaha"

She went to shikha and forcibly took her to dance with in rain…

She played her favourite song on her cell in full volume and placed it just next to Avdhesh's room, just to wake him up.)

"Leja leja re mehki raat me chura ke sare rang le jaa…

rati ratii me bheegun saath me tu aise mulakaat de ja,

le ja leeja re…"

She started her dance and moved gracefully away from his window (from where Avdheh was staring at her mesmerized ) and looked back at him as she could see him…

"Ni muiye maila man mera kya karma aisa rang gora jo piya nahi bhayeee…."

Now shikha join her and she acted the male voice nicely. But these lyrics remind Arpi about Avi's indifference …and she actually got emotional, she looked at his window but find herself unable to him there and her eyes get flooded…

"ni muiye… man maila,

man maila kya karma hai aisa,

na bhaye piya ko tan gora kya krna hai aisa"

She stepped close to his window and placed her palm on it…co-incidentally Avi was standing just at the other side of same spot, unknowingly he too placed his palm on hers, there was just a mere sheet of glass among them

, but Arpita was unaware of the fact that Avdhesh was so close to her, she thought She failed in her attempt to woke him…and she stepped back with jolt and joind Shikha back, they swirled around few times, splashing water on other…

"Le ja le ja…"

There play remind her of her childhood rain dances when she use to dance with Avdhesh, and for her delight he never denied for it even many times it was him who dragged her to garden or terrace to enjoy in rain.

She find herself stucked in the pool of memories once again…

"Chahun paas paas aana,

koi dhundh ke bahana,

Tumhe apna maana…

(Shikha noticed the change of emotions on her face and inquired her by raising eyebrows at her with wonder, a tear rolled down at her cheek, but this time only after getting mixed with water drops…Arpita quickly subpressed her emotions and smiled at her…)

chahe ruthe ye zamana chae mare jag tana

Tumko hai paana…"

She determined something in her mind while looking straight into his eyes unknowingly…while Avi was feeling as she can see him and talking straight to him, but this time there were no question in his mind as it has already stopped working by the moment he saw her stepping in open rain.

"Ni muiye saari raaton ki kahani koi to hogi jo jaage tare raaton ko jo jaage jogi…"

Again Shikha played the male part, but this time teasing Arpi, inquiring for the reason, that she woked her up to dance in rain at the mid of night, she (Shikha banged her shoulder with her's and broke her revere as she was still gazing at his window) arpita looked at her with an innocent smile, and as she turned to Shikha,Avi realized that he was lost in her eyes and he too smiled at his foolish thought, he knows well she could n't see him in the darkness of his room.

Arpita placed her arms on her shoulders , looked straight into her eyes and started to sing with song..

"Ni muiye hoti hai kuch baaten hoti hai raaton me…

Jo jaage hai jogi(indicated at herself than to Shikha)

ya tare jaage hain raaton mee…

Le jaa lejaaa…….."

And she swirled with a broad smile, looking up at sky, feeling drops at her face…

While Shikha started to drag her to go to their rooms…

Shikha-""Arpi..chal naa ab..ho gaya tera dance, come on you forced me so I came…"

Arpi-"Come on yaar ab aai hai to have fun naa…itni zaldi bhi kya hai room me jaane ki?"

Shikha-"Arpi I agreed as I know if I allowed you to come alone you will not return, until it stops raining, and I feel its not going to stop soon, come on chalo ab or you will get fever."

And she dragged her hardly…she was going with shikha but her eyes were fixed at his window in a mere hope to see him. While Avdhesh was constanly gazing at her mesmerized, when she disappered from his sight…

Avdhesh-"Arpi…don't know why…but I can't let you stay alone…jo bhi ho…don't care what you will think of me if it came out…but I will be always there between you and Suraj. "



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Posted: 13 years ago
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ooohoo !!! 😲i came here to comment on ur earlier post 😃 n wow i got to know abt ur new update es ka matlab may be m the last to comment fr last update 😔 but wuld be the fisrt for ths update yeeepppeee🥳😆
dekho m so happy with ur update 😉 😆 well liked both the updated 👏 👏
last wala update was just awesome 👍🏼 what a cute fight 😳 aur usske baad their frndship tooo😳 😎
Really feeling bad for Avi...😔 he is having a tough time Arpi usse ek ke baad ek jhatke dee rahi hai 😆 kabhi fight toh to kahi no fight 😆 usse kuch samajh hi nahi aaraha ki vo kya kare..
ye wala update is just wow!! 👏 lovely again..😳 only ths time feeling bad for Arpi 😔
etni planning ki but Avi.. just wont join thm in rain dance😡 abhi bhi confuse hai...😕 last part khana saath khaya n now ice-cream gud 😳 😆 best part is Avi now accepts the bet he took was wrong 🤔 kuch bhi now they both r frnds n hope they will stay like that atleast for sometime.😆
hmmm Avi's fav song "lega lega" is my fav song too haun 😆 hey m not joking haa, nahi saach mein i like ths song n i wanted to download it if u hv any link or site name thn do tell me 😊
n waiting for next lovely update








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Posted: 13 years ago
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What the ???😲😲

I didn't receive any PM for this ??
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Neha !!!!!!🤗🤗

It was an awesome musical update !!!!!!!😉👏👏

I can imagine the song sequence playing in front of my eyes..& the scenes dat u wrote were really emotional & perfect...

I m really happy dat they have solved their fights...but just have this weird feeling dat this bet is going to be the cause of another fight...*hope not*

Loved the update!!⭐️⭐️

Waiting for next !!

Love ya !!🤗🤗

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