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Posted: 13 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: coolpavni

This time too its meee first ;p and its awesome... di thru ur writing only i cud feel how avi wud hav felt whn suraj interrupted his talk wid arpi...!! wow wow dance competition...!!! i'd love reading dat portions but please di...woh suraj k sath arpi ka dance nai...arpi ko toh avi k sath dance karna chahiye... :) will b waiting for next...



Congos for the first Position again Pavni 😆😆😆
So Nice of you dear..that you chk for it so eagerly 😳
n Big thanks for liking it too😳

about Competition hehe its going to be a real competition hun

just wait n watch...lots of twists r thr😳

hope you will like them too 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: suvarnaawt

very nice updts👍🏼 ab fir se avi n arpi mai zagda hoga😒



Thanks Dear...

about jhagda n ol hehe just wait n watch

btw thes fites r signs of thr luv 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: MuktaJaiswal

Neha superb update yaar 👏 liked all tha Avita -convo.. the fight ...😃 gr8 going haun 😳 it seems now something is cooking between the two... 😳will they be falling in love or will be enemies..😉

I wounder 🤔 is Arpi's suspicion abt Ria true...😕 ..is she hiding the real Ria frm Avi.😲 ...the evil ...bad Ria...🤢
Quickly update the next m waiting...




Thank you Di 😳

hehe lot s of cooking between them 😉 just chk out the coming updtes 😉
about Ria hehe cn't say nything right now 😕

and now am waiting for your comments Di 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
Hello Frns...😳
here is another update of
"YOU ARE MINE"

PART XI

Avdhesh was confused to what to do, how to stop Suraj, how to make Arpita understand, so he thought to stop her from participating in dance compition as he knows well that it would be a golden chance for Suraj to came close to her.At dinner table…

Avdhesh-"Arpi…I think you sould concentrate on your studies more then anything else at this time."

Arpita-"And why you so? Baba aap hi batao…wahan Lalanpur me Hume aise compitions me participate karne ka mauka kahan milta tha…aur wahan to Papa bhi allow nahi karte…as he thinks…" and her face turn pale with gloom.

Baba-"Oh hoo…Humari rani bitiya udaas kyun ho rahi hai!...tum zaroor participate karo beta…and m sure ke will win it for your collage" and he put his hand with affection on her forhead and her face get bloomed with happiness… while Avdhesh found himself helpless to stop her from participating.

Shikha-"Aree Baba, first of all she have to get selected "

Baba-"Humari Arpi zaroor select hogi…dekhna…par beta Dance compition hai to you will dance alone or in group?"

Arpi left her chair and hugged baba from back of his chair and replied happily-"my baba is best…can't say baba…nothing is fixed yet…Avi ne to mana hi kar diya tha hume participate karne se."

And she made face at Avdhesh…

And they all enjyed it except Avi as he was more worried about her now, what if suraj get selected for Arpi's dance partner…!

Once again Avdhesh spend a sleepless night and again early morning he went to see Arpita in her room.

Avi-"Arpi…" he knocks at door and waited for reply but she didn't reply so after few mins he knocked again and enters the room... "Arpi…are you there?"

And he stepped toward the bath room's door to knock it. But before he can knock, it get opens…

Arpi-"Aree Avi..tum…itni der se awaaze laga rahe the kya ho gaya? Itni subah subah Humari yaad kyun aa gai ji?"

she crossed him while drying her wet hairs by rubbing towel in them…she was wearing white kurti with pink flowers on it, tiny drops of water were falling on her cheeks through her wet strands, she was blooming like a fresh rose when she crossed him, the scent of her hairs attracted Avdhesh and he forgot for what he had came to see her..mesmerized by her beauty..he was just following her in whole room as she was controlling him with some invisible thread…while she was just getting ready for collage.She arranged all her books, pens,notes one by one almost running between shelves and cupboard…while Avdhesh was just gazing at her, following her silently…

Arpi-"Avi…koi kaam hai to bolo naa…tumhari Girl friend bhi aa hi rahi hogi..fir tum kahoge ke mai usee pasand nahi karti n all.."

And finally she stood still infront of mirror and threw her wet hairs on once side to dry them up with dryer…its droplets felled on Avdhesh's eyes and broke his reveire.

Avi-"Hun…uh…nothing…" he took his eyes off from her for a second and scolded himself for behaving like and idiot..and tried to continue "aaj Indian…is there anything special?"

Arpi continueing with her hairstyle-"why I can't wear Indian? Am I looking odd?"

Avi-"No No I didn't mean that…you are looking...good…"-

Arpi-turned around and looked at him with surprise "Avi…are you OK…"

Avi-"Yeah..why you asked so?"

Arpi came a step close to him and with a cute smile she said-"for the first time in life..you said something good about Me! Vo bhi mere saamne! Kuch to gadbad hai…."

Avi by now he controlled himself well-"Chal chal..inta bhi bhav nahi kha…I just said Good OK…waise bhi subah subah apna hair style thodi hi naa khrab karwana hai tujhse…chal get ready and come fast….My girl friend must be waiting for me down there naa." And he winked at her to tease her and cover his real condition to see her like that and he starts to leave the room.

Arpi-"Aree…ruko too…I know your girl friend is waiting for you…but at least you can help your old friend naa…"

She turned around and collected her hairs from back at one side "please Avi ye dori bandh do naa…ye Shikha bhi naa koi simple sa suit nahi de saki…pata nahi ye kya de diya hai." While she was saying all this Avdhesh stepped close to her and took the dori's of from her back and started to tie them at the back of her neck…but his all mind get fixed on a drop of water falling from a strand to another and before it can reach her neck he catched it on his finger tip. He smiled to himself which get noticed by Arpita in mirror.

Arpi-"Kya Avi…am dying of nervousness and you are smileing! Avi…do you really don't want me to participate in compition?"

She asked with all her innocence.

Avi hide that drop in his fist and looked up at her-"do you really want to do it? Will it make you happy?"

Arpi-"Yes…I want to."

Avi-"OK..if it will make you happy then I am ok with it…All the best for auditions." He held her shoulders firmly from back and assured her for his support.

Arpi smiled whole heartly-"all The Best …yahin par..are not you coming for auditions?"

Avi-"I don't think so.."

Arpi-"come on Avi…you are coming..and that's final…you were asking naa Is there anything special! Yes there is….i wanna be perfect today…I wanna be get selected and if you will not come who will cheer for me?"

Avi-"why it matters for you so much Arpi?"

Arpi-"Uh…it matters..you will not get it…you are coming naa!"

Avi turns to leave –"can't say..but will try for you."

Arpi-"only try!! OK…mat aa…Suraj to hoga naa….i will try to impress him..he will cheer for me."

Her words gave him a shock and a reason to stop.

Avi-"What?"

Arpi-"Hun…see he said he will be there whenever I need him…waise bhi if I get selected to perform to usi ke saath karma hoga naa…"

Avdhesh got a sudden shock as he realized what was going to happen.

Arpi-"waise kuch bhi kaho Suraj me baat to hai…hai naa Avi…"

Avi-"All the best for you and your Suraj." And he left the room in anger again…everything was going against his thoughts…Arpi was attracting toward Suraj and he found himself unable to stop her or him, but how can he accept Suraj's victory …its not so easy for Avdhesh it was about Arpita…not any thing or person but Arpita!!! He didn't realized when he rode his bike and reacked collage, attended all lectures without exchanging a single word to anyone. When all lectures got over and girls left them to attend auditions he get back to himself.

Avi-"Chulbul…chal…"

Chulbul-"theek hai bhaiya ..par kahan?"

RV-"Avi..kya hua? Kahan jaana hai? Subah se dekh raha hun..khoya khoya sa hai? What's the prob?"

Avi get burst in anger-"What's the prob!! As you don't know it RV…am going..if any of you want…can come..if you don't then it's OK."

And he left them while they all followed him with quick steps.

At the audition hall…

All girls gave there audition, there dance and drama profferssor was takeing there auditions Arpita was already got selected in top 5 girls . they all get selected for practises as there teacher have decided to send only one couple for a ball room dance from their collage, and auditins for guys were going on…

Shikha-"wow Arpi…you got selected..mazaa ayega."

Simple-"congos girl..you too got selected hun…"

Arpi-"Hun…maza to ayega…but aur bhi maza aata agar tumhara vo stupid bhai bhi hota atleast rehersals me uski taang kheechne me to maza aati."

"woo girls…kiski taang khechne ki taiyari ho rahi thi..kahin humari to nahi..!" all sudden Suraj took the chair next to Arpi, smiling at Her.

Arpi-"Nothing…Suraj…aap.."

Suraj-"don't tell me you were not xpecting me! I may your dance partner yaar…may be kya… I will be…I will make you perfect…and we both will rock the stage."

"Oh…really…as you had done last year!" a voice came from their back seat. And a voice echoed the audition hall..

"Next is Avdhesh Singh Thakur"

Everyone was surprised to hear his name for auditions.

Suraj-"Avdhesh! Is he participating?"

"Yes Suraj…. " and Avdhesh appeared at their back seat "surprise..surprise….its not going to be so easy for you this year dear…because I am not going to take my name back like last time."

And he left them to give his auditions…when he was performing on stage all girls present in the hall was gushing over his looks, his moves, his style and at the end of it hall roared with sound of applause.

Shikha-"I never knew that Bhai dances so well!"

Suraj was frawning over him while Arpi was just looking everthing with a soft smile over her face as nothing was happeing which could surprise her.

Simple-"there's a lot about your brother which can surprise you even we get surprise often just like today…on one of us knew that he will come..and see..he just steal the show…god knows who will match him. How will professor find his match at floor."

Arpi to herself-"I know that."

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This is all for this Update

hope you liked it

please leave your precious comments😳



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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
Di...its again MEEE First...awsm update di...woah !! As i expected avi s also participating... :) hmmm ab ayega maza...! suraj ke liye toh sapna ho jayega yeh compt. aur bet jeetna...n u knw wat di ? Whn i was reading abt avi's dance na...tab ashu ji ka dance mere samne aa raha tha...n aapne bilkul theek likha hai all d girls bilkul flat ho jaate hey unke dance dekhkar...me toh love to see him dance,..woh bhi arpi k sath ho toh...maza aajata hey :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
Hiee Samo.. As expected .. M here 😉😉😉😉😉😉

So.. Dance competition ha...😛😛😛

I know Avi will win,... Bt more importantly I want Avi to be with Arpi.. as dance partner!!!!😉😉

Hey, FF writer.. pleej make them together na😃😃😃


His moves I can imagine well😉😉😉

Loved it!!! 👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
Morning everyone...
here is your Update for

YOU ARE MINE

PART –XII

Next day was to start the preps of compition their dance teacher was chewing the cud as he had a tought job to find a partner for Avdhesh, who can match him on floor as well as in looks, as it was matter of their collage's reputation in compition. He didn't want to take any chance like last time.

First of all he went to Avdhesh as soon as He entered the rehersal hall with Arpita and whole gang.

Teacher-"I am really happy to see that you are taking part this time Avdhesh…just hope that you will not back off at last moment like last time."

Everyone was surprised to hear that Avdhesh has backed off…except his old gang.

Avdhesh-"No Sir certainly not …(gave a cold look to Suraj who was already reharsaling with a random girl.)Not this time. You don't worry."

Ria murmered to herself-"Avdhesh Ji and backed off…I wonder why he had done that?"

Arpita was next to her-"You don't need to worry this time Ria darling, this time he will certainly not…Main hun naa."

And Arpita approached to the teacher while others took their place selected once on stage and others to their chairs.

After few minutes the teacher started to announce the pairs for dance…

Suraj-"Boom Boom….Boom Boom..ha ha ha..your heart must be at its highest pace isn't it Avi?"

Avdhesh-"and why you think so?"

Suraj-"Ah…I forgot..i am talking to Avdhesh singh Thakur..who never accepts his defeat..unless he tastes it bitterly…arpita is going to be my partner…and your participation is going to be meaningless."

Avdhesh-"stop your day dreaming Suraj. Though all names have been announced but theres yet one more girl eceptp arpi …may be for you. And as far as I know Her…she has already seen your real face last year. So no chance for you even with her."

Suraj-"Even I am not interested in any random Girl avi…for me Arpi is the only one specialy after your Bet…she is like a drug to me now. " Avdhesh glared at him when he called her as 'Arpi'

Avdhesh-"Arpita…her name is Arpita….she is Arpi for Me only. Never you dare to cross your limit."

Suraj-"wooo woo..am scared…just wait for few days…I bet before our compition she will be my official Girl Friend. All she need is to spend few time, few close moments with me…obvious in your absence, as I know you will not be able to see her with me…(Avdhesh was controlling his anger as he don't want to show it in front of everyone) chill yaar don't be so angry."

"And the fourth pair is Suraj and Smita."

Avdhesh-"Congos Suraj…you got your partner…you can give rest to your imaginative mind…4th pair is you and Smita…that mean it's Me and Arpi."

Suraj got paired with someone else and there were only Avdhesh and Arpita .

Avdhesh left Suraj with a victorious smile at his lips while Arpita stepped up the stage to join him.

The Teacher made an announcement:-

"OK everyone…listen to me carefully…as you all know well that we are going to send only one pair to represent our collage in the compition so you all have to give your best in practice sessions…as I will choose only two among all of you, and if your partner is not doing well, or you think isn't matching you, don't need to bother nothing is fixed yet…I will announce the final pair afer few practice sessions…comone lets start with the music. "

And he played the music and instructed all off them (pairs) to come on the floor one by one and dance according to their will, without any choreography as he wanted to check their chemistry as a couple on floor only…most of them danced like strangers, compelled to move here and there together while Suraj was getting over friendly with his partner, on the other hand…when rest four couples were done, Avdhesh appeared from one side of stage and approached to her, smiled at Arpi , looked straight into her eyes and offered her his hand without any word.

In response to his gesture she gave her hand in his, next moment, his arm was around her waiste and they were dancing like a perfect couple, eye in eye with a beautiful, delicate smile on their lips as they had done it many times before while it was the first time that they were dancing together, and so close. Arpita was so comfortable in his hands. And when the music stopped everyone was watching at them spell bound as they have seen something magical…even they forgot to clap for them. It was Shikha who excalamed with joy…

"Wow…Arpi…Bhaiya…I can't belive it…you guys were so perfect…just bang on…mean on each beat…you both were fantastic...I can't believe that you both can look so calm together…I mean atleast I have never seen you both like that ever."

She ran to them and hugged them one by one.

Arpi-"Really! Was it good.?"

Teacher -"Good!! You both make perfect couple…I think I have to work on my choreography as you both will excute it excellently. "

Avdhesh and Arpita both looked up at eachother smiled, while Arpi blushed a bit at his words. And they both said together-"Thankyou Sir…we will try our best."

And everyone start to leave the hall as all off them get that who was going to represent their collage…Avdhesh and Arpita. And they had no objection with it as all of them had seen their performenc. Except one person…suraj he was wondering that how it happened? How the teacher made their pair?

When they all were leaving, Arpita asked for excuse and went to meet their teacher…Avdhesh follwed her silently.

Arpi-"Excuse me sir…"

Teacher-"Yes Arpita…"

Arpi-"Vo Sir…I just want to Thank you…for the favor.."

Teacher-"Oh…no need to thank dear…even I should thank you…if you haven't told me that Avdhesh is your childhood friend and that you will be most comfortable with him…I don't think I could get such a perfect pair to represent our collage…"

When Avdhesh heared that Arpi had asked to make his pair with her, he was bit surprised and felt so happy that she preferred Him over that Suraj or anyone else.

Arpi-"Thankyou Sir…and I am assuring you on both of our behalf that we will do our best…and our collage will win this competition."

Teacher-"Ah…On both's behalf! Hahaha..that's good…all the best."

Arpi felt as she had said something which she shouldn't said in front of a teacher.

Arpi-"Sorry sir if I have said something wrong…actually I can say this on his behalf as I will not let him rest even at home…just practice, practice and practice."

Teacher-"Its Ok…now go I think your friend is waiting for you. Isn't Avdhesh?" he had seen Avdhesh much before.

Avdhesh-"No Sir I just came now…Come on Arpi…RV and Shikha is waiting for you."

Arpita was bit surprised and emberassed to find him behind her self….she was bothering for only one thing what if he asked her… 'Why She asked to get paired with Him?' what will she reply…she was only praying that Avdhesh hadn't listened her full conversation with the teacher.

All this was going in her mind and heart while they were heading toward RV's car where Shikha and RV were waiting for her while Avdhesh was just looking at her now and then with a side glance and feeling like blush and at the same time a strange happiness.

At the end of walk when they were just few steps away from the car, finaly Avdhesh broke the silence with a cute smile…

"Arpi…ek baat puchu?"

Arpi-"Hun…pucho…"

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So..how was it...

hit like if you liked it..😉

Thanks for reading..😳


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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
Me phirst !!!!

Yayyy... Ooohhh... I can see someone happy .. Bt not admitting... Avi is happy caz of Arpi... He is happy tht Arpi wanted him to be her partner... Bt he is not at all amitting... He wont also... Jab tak he wont realise Hez in love...

Koi na... Atleast they are partners nw... ;-)

He has already won bet... Arpi was his nd only his frm the begining...

Lalalala... M happy...

Lovely update darling...

Samo jaldi update karna ;-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ooohhh...!! Its...its...AWESOMEEE...!!! Dis ff is really close to me di...i've told u many times dt i'm lovin it... :) :) Avi...avi...main kya bolu ? Fida ho gayi... :P hehehe :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: prash_t

Me phirst !!!!

Yayyy... Ooohhh... I can see someone happy .. Bt not admitting... Avi is happy caz of Arpi... He is happy tht Arpi wanted him to be her partner... Bt he is not at all amitting... He wont also... Jab tak he wont realise Hez in love...

Koi na... Atleast they are partners nw... ;-)

He has already won bet... Arpi was his nd only his frm the begining...

Lalalala... M happy...

Lovely update darling...

Samo jaldi update karna ;-)



Hey Ma Mrs. Thakur...😃
Yap Avi is happy...and so is Arpi..😳
but about Bet hehehahaha...just wait and watch...😉
Hope you will like the coming updates too...will update by monday 😳

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