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PrashT

@PrashT

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

"Chahaa hai tujhe kuch yun ...ke

Ye mohabbat hi nahi Ibaadat hogi..

Jo chahaa kisi aur ko tune..

Khuda kasam , Kayamat se pehle kayamat hogi..."

Ayee Hayyeee.. This one was chumeshwari lines😉😉😛

waah waah!! Description of his inner turmoil👏👏👏 Fab!!!

Tu toh dhamekedaar writer hai😉😉😉 Awesome..

Bitwa ko pyaar hui gava hai😉😉 Maan le Avdheshwa. U are in looove...

Oh God.. Shikha nad Arpi are such cutie pies yaa... 😉😉 Banging their plates ... hehehehehe..

Bitwa ne toh "Kiss" ki bet bhi le li Ab kya hoga.. Bitwa jeetega ya fir wo paglu🤢

Plzzz let Bitwa win yaar,.. Plzz.. I want tht Kiss

Update soon... M waiting😉😉

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joliefille

@joliefille

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Cuty16
Nice part jo,
loved avi's anger dis time more,
his pain is really cant be described
to anyone or to himself b'coz he himself don't know how much he loves arpi.
But i am little bit worried for arpi.
Hope everythings goes well.
Will wait dear for d next one.

Hey Rups 😊
thanks yaar...😳
about Avdhesh's feelings hehe
can't say he luvs her of just worried as a Friend 😉
going to Update the promo for next updte let me know hwz it 😳

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joliefille

@joliefille

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: MuktaJaiswal

Heeelllooo!!! 🤗 Hiii Di 😃

I was so very right!!!!! Just as I thought bikul dil ko chulenewala update...❤️ 😳Very touchy yaar❤️👏 awww thankyou sooo much 😳😳😳
Poor Avi, 😔is with a war with himself. Personally I felt he shouldn't have taken that bet, 😒however he isn't himself.😔 Not thinking what's wrong or right.
Ya di you are right Avdhesh is not in himself and can't promise he vl b bck to himself soon or not evn ever hehehe 😆😆😆
Just thinking what will be Apri's reaction... 😳 when he talks about Suraj with her 🤔will they be friends...🥳 or will fight again... 😲''😉...😆
hehe...Di have a look first how will he talk to her about that matter 😉

Waiting for more such interesting Update ''''..😳
going to add the Preview of next UD hope you will find it worthy to wait 😳

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joliefille

@joliefille

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: jes_jade
I forgot to tell u...ur Avatar in profile pic...is totally awesome & cool... reminded me of why we used to love & drool over Ashish in GKD forum...from unmarried to married women... !!!!! 🤣🤣

I miss those days !!! 😭😭

awww...you liked it (may b bz its Avi's hehe 😆) i made it on ma PC mean off line softwr😳
yaar those days
wat to say...abhi to yaaden hi bachi hain 😭😭😭
but who knows may be we ol Drooling ppl can meet some othr forum 😉😉
and agar nahi bhi so wat atleast we have those luvly memories of our crazy discussions hehehe 😆😆😆
awww me too miss it yaar 😕😕

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joliefille

@joliefille

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: prash_t

"Chahaa hai tujhe kuch yun ...ke

Ye mohabbat hi nahi Ibaadat hogi..

Jo chahaa kisi aur ko tune..

Khuda kasam , Kayamat se pehle kayamat hogi..."
Ayee Hayyeee.. This one was chumeshwari lines😉😉😛
awww...m blushing that you liked it 😳😳😳
waah waah!! Description of his inner turmoil👏👏👏 Fab!!!

Tu toh dhamekedaar writer hai😉😉😉 Awesome..

He he me and dhamakedaar writer 😆😆 and what about you hun 😉 ma romance queen ❤️

Bitwa ko pyaar hui gava hai😉😉 Maan le Avdheshwa. U are in looove...

Aree ji Avdheshwa hai aise kaise maan jai 😉

Oh God.. Shikha nad Arpi are such cutie pies yaa... 😉😉 Banging their plates ... hehehehehe..

He he yap bz She wanna live her childhood which she spend in missing them 😊

Bitwa ne toh "Kiss" ki bet bhi le li Ab kya hoga.. Bitwa jeetega ya fir wo paglu🤢

Paglu yaa Bitwa ei to waqt batai hehe 😆😆

Plzzz let Bitwa win yaar,.. Plzz.. I want tht Kiss

Hehehe...for you Mrs.Thakur thr will be alot of scenes hehehe😆😆

Update soon... M waiting😉😉

M adding Pre...abhi ehi se kaam chalawa...updatewa Friday ka karab
Luv yaa dear😳😳😳

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joliefille

@joliefille

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Hey everyone thankyou sooo much for liking previous Update and your comments 😃
😃here is the pre for next Update hope you will like it too 😳
"You Are Mine..."
When I Met You part -VII

"If you have done with your I can n can't can we have dinner Bhaiya?"

Shikha sat by his side and placed the dinner on the table next to her, while Arpita was just standing at the door leaning to it and staring him…

Shikha's voice made Avdhesh realizes that he was not alone in the room, and so of his tear filled eyes. He flipped and pressed his face into the pillow next to him to wipe his tears so they may not know about it and replied

"told you naa m not hungry…leave me alone Shikha…I don't want to spoil your mood."

"Yeah Shikha..tu jaa…he want to spoil my mood only, or I should leave too because some baby wanna cry alone now!"

Arpita popped in to taunt Avi…which worked this time and he sits back firmly as nothing was wrong…

Avi-"Uh really Arpita Ji…you wanna cry kya?"

Arpita gave him an angry look as he called her ARPITA JI but controlled herself some how-"NO. Certainly not …and why should I? I thought Mr Avdhesh Singh Thakur wanna cry alone."

She stepped in toward Avdhesh …roaring this time.

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this is all for coming Update on this friday

hope you will like it😳

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Jessie

@jes_jade

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

I didn't get PM for this Precap update !!!😲😲

Okk...sounds interesting..Sher & Sherni bas mauka dhoondte hain ladne k liye...😆😆

& Neha..u haven't lost ur touch in writing...if u have written this now !!!😳😳

Will be waiting for the update !!😊😊

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Jessie

@jes_jade

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: joliefille

awww...you liked it (may b bz its Avi's hehe 😆) i made it on ma PC mean off line softwr😳
yaar those days
wat to say...abhi to yaaden hi bachi hain 😭😭😭
but who knows may be we ol Drooling ppl can meet some othr forum 😉😉
and agar nahi bhi so wat atleast we have those luvly memories of our crazy discussions hehehe 😆😆😆
awww me too miss it yaar 😕😕

Yeah..I just visit GKD forum..& open our topics..Gangster of the week wale posts...& al our crazy posts...& laugh...& then cry !!!😭😭😭