SS:Like father like kids part 4 page 13 - Page 3

aww how cute :) ..!! great update !

Haha another cute chapter!

So sweet!

Avi thats beautiful...loved it...a request...plz involve khuhsi also in their discussions...thanks for the pm :)))))))))

How totally cute!! LOVE that line... "He WAS actually"!! LOL

firstly your tittle is tooo cute 😊
it was really sweet. asmara is definitely a pampered daughter 😛😉
loved each and evry dialogue of their conversation one can actually imagine them saying all this since u write it so beautifully 😳👏
arnav is doing things which are just not expected from him and mind it heis doing it wonderfully..
ashar's attitiude was so cool...
continue soon wanna read more😃

Arghhh!! I'm late again! What is wrong with me! I specially asked you to PM me first and I'm the one who comments last! Sorry! 😔 😉 Actually when I came online, this had already reached page 4 and I was so annoyed at myself that I decided not to res a post cos what was the point? I was already too late but I'm regretting that a bit now 🤣

Ok, So coming to the OS, First of all, I fell in love with the title! It was sooo apt for the OS and the OS was simply WOWWW!! I loved it sooo much! Infact, I think I enjoyed reading this one even more than the previous one... And trust me I loved that one to bits! 😛

The father daughter convo was so Awesome, so mind blowing, sooo adorable! I was thinking how Arnav will get Asmara talking to him again but the way he did it, by telling her the story of her birth and all, was just too good! I loved loved loved loved loved it!! 😃

And then Cool dude Ashar intruding at the perfect moment with his mom! And saying, 'I love you too sis' was sooo like Ashar! I never think of Ashar as a guy who would run up to his sister and hug her... It was just so brilliant.

The ending was the most perfect everrr!! The line 'Actually He WAS' was Perfecttt! I LOVEDDD IT!! ❤️

Avi, You're an awesome writer!! Please do write more on these 2 if you can 😳 I loved reading your works! 😛 And thanks for the PM 😆

Originally posted by: Fazila~

Avi thats beautiful...loved it...a request...plz involve khuhsi also in their discussions...thanks for the pm :)))))))))

Will definetely try to involve her more... Thanks 🤗

Originally posted by: aaliyahassan

firstly your tittle is tooo cute 😊
it was really sweet. asmara is definitely a pampered daughter 😛😉
loved each and evry dialogue of their conversation one can actually imagine them saying all this since u write it so beautifully 😳👏
arnav is doing things which are just not expected from him and mind it heis doing it wonderfully..
ashar's attitiude was so cool...
continue soon wanna read more😃

Thank you... its only because you like it sooo much that I feel like writing more...
it was only supposed to be an OS... even if you people are baised😛

Originally posted by: SmileyStar

Arghhh!! I'm late again! What is wrong with me! I specially asked you to PM me first and I'm the one who comments last! Sorry! 😔 😉 Actually when I came online, this had already reached page 4 and I was so annoyed at myself that I decided not to res a post cos what was the point? I was already too late but I'm regretting that a bit now 🤣

no prob... i would've liked if you commented first but then this is not so bad😛

Ok, So coming to the OS, First of all, I fell in love with the title! It was sooo apt for the OS and the OS was simply WOWWW!! I loved it sooo much! Infact, I think I enjoyed reading this one even more than the previous one... And trust me I loved that one to bits! 😛

Thank you sooo much...🤗 i never thought this one would go sooo well...

The father daughter convo was so Awesome, so mind blowing, sooo adorable! I was thinking how Arnav will get Asmara talking to him again but the way he did it, by telling her the story of her birth and all, was just too good! I loved loved loved loved loved it!! 😃

I'm soo glad... i mean the idea, the characters are all yours so... you loving it would mean its good😳

And then Cool dude Ashar intruding at the perfect moment with his mom! And saying, 'I love you too sis' was sooo like Ashar! I never think of Ashar as a guy who would run up to his sister and hug her... It was just so brilliant.

Thats my favourite part... obviously he cannot go and hug his sis... thats sooo not him...😛

The ending was the most perfect everrr!! The line 'Actually He WAS' was Perfecttt! I LOVEDDD IT!! ❤️

hehehe... ya it was one good thing... Asmara easily maan gayi to Arnav se digest nahi ho raha...😆

Avi, You're an awesome writer!! Please do write more on these 2 if you can 😳 I loved reading your works! 😛 And thanks for the PM 😆

Thank you... again... baap re... itni tareef... i'm all red... 😳