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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing update!

The bond between the family is really touching 😳
Haha loved the way the siblings defended each other.
Awesome work 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ohhh Fabulous ending Avi!! 😳 I'm so glad you wrapped it up so nicely 😛 loved the ending with the bro-sis moment! It was so sweet! 😳 and AWWW he called her kid!! Sooo adorable! 😳

I loved how Khushi mentions Ashar's fight after every 2 seconds 😆 I'm sure she's going to be exactly like this! My favorite line of hers was 'Why is the world set on corrupting my poor children? 🤣 🤣 This is sooo Khushi!! 😛

Hehehe! Ashar knows the kinda novels Asmara reads, huh? 😉 I loved how he explained by giving an example of Cinderalla. Very smart kid 😳

Overall, Fabulous ending! Loved Ashar-Arnav bonding at the end ❤️ I loved how you showed us a little of all relations 😳 Awesome SS, Fantastically ended 😛 Pls write more if you can! I loved reading this one 🤗

P.S. Extremely sorry for the late reply! I actually read the update ages ago and forgot to comment and when I saw you scrap, I was like Oh Crappp! 🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
#93
like button not working... so add me too...
loved it...
awesome...
loved brother and sister bonding...
nicely written...
thanks for the update dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#94
awww.. the brother and sister bonding was beautiful.. i didnt feel like reading a story... but it was like quite natural conversation between an elder brother and younger sister.
brilliant writing avi.. hatsoff.
i wish to read more about ashar and asmara.
thank you soo much for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#95
loved it yar
its was really funny and cute
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow awsuuum ending dear...really loved it n thnx 4da pm dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#97
superb, love the relationship between bro-sis and all 4 of them are so cute.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98
Wow...amazing.
khushi being strict with her kids while arnav is spoiling them. Seems like their roles have reversed when it comes to their kids.
If possible, please continue with thie fic further
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@Avi64: Awesum n fantastic SS!!!!😊

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