SS:Like father like kids part 4 page 13

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ShiningStar18

@ShiningStar18

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#91

Amazing update!

The bond between the family is really touching 😳

Haha loved the way the siblings defended each other.

Awesome work 🤗

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Fari

@SmileyStar

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+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#92

Ohhh Fabulous ending Avi!! 😳 I'm so glad you wrapped it up so nicely 😛 loved the ending with the bro-sis moment! It was so sweet! 😳 and AWWW he called her kid!! Sooo adorable! 😳

I loved how Khushi mentions Ashar's fight after every 2 seconds 😆 I'm sure she's going to be exactly like this! My favorite line of hers was 'Why is the world set on corrupting my poor children? 🤣 🤣 This is sooo Khushi!! 😛

Hehehe! Ashar knows the kinda novels Asmara reads, huh? 😉 I loved how he explained by giving an example of Cinderalla. Very smart kid 😳

Overall, Fabulous ending! Loved Ashar-Arnav bonding at the end ❤️ I loved how you showed us a little of all relations 😳 Awesome SS, Fantastically ended 😛 Pls write more if you can! I loved reading this one 🤗

P.S. Extremely sorry for the late reply! I actually read the update ages ago and forgot to comment and when I saw you scrap, I was like Oh Crappp! 🤣

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sweetysaran

@sweetysaran

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#93

like button not working... so add me too...

loved it...

awesome...

loved brother and sister bonding...

nicely written...

thanks for the update dear...

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dimple288

@dimple288

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#94

awww.. the brother and sister bonding was beautiful.. i didnt feel like reading a story... but it was like quite natural conversation between an elder brother and younger sister.

brilliant writing avi.. hatsoff.

i wish to read more about ashar and asmara.

thank you soo much for the pm