Dev-Meenu's new FF , !!Undying love!!PT7,Pg7 30/07

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harianjana

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Posted: 13 years ago

!!Om Ganeshaya namah!!

!!Om Sai ram!!

!!Jai Shri Krishna !!

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I am missing my favorite DC-Meenu jodi a lot that i can't stop my self from starting a new ff on them
I had this FF in mind from a long time, but I designed it for Meenakdhi and DC, so i feared to update it here becoz, the show did cast Akshi jodi for some time. So I hesiatated, but now that they ended the show with DC-Meenakshi (I name them Devshi) 😳 I am giving this FF here.

You're the world to me, until eternity
It will always be, undying love
As long as stars will shine, I will call you mine
Till the end of time, undying love
Please don't ever leave me, grieve me, deceive me
Never let me go (never let me go)
Try to understand me, commend me, demand me
I'll always love you so
You're the world to me, until eternity
It will always be, undying love

Undying love , Thats what was name of my FF

This was the story of two persons, who never believe in love before marriage,
but fate had some other plans for them.
Some strange circumstances bring them together,
and then starts the real game of fate..
A person who never believe in love,
will he/she ever fall in love?

That was the story of this ff.

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Cast and links to FF parts will be given below.
and the first part will be found in this page only as u scroll down.

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harianjana

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Dev(Apurva Agni hotri):

The rich kid of a famour industrialist in Vizag,AndhraPradesh. Good at heart, and very kind natured. but never believe in the word love.

Meenakshi (Ojaswi)

A sweet and good girl, who doesn't believe in love before marriage. She was studying MBBs final year in Andhra Medical college vizag. her father Srinivas was a contractor

Dev's Father and mother - Satyadhwaj and Rajeswari devi.

Despite of being one of the richest couples, they never do any shwo offs but remains simple and always keeps in mind from where they came...

Meenakshi's father -Srinivas

He was a contractor who does construction business, can't be said Rich but was like a Upper middle class man,He lost his wife when hsi two daughters were kids, but didn't do second marriage and loves his daughters to the core. but was strict to some extant

Dev's sister-Mahalakshmi(Mahua)

Good girl, the darling of the house. Was modern but never forgets families traditions. She was studying MBBS 3rd year in Andhra medical College

Meenakshi's sister - Pooja

She was brilliant and bubbly. But fears for father a lot. But loves the sister a lot. She was at present studying B.Tech

Akshat

The son of a M.L.A who was brought up in rich environment. Was completely modern and had all qualities of a poilt brat, but loves Meenakshi at the very first sight and decided to marry her only

Karishma Agnihotri

Daughter of Satyavardhans buisness partner Rajesh Agnihotri. She was from Bombay, and was much more richer than dev. but loves him from very childhood days, very stub born and decide to marry him on any cost.

Roshini,Sapna

Meenu's friends and always wish for good of Meenu, nd was ready to do any thing for her's good sake.

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harianjana

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Part 1

Part 2 - Dev rejeced karishma and a changed Akshat

PART 3: Is some thing un expecting going to happen?

PART 4 : Frnds helping Meenu indirectly...

PART 5 : Roshini and Sapnas experiences.

Part 6 - U are my wife.. its for sure..

Part 7: Article on Dev-meenakshi

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PART-1

Andhra Pradesh - Vizag - Andhra Medical College Campus.

Morning 10:30

"What does this people mean by love..."

"going to restaurants and pubs daily and enjoying for hours with out having any concentration on studies , is it what the so called love by these people. There's nothing much stupid than thinking its called love. "

"How can a person love other to such an extent that they give up their loves for other. Nothing is like that its nothing but fascination. Love is what that stands with us for life long, and such a love can be found by our parents and our life partner only..."

Meenakshi was walking along the campus road in her thoughts about love...

She was disturbed from her thoughts when her two friends Sapna and Roshini come to her and disurb her.

Roshini was having heavy breathes and said "Meenu, do u have any wheels in ur legs. how faster does u walk, and where are u lost yaar... we are running to catch u up from library calling ur name, but u didn't listen at all... what are u thinkign about"

Meenakshi gave her a bottle of water and Roshini drank half bottle water fastly.

Meenakshi:Now say what u want?

Roshini:What are u thinking rey

Meenakshi:About love?

Roshini and sapna shouted together "Love? and u?"

Meenakshi: Don't over whelm I am just thinkign that Love is nothing but fascination.

Sapna:Tell me in that way, other wise u are thinking abt love... nothing is much strange than that.

Meenakshi: What do u mean by strange yaar

Sapna:Other wise what, u are studying ur Final year of MBBs and till now, let me count how many times u rejected the proposals of our class mates...

Roshini:Sappu , no need to count , almost all our friends had proposed her and she rejected every one saying, love before marriage is fake.

Sapna:Exactly, always u will be into ur books only, then isn't it strange to listen u thinkign about Love.

Meenu: Thats becoz, I didn't believe in these love before marriages, Sharing affairs, and dying for some one for whom u are not related at all.

Sapna folding her hands to meenakshi said "Madam, I had no energy to argue with u now. shall we leave to a near by restaurant and have some food"

Meenu:What about having pasta at Pizza hut, I heard they got some new varietires of Pastas

Roshini: Yeah for sure... we will leave there.

Meenakshi:Lets go.we have to return soon for the class.

They were walking to the main gate when a car came by the side of them in a very Rash way...

Meenakshi:hey u stupid! Don't u have eyes.

The car stopped suddenly and Roshini and sapna panicked... they started to tell meenakshi to move away from there, but Meenu stood there in a firm way, full of anger at that guy.

The car reversed and from inside of it came out four guys. By seeing them it can be clearly said that they were some rich brats, and the one who was driving was with long hair and some type of ear ring as a stylish icon to his ear. he came out and said "I love u"

Meenakshi said "What, I even don't know who are u?"

That man forwarded his hand saying "Hi! I am Akshat. I love u"

Meenakshi looked at him angrily and said " I don't love girls" and moved away from there.He stood there shocked like a statue.

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At the same time in the very Vizag was moving a Ford Classic towards the Geetam college of Buisness Management.

Dev was sitting in the car and was going through the files in his hand.

Dev was from one of the richest families in Vizag, he was the son of Satya vardhan who was the famour industrialist and whole proprietor of Dev group of Industries. Dev's father was a man who was by birth poor, but came to this stage by his won efforts, he was a sweet heart and simple person, who never forgets his basics even after reaching these heights. Inorder to make him remember who he was, he married a poor girl , who was so simple and sweet she was Rajeswari Devi and their one and only son was our hero Dev. Though Satyavardhan and Rajeswari had one son, in the very childhood of Dev , one day satyavardhan was moving through traffic , when he found a 5 months girl lying on the road side beside a scooter that underwent an accident , seeing her he got remembrance of his chilhood and brought her home. Satya thought to joing her in an orphange the next day, but Dev got so attatched to her that Satya left his thought of joining her in orphanage and made her is daughter. Very few dearest relatives of satya vardhan only know abt her, remaining all thinks of her as the own daughter of satyavardhan. She was the bubbly Maha Lakshmi who was cutely called as mahua who was studying MBBs third year in Andhra medical college

Though Dev was still studying , he was helping his father in his buisness all the way possible and was evolving as gud buisness man. Now that his MBA completed he was doing a special degreee in advanced buisness techniques on one side, and on other side handling his fathers regional buisness as his father was busy 20 days a month in over viewing their branches in other countries.

But Dev despite of his status always prefers to be simple, and he never misses achance to enjoy his college life. He alwyas be a college boy like others when he comes to colege that any new commer who meet him would never guess that he was handling the biggest group of industries in Vizag. But what ever he wears, he was the trend setter for the students in the college.

As the car stopped infront of college, dev came out removing his coat and told the driver to move off.

As he entered the college , the gang of students surrounded him and started to wish him Happy Birthday...

From middle of them came Karishma ..., Karishma was the daughter of Satyavardhans buisness partner Rajesh Agnihotri, and was a chilhood friend of Dev.Despite of being richer than Dev and being so beautiful, karishma always loved Dev and she knows that her father will never say no to her wishes. She indeed insisted a lot to join in the same college of Dev's so tha she can be near to him. For that she specially made her father buy a house in Vizag and she shifted from Bombay to here,

Karishma came to Dev , hugged him from side and kissing him on cheek said "happy Birthday dev"

Dev rubbed his cheek with his hand and thinking in his mind "What's problem with these girls " said Thank u

Dev friends started to insist for Party for which Dev agreed but on a condition that they will leave after classes, for which all agreed so rushed to their classes back.
Dev when moving to his class watched a couple of love letters on notice board and smiled to himself thinking " Love is nothing but trash... Stupid fools, wasting their time for some thing that doesn't exist at all"

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Shanti

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Posted: 13 years ago

Very nice dear, it's different story and nice to see dev having a wonderful set of parents and meenakshi 's dad being strict yet loving karishma interesting character and akshat maybe these two should pair up love understanding happiness have reasons and where they meet and how things play their part will be seen.. Do continue and i am sure others will participate liked the way u showed dev is hwlping in his dad's buisness and studying and meenakshi in her mbbs studies l

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Wow!!..wonderful story dear!!..Loved the concept!!..I really loved how you portrayed every characters!..Please continue soon!..really eager to wait to read your next update!!

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Originally posted by: shanti05
Very nice dear, it's different story and nice to see dev having a wonderful set of parents and meenakshi 's dad being strict yet loving karishma interesting character and akshat maybe these two should pair up love understanding happiness have reasons and where they meet and how things play their part will be seen.. Do continue and i am sure others will participate liked the way u showed dev is hwlping in his dad's buisness and studying and meenakshi in her mbbs studies l

Thanks a lot Shanthi dear...

U didn't observe my other ff's na. so it feels like that, but I always love to show family relations, becoz every person had an important role played by their family in their life... the same applies here for Dev and meenu too... and regardin the love story of Dev and meenu... I am sure its a variety type of story, and u will like ti for sure... Hope others to get connected 😊

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Originally posted by: VishakaGal12
Wow!!..wonderful story dear!!..Loved the concept!!..I really loved how you portrayed every characters!..Please continue soon!..really eager to wait to read your next update!!

Thanks a lot Dear😊😊😊😊😊😊

Hope u love this ff till the end

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PART 2

As class completed, Dev called to house, and got 4 cars and took all the friends to a star hotel.As already he got a conference booked, they directly proceeded there, but for Dev's shock, as they entered in... There was almost entire college wishing him "happy Birthday"

Dev:Hey guys, u all

One of them said "Its ours Dev bro's Birthday and how come we not present"

Dev:Thanks u dudes, Common lets enjoy...

The music started and they all started to dance, Dev Danced for some time and later went to a table and sat there...

Karishma was observing Dev for a long time, today she had a surprised gift for him, it was nothing but saying "I love u" to him. She always waited for this moment, how ever nothing can be a best chance than today. She wanted to go to him and straight away say that she was in love with him, but he was surrounded by many friends, so she was waiting for a time when he will be alone.

Finally Karishma found him alone, she went to him straight and sat in front of him

Dev who was sipping on to some juice smiled to her and said "Party was nice na"

Karishma didn't say any thing but kept looking at him.

Dev frowned as he didn't found Karishma in the way

Dev waving his hands in front of Karishma "Hello, madam, where are u?"

Karishma found some one reaching them and signaled them to go away with her hand

Dev looked that and was feeling confused "Do u need to tell me any thing?"

Karishma:Hmmm Yeah, We both are very friendly from childhood right

Dev:Of course, if ever after mom and mahua, I am free with any girl its u only right

Karishma smiled and said "Dev! I just wanna listen the next word too"

Dev:Next word!

Karishma:Yeah that only, first friendship, next...

Dev:Next, hmmm close friendship, best friend etc etc

Karishma: Are u playing with me.

Dev: tell me what u wanna listen .

Karishma:Will u say me what ever I wanna listen

Dev:Yeah

Karishma:I Love U

Dev didn't understand at once "Come again"

Karishma;Arey Yaar... I just wanna listen from u "I love U"

Dev started to laugh... "Karishma, I hope u aren't joking"

Karishma frowned ... "Hey what's wrong, doesn't u like me"

Dev:Of course I like u, but as a friend

Karishma:But I love u Dev

Dev:Karishma! am sorry but I never had any thing like such in my mind. And also Love would be one thing that won't suit for people like us, as it will be a big obstacle in our career developments, I hope u should have known abt this.

Karishma:But My dad will never dis agree with me

Dev:But I don't love u

Karishma felt like crying, she had a million emotions running inside her, almost all every guy in the rich circle revolve around her, and she was the dream girl of all the rich youngsters, but she always loved Dev, and this guy rejected her... karishma didn't say any thing but left off from the place.

Dev found that girl was upset, but he can't help her, he never had any such feelings to her, and he was friendly to her becoz of the close ness they had from very childhood.

Angad one of Dev's friends came to dev and asked "What happened man, why did u reject her?"

Dev giving a shocked expressions "Damn. How did u know that man?''

Angad:Well, its a known fact that she loves u, then why did u reject her proposal.

Dev:Angad! I hate this love things man, I don't believe in them

Angad;Means , won't u marry

Dev gave a smile and said "Who said u that I won't marry..."

Angad frowning "Means..."

Dev:I will marry, but a girl whom my parents suggest

Angad broke into laugh...

Dev became serious AND asked "What's so funny abt that"

Angad :Give me a break man... U are saying that U will do Arranged marriage

Dev:What's wrong with it

Angad:U are Dev... Heart throb of all the unmarried girls in this Vizag, and u are saying that u will do arranged marriage. Man, I am telling u , don't loose Karishma.

Dev: Whats wrong with u man...

Angad;Bro, wrongs with u yaar... other wise, We all die to get a smile from Karishma , and that very Karishma came to u and proposed u, and u rejected her. Its a damn rubbish Dev...

Dev:Angad, I doesn't believe in love before marriage. I always think of my parents, My mom and Dad, their marriage was no where a love marriage, but see them, how lovely they are. even today they were such a lovely couple. i always found it interesting that, despite of dads heavy schedule, how they both share everything abt one another, and never hides things. They will know every thing abt one other. and such an ideal couple they are.. I want my wife too just like my mom.

Angad smiled and said "Dev, u always took right decisions, so what ever is ur decision we always support u"

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Karishma was in her bed room in Dev's house and was crying...

Mahua who came from college then only dropped her bag and rushed to karishma's room to chat with her...

But what she got was a crying karishma.

Mahua was a good friend of karishma so she rushed to her immediately and asked "What happened dear"

Karishma hugged Mahua and broke into tears

Mahua embracing her "What happened dear..."

Karishma said every thing that happened and mahua was like abt to shout with joy

Karishma looked at Mahua with anger and said "Do u feel it good that ur bro, rejected me"

mahua:No dear.. u love my bro... I am happy for this

Karishma:But ur bro rejected me

Mahua: U wanna live with my bro for the whole life??

Karishma:yeah...

Mahua:Then leave the things to me, Bro will never say No to Dad, so we will get it from that side...

Karishma:Means...

mahua:If its not a love marriage, so what we can try for a arranged marriage.

Karishma got the things and said "Yeah, then ur bro got only 2 months from me, once, let my dad come India, I will sort out things from that side."

Mahua hugged karishma and said "So dear, now become normal"

Karishma nodded and gave a smile as she got her problem solved...

At dinner table, Dev did observe karishma silent and moody, but he didn't say any thing as he found it not the correct time to talk and he thought to himself 'let some days pass... may be she will forget it..."

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Meenakshi silently went to her sister's bed...

From very childhood, Meenu and Pooja used to sleep with their father ... as they growed up, they can't get rid of that habit so they had three beds in one room and they three sleep together,Though they had separate rooms for their personal things and study and work, when it comes to sleeping, they all sleep in one room only. The other reason for it was that, Srinivas's health too, he had asthma and during night if ever he got any problem then it would be a problem if ever they were in different rooms.

Meenakshi got up from her bed and as she observed the clouds forming... she went to her sisters bed and whispered "Pooh..."

Pooja snuggling under her bed sheet "What sister...Its only 4:00 let me sleep for some more time "

Srinivas :Meenu, go and sleep for some more time, we can get up at 5:00

meenakshi whispered more slowly "Pooh... Clouds are forming... Get up... don't u want to come out"

Pooja got up in a jerk and was abt to shout "Cl..."When Meenakshi stooped her by closing her mouth with her hand and signaled that dad was there.

Meenakshi and pooja got up on to the terrace and the mng scenery was beautiful... on one side was visible, the sea and on the other side were mountains, and the clouds are coming on from the mountains side...

Meenu leaving her hands free and turning around
" What a beautiful nature was it...
How lucky I am...
Having the sagar on one side and
the giant parvat on other side..."

Pooja:Sissie... u are always poor in these poetry , why did u try for it dear...

Meenu:Its okay... see there, the rain is coming...

pooja looked at the side, and from the mountains, the rain was coming towards them and spread over them as a blanket.

They played in rain for a long time, and finally as Rain stopped Pooja went down.

Meenu stayed their for some time enjoying the climate of rain for some more time... Then she noticed one thing

There was a guy standing on the beside house's terrace for a long time, they ignored him as they thought he too was a nature lover like them, but now she noticed that he was looking at her.

That guy saw Meenu looking at him and moved to the wall and said "Hi"

Then Meenu got a shock...

This was the same guy who proposed her some days back, but he was nothing like that day, his style was totally changed, he had his hair cut and removed the accessories like ear ring and all, and was looking like a perfect guy. ...

Meenu:U??????

That guy replied "Yeah its me Akshat. U still remember me."

Meenu making a face "Whats need for me to remember u"

Akshat:Hey, Now I think u will love me

Meenu:What??

Akshat moving his hand through his craf and said "Now I am looking like a boy na"

Meenakshi: Look Mr.

Akshat:Akshat

Meenakshi:Okay Mr.Akshat , I don't believe in these love things, and Don't u have any other thing to do than moving behind me

Akshat: Okay Thanks

Meenakshi:What

Akshat: U wanted me to do work, what a great idea... every wife want her husband to grow up in career, thanks for the suggestion, from today onwards I will grow in my career

Meenu gave a frown and said " Hey i didn't mean nothing like that,,,,,,"

Akshat: Thanks a lot, and by the way I love u, and will marry u only

Meenakshi stomped her foot in anger and moved away in a rush

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