Dev-Meenu's new FF , !!Undying love!!PT7,Pg7 30/07 - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice part, dear, Karishma is upset ab what Dev told her , and think she will get over it..

Well his sister will try to play cupid, but Angad on the other hand understands Dev's situation..

Here Meenu with her sister sees the beautiful mountain, and that Akshat is having a makeover 😆 to impress Meenakshi...

Do continue. would like to see who the two poles Dev-Meenu somewhere get to know each other...

How I wish the show continued...Just wish they come back again
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
Thank you very muchh
really appritiate your workk
cant wait for the rest of the parts
update soon :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: shanti05

Nice part, dear, Karishma is upset ab what Dev told her , and think she will get over it..yeah may be or may not be😉

Well his sister will try to play cupidyes she was equally attatched with both dev and karishma so she may not want to hurt any of both , but Angad on the other hand understands Dev's situation..😊he was a good friend of Dev

Here Meenu with her sister sees the beautiful mountain, and that Akshat is having a makeover 😆 to impress Meenakshi...😉😉😉he's mad in love

Do continue. would like to see who the two poles Dev-Meenu somewhere get to know each other...

How I wish the show continued...😭😭😭😭😭😭Just wish they come back again 😊😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Chanthini

nice post!! keep doing yar!

Thanks a lot dear... will try to do my best
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: tashu03

Thank you very muchh
really appritiate your workk
cant wait for the rest of the parts
update soon :)

Thanks a lot dear...
I am a bit off sorry

Yes will try to update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I am truly sorry for a long delay in update. But I am a bit off becoz of my health so...

but truly working on next update, hope u people love it.

will give next update on sunday
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 3


Dev came from college feeling very tired...

Mahua who has already discussed the thing abt Karishma with rajeswari devi, sat in hall waiting for Dev to come

Rajeswari Devi smiled as she saw her son coming tired and said "Dev, looks like very tired, come do break fast"

Dev:Mom, will fresh up and come, hey monkey wait for me, don't eat all by ur self

Mahua:Okay donkey, will wait, but not for u, but for karishma

Dev:Yeah yeah, wait for the second monkey too

rajeswari:Dev...

Dev smiling :Sorry mom, will fresh up and come

As Dev went up rajeswari said "Still, I can't believe it"

Mahua:Mom... Dev bro, won't reject if u say him. Please...

Rajeswari:Maha, if ever Dev love any other.

Mahua: I guess no, he talks very less with girls, he talks mostly with Karishma only, when he rejected her it self, how can u expect some other

Rajeswari: Hmmm

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Dev came down and sat beside karishma, hitting her on head saying 'Hi monkey"

Mahua and rajeswari started to observe them both intensely.

Karishma felt embarrassed so she moved a side...

Dev shrugged it and he started to eat taking his plate

Mahua: Bro...

Dev:yeah

Rajeswari: Dev... Dad is thinking to do ur marriage this year

Dev nodded his head /

Rajeswari:Do u have any one in ur heart

Dev:No...

Mahua:Then why did u reject karishma

Dev looked up, he felt anger for karishma bringing this topic through them

Dev:I discussed abt it with Karishma already

Mahua:Why?

Dev: I doesn't believe in any thing like Love before marriage

Mahua:Means u will do arranged marriage

Dev:Hmmm

Mahua:Means any one dad shows u , U will marry them?

Dev:No i too should like her.

Karishma feeling frustrated "Aunty I am going"

rajeswari:Karishma... please stop

karishma:No aunt I am leaving

Dev stopped her by holding her hand and dragged her and made her sit beside him and said 'eat"

karishma: I doesn't wanna eat

Dev took some morsel in his hand and make her open her mouth by force and put the morsel inside it

karishma ate it and said " U stupid, idiot"

Dev;And u what Monkey

Karishma:No I am Karishma

Dev:yeah Karishma right, then Karishma is my frnd and me,karishma and Mahua are one group right. then why u are angry on me

Karishma: U are just stupid that's it. i hate u

Dev:Thank u, u indeed saved me

Karishma holded her tears in her self and thought to her self "I hate u madly that I love u. I will one day get u for sure"

Dev went inot his room completing his dinner , to do some work.

Mahua:Don't worry kari... he will be urs only.


karishma:I know it.

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Srinivas came to wake up Meenu, but meenu under blanket "Dad! Let me sleep its only 5"

Srinivas:Get up, we need to go for jogging.

Meenu came out from her blanjet saying "Why u take me to jog every day dad... I am thin na, take pooh she's some what Fat"

As she didn't listen any voice she opened her eyes to see Pooh standing there angrily looking at her.

Srinivas smiled and went out...

Meenu didn't say any thing but came out from her bed and holding he ears did 5 sit ups.

Pooh sternly looking at her said "Roshini and sapna are waiting come soon"

Meenu lazily throwed her blanket and changed her self into a track suit and went out...

As Roshini and sapna also live near to Meenu's house they always o together for jogging/


Meenu,Roshini,sapna went in opposite direction of jog to srinivas and pooja and while jogging they were talking about different things. Sapna said "Meenu! u are remembering me of that women Lakshmi today"

Meenu in some thoughts "Whose lakshmi yaar"

Roshini:"That women, patient number 5 in maternity ward"

Sapna laughed out and said "whats that scarf on ur head around ur ears like some pregnant woman."

Meenu didn't say any thing becoz when she saw her self in mirror she only laughed of her self, but to protect her self from morning snow, she has to do it. so she didn't say any thing/

Roshini changed the topic and was saying some other thing when sapna said "Rose, see him looks like we saw him some where"

Meenu looked at him and cursed sapna silently as he was Akshat. She was more worried when he saw them and was moving towards them

Sapna:"Meenu, this guy was that man Akshat na. he was the one who proposed u that day"

Akshat reached them and said "What happened sapna, looking at me like some ghost"

Sapna:U changed a lot...

Akshat:Ur friend said that she will marry a guy na, so I changed my self.

Meenu:Mr.Mind ur words.

Akshat:Can u both leave us for a while.

Roshini and Sapna looked at Meenu and left from there.

Meenu:Do u have any shame? I told u that I hate u.

Akshat: U knwo what Hate is also another form of love.

Meenu:Shut ur nonsense. Look I have some goals to reach in my life, and I just doesn't believe in word love.

Akshat:Then whom will u marry.

Meenu:I will marry the one whom my father show me.

Akshat:Oh...

Meenu:So please get off from my life.

Akshat:I am going for now, but will come soon.

Meenu: Hey tell me on reason, why should I marry u. u are some person moving on streets and enjoying ur life.

Akshat: U wanna know my details then listen. I am Akshat kumar, son of Rammohan who was the M.L.A of this city and I studied B.Tech in America . any thing else needed.

Meenu shocked a bit listening that he was son of M.L.A, for the first time she felt fear. but she controlled her self and said

Meenu:Go to hell.

Akshat left smiling,,,,,
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Evening at AU campus...

Roshini:Whats going on yaar

Meenu:Means

Sapna:That guy whom u met mng

Meenu;Oh. Akshat

Roshini:See sappu, how lovingly saying his name

Meenu:Roshu, I will kill u today

Sapna:If ever there is nothing between u both why he will come to u and ask us that he needa talk to u privately

Meenu:Arey yaar, how will I know. He was torturing me.

Roshini:Means u say that , u will never love him

Meenu:yes, not only hm , I will never love any one... Never...

" Its wrong"

Meenu turned back to see a man in a tribal wear standing there.

Meenu went to him with a confused face.

That man had a special glow in his face and a sharpness in his eyes. He pointed his finger to Meenu and said "ur marriage will be for sure love marriage, and the guy will be one of the top 10 richest persons in Vizag. and u will meet him in a near by future."

He said that and smiling moved on.

Meenu stood there standing still and Sapna said "What is this yaar"

Meenu said "Leave it off yaar, its some sort of cheap tricks for money"

Roshini:Did he took a rupee from u

meenu:No..

Roshni:Then

Meenu: But what ever he said will be wrong. When I my self hate love, How can i do a love marriage. any way better if we leave this topic now.

Meenu started to move and Roshini and sappu look at each other thought fully.


Edited by harianjana - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I will definitely read and comment😊
shanti05 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice update dear, So lets see how the prediction will turn out for Meenakshi, she will marry one of the richest family of vizaag's son so will somewhere path of two people who don'nt have any idea about their interaction meet we need to see, while Dev is trying to make things fine with his family & his moms thought about Karishma..

Please continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
😊
Thank u so much dear...
Love u 😊

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