Forever Yours- A Swaron FF |Chapter 11-Pg 108|

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Shishir Darsh

@marauder

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

Intriguing and captivating start. SwaRon history seems to be complicated and intense. Nice to see Sharon and Rey as siblings. Their bond was beautifully set. And going by their conversation Sharon and Kriya also share same bond.
You wrote this part beautifully. Loved the free flow of narration. Waiting for the next update.

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Sneha

@-Snehaa-

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: shenz_kriyaansh
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oh!!! I just love the ShaRey bond...
and the way u expressed it was amazing...
truly amazing chapter...

haw!!!1 Swayam left her... bad boy... Sharon jaisi angel ko chod diya... hope everything goes well

Rey understands Sharon so well👏

and KriYaansh married😳 matlab all advanced stage romance expected😉

lovely update

Kriyansh married lekin yeh to Swaron FF hai 😛

Toh Swaron ke hi scenes honge! 😉

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: damonelena

Kriyansh married lekin yeh to Swaron FF hai 😛
Toh Swaron ke hi scenes honge! 😉

I know that... n SwaRon romance... that will also do... after all I love both the couples

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Sneha

@-Snehaa-

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: sreya19roy
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Awesomeee update dear 😊

Loved Loved Loved it totally ❤️ It was fabulous 👏

The ShaRey convo was fantastic, loved how they teased n joked with each other...it was really very cute n funny 😆

But SwaRon not being together broke my heart 🥺

But I feel SwaRon track is gonna be all serious, romantic, n highly intense n I am freaking crazy about such love stories...they r just hayeee 😍

Ohk but I have a little confusion, I didn't get the 1st para n the quoted question 😕

They were sitting there, his arm on her shoulder, her head on his shoulder. They were laughing and smiling to themselves. Maybe an inside joke. They seemed to be carefree and away from this world. They were having fun in a world of theirs. Will they live together for ever or will they part just like how it happened with her?

"Maybe we were not meant to be. But did it have to happen after so many years?" 😕 😕

But anyways it was an awesome beginning n I am really looking forward to it...keep up the good work 👍🏼

Thanku soo much! :)

Hope i keep up to ur expectations😊

And abt that para- She's actually looking at two lovers in the park. Forget to mention that. My bad!

The two of them seem so happy that she's wondering whether they'll be together for ever or will they break up just like Swaron? 😊

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Sneha

@-Snehaa-

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: shenz_kriyaansh

I know that... n SwaRon romance... that will also do... after all I love both the couples

😃😃😃

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shaani2209

@shaani2209

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#66

What in the world was this???😲 Swayam left Sharon??😲

surely there'll be some genuine reason for sure(hope so)

awesome start...thanks for the pm...

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Sneha

@-Snehaa-

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: shaani2209
What in the world was this???😲 Swayam left Sharon??😲
surely there'll be some genuine reason for sure(hope so)

awesome start...thanks for the pm...

Unfortunately Yes

To know what happens, you have to read further!

Thanks. And welcome.😃

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Sneha

@-Snehaa-

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: yogini64
Its awesome sneha 👏
I thought they are together now . . . . . But she was remembering her old times 😔
sharey are siblings & kriyaansh are married 😃
possesive brother 😆
ufff . . . 12 baje se pehle so jata hai rey . . . 🤪
vo kaunsa hamari tarah IF use karta hai jo der raat tak jagta rahe 🤣

Thanks yogi! :D

This FF is based on present and past. Read the CS! 😊

And sahi hai...hum to humesha IF par online hote hai! :D

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dancersqueen

@dancersqueen

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#69

loved sharey's convo...waiting 4 next update...

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Snowey

@Snowey

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#70

Awesome start..though it started on a sad note that Swayam has left Sharon..am sure he had his reasons and they will meet soon enough. The bond that ShaRey share as siblings was beautifully shown. The pain in Sharon was evident and looking forward to read how Swayam's position is towards all this. Update soon :)