Forever Yours- A Swaron FF |Chapter 11-Pg 108|

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#71

It is just amazing. I always loved Sharey bonding in the show but now being bro and sis is simply awesome. What has happened between swaron??? Swayam left sharon OMG i really waiting for you next update. Thanks for a fab update.

Best of luck for you french exam.

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#72

It was really vry gud!! 👏
Swayam left sharon...suspense!! 😕
loved sharey! dey are bro and sis!!
wow i luv itt! 😳
waiting for d nxt part..! 😊
thanx fr d pm! 😃

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Amrita Sengupta

@idiot_box

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#73

AWWW..SHAREY CONVERSATION WAS SO CUTE..I SO TOTALLY LOVED IT! BUT I REALLY WANT TO KNOW WHY SWAYAM LEFT SHARON! PLEASE UPDATE SOON AND PM ME WHEN YOU DO!IM SENDING YOU A FRIEND REQUEST...PLEASE ADD ME!

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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#74

Sneha this is superb,fab one.Loved it.

Thanks for pm.

Update soon.

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Shweta

@Shweta-kriyansh

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#75

They were sitting there, his arm on her shoulder, her head on his shoulder. They were laughing and smiling to themselves. Maybe an inside joke. They seemed to be carefree and away from this world. They were having fun in a world of theirs. Will they live together for ever or will they part just like how it happened with her?

"Maybe we were not meant to be. But did it have to happen after so many years.

the first para caught me off-guard...i was like maybe you are showing their life after they are commtitted...but then ur last line-her thought about they not meant for each other...a twister...that was great...subtly different...unique and breath-taking...👏

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Shweta

@Shweta-kriyansh

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#76

She was sitting on the park bench and wondering all this when her phone rang, disturbing her deep thoughts. She came to reality and checked her caller ID. It said "Kria" She immediately answered the call because if she didn't, Kria would kill her. And so would Rey. When she answered the call, it wasn't Kria. It was Rey's voice. "Hello Sharon! Are you there?" Rey asked. "Yes. Why did you call from Kria's number?" Sharon asked . "That's because you don't have any intention to pick up my calls. Do you even know how many calls I made?" Rey asked. "When did you? And to which number?" Sharon asked. "To the landline." Rey said. "You idiot. How would I answer the landline if I'm not at home? Why did you call anyway?" Sharon asked, wanting to kill Rey. "I just called to check if you're okay." Rey said. "Do you think I'd be talking to you if I wasn't okay?" Sharon asked, chuckling. "Yea yea! Jokes apart. I'm serious." Rey said. "are you okay?" "Yes I'm perfectly fine." Sharon said. "Good. So you're coming today right?" Rey asked. "Of course I am. What makes you think I wouldn't come to my own brother's wedding anniversary party. Btw I was the first one to wish you, sleepyhead." Sharon said. "You called at 12. Is that the time to call?" Rey asked. "Ofcourse it is. Then did you want me to call you tomorrow?" Sharon asked. "No..You're driving me crazy . I hate you sis!" Rey said. "I love you too my darling brother. And it is called revenge. i'm taking revenge for all the times you tortured me when we were young. At home, at school and where all? Thank God we were having separate blocks for the girl's and boy's in school. Otherwise I would be in the mental hospital by now." Sharon said.

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loved sharey...their bro-sis convo is awesome...more like best buddies as on the show...i adore them...and rey is married to kria...aww...cherry on the cake...mental hospital part was hilarious and got me holding my stomach...sharon must have looked so damn cute...⭐️

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Shweta

@Shweta-kriyansh

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#77

"How I wish you would be there?It's okay . It won't take me much time to make you mad and then I'll send you to the mental hospital. Hawhawhawhaw!" Rey said, obviously joking. "Very funny bro. How's Kria?" Sharon asked. "She's on cloud 9 today because the first thing I told her today was about you coming home. So.." Rey said. "Idiot ! Why did you tell her that I'm coming? I wanted it to be a surprise. You are such an idiot." Sharon screamed. "Yea do you want to make my life miserable? She's been asking me about you from when I told her. When you come, she'll be a little less excited. If it had been a surprise, I would have had to run out of the house!" Rey said. "Reyansh..wait I'll tell this to your wife." Sharon blackmailed in a baby voice. "If you tell her anything, I swear I'll send you to the mental hospital." Rey said. "Oo..I'm scared. Someone save me." Sharon said, and laughed. Rey was happy to hear her laugh again. "You're laughing. I'm so happy today Shar!" Rey said. "Shouldn't I laugh?" Sharon asked. "You should. But since Swayam left you, you have been acting like someone I don't even know." Rey said, and realized the mistake he did. Sharon felt her eyes tear up. Rey reminded her about Him. Two years back,when she used to hear his name, she could feel butterflies and angels singing and all, but now all she could hear was what Swayam had said to her. Swayam, who had been her life, still was and always will be. He had left her just because..Sharon didn't want to be reminded of it again, so she got up from the park bench and got inside her car and drove to her dance academy where she was part-time choreographer.

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rey is acting all crazy...so much wife-fearing...kria needs to know this...he certainly needs a spanking from her...naughty guy...😆

now i get the major shock...the first para only told that swaron were not together...i had thought that maybe it was mutual decision...but now-m hell shocked.ouch...swayam left sharon...because...that is left unanswered...matlab how could he and why would he...😲

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Shweta

@Shweta-kriyansh

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#78

hey no precap.,...thats certainly not fair...and wen do u plan to update it next and let out the secret of swayam leaving sharon...m having goosebumps u know...update soon...

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Sneha

@-Snehaa-

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: Shweta-kriyansh
hey no precap.,...thats certainly not fair...and wen do u plan to update it next and let out the secret of swayam leaving sharon...m having goosebumps u know...update soon...

Probably Saturday or Sunday. And about the secret of Swayam leaving her, thoda wait karna padega! 😈

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Anindita Sengupta

@Anindita91

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#80

hey i read the introduction n the first chapter now...its awesome...sharey's bonding is commendable...n no swaron...i really want to knw y swayam left sharon...will be waiting for the next update...update soon...n i m adding u to my buddy list...plz pm me when u update next...