Forever Yours- A Swaron FF |Chapter 11-Pg 108| - Page 5

swaron... haye... continue pls... waise yeh koi puchne waali baat hai...ofcourse...jaldi kariyo...update nahi woh toh tu free hai ya nhi iss pe depend karta hai...continue karna... jaldi ya late doesnt matters...ur awesome work is what counts...

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ohh...so now the suspense queen is again on a writing and "surprising everyone spree"...and this tym with my second favo couple swaron...the only response...wen are u updating it...guess u got my review...😉

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ofcourse do continue luv it

Chapter 1:

They were sitting there, his arm on her shoulder, her head on his shoulder. They were laughing and smiling to themselves. Maybe an inside joke. They seemed to be carefree and away from this world. They were having fun in a world of theirs. Will they live together for ever or will they part just like how it happened with her?

"Maybe we were not meant to be. But did it have to happen after so many years?"

She was sitting on the park bench and wondering all this when her phone rang, disturbing her deep thoughts. She came to reality and checked her caller ID. It said "Kria" She immediately answered the call because if she didn't, Kria would kill her. And so would Rey. When she answered the call, it wasn't Kria. It was Rey's voice. "Hello Sharon! Are you there?" Rey asked. "Yes. Why did you call from Kria's number?" Sharon asked . "That's because you don't have any intention to pick up my calls. Do you even know how many calls I made?" Rey asked. "When did you? And to which number?" Sharon asked. "To the landline." Rey said. "You idiot. How would I answer the landline if I'm not at home? Why did you call anyway?" Sharon asked, wanting to kill Rey. "I just called to check if you're okay." Rey said. "Do you think I'd be talking to you if I wasn't okay?" Sharon asked, chuckling. "Yea yea! Jokes apart. I'm serious." Rey said. "are you okay?" "Yes I'm perfectly fine." Sharon said. "Good. So you're coming today right?" Rey asked. "Of course I am. What makes you think I wouldn't come to my own brother's wedding anniversary party. Btw I was the first one to wish you, sleepyhead." Sharon said. "You called at 12. Is that the time to call?" Rey asked. "Ofcourse it is. Then did you want me to call you tomorrow?" Sharon asked. "No..You're driving me crazy . I hate you sis!" Rey said. "I love you too my darling brother. And it is called revenge. i'm taking revenge for all the times you tortured me when we were young. At home, at school and where all? Thank God we were having separate blocks for the girl's and boy's in school. Otherwise I would be in the mental hospital by now." Sharon said.

"How I wish you would be there?It's okay . It won't take me much time to make you mad and then I'll send you to the mental hospital. Hawhawhawhaw!" Rey said, obviously joking. "Very funny bro. How's Kria?" Sharon asked. "She's on cloud 9 today because the first thing I told her today was about you coming home. So.." Rey said. "Idiot ! Why did you tell her that I'm coming? I wanted it to be a surprise. You are such an idiot." Sharon screamed. "Yea do you want to make my life miserable? She's been asking me about you from when I told her. When you come, she'll be a little less excited. If it had been a surprise, I would have had to run out of the house!" Rey said. "Reyansh..wait I'll tell this to your wife." Sharon blackmailed in a baby voice. "If you tell her anything, I swear I'll send you to the mental hospital." Rey said. "Oo..I'm scared. Someone save me." Sharon said, and laughed. Rey was happy to hear her laugh again. "You're laughing. I'm so happy today Shar!" Rey said. "Shouldn't I laugh?" Sharon asked. "You should. But since Swayam left you, you have been acting like someone I don't even know." Rey said, and realized the mistake he did. Sharon felt her eyes tear up. Rey reminded her about Him. Two years back,when she used to hear his name, she could feel butterflies and angels singing and all, but now all she could hear was what Swayam had said to her. Swayam, who had been her life, still was and always will be. He had left her just because..Sharon didn't want to be reminded of it again, so she got up from the park bench and got inside her car and drove to her dance academy where she was part-time choreographer.

Soo how was it??? I know it was not very good. But i typed it in such a hurry. Have to learn for french exam 😛 Long comments pleasse?

This was a Wowww Update..

Loved ShaRey's convo..

n then suspense againnn.huhh...

SwaRon not together..what ws tha noww???

update soonnn

*Edited

Awesomeee update dear 😊

Loved Loved Loved it totally ❤️ It was fabulous 👏

The ShaRey convo was fantastic, loved how they teased n joked with each other...it was really very cute n funny 😆

But SwaRon not being together broke my heart 🥺

But I feel SwaRon track is gonna be all serious, romantic, n highly intense n I am freaking crazy about such love stories...they r just hayeee 😍

Ohk but I have a little confusion, I didn't get the 1st para n the quoted question 😕

They were sitting there, his arm on her shoulder, her head on his shoulder. They were laughing and smiling to themselves. Maybe an inside joke. They seemed to be carefree and away from this world. They were having fun in a world of theirs. Will they live together for ever or will they part just like how it happened with her?

"Maybe we were not meant to be. But did it have to happen after so many years?" 😕 😕

But anyways it was an awesome beginning n I am really looking forward to it...keep up the good work 👍🏼

Sharey was always amazing
Swaron r not together hmm suspense
Waiting for next part

Post edited on pg 7 😊