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Posted: 19 years ago
that was an excellent part....i hope angad doesn't hate kripa if she's the girl 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
omggggg awesome promo....watch it be kripa...omg poor girl.continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey night girl that was an awesom part!!!!!
and i just LUVED the PROMO!!! and omg wat a atory man!!!! like kripa is the doughter of the man who killed Anhads father!!! thats just crazzy!!!!!
well
continue sonn
luts of luv hina
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Posted: 19 years ago
fab part!!

im sure its Kripa...bechari 😳 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
part 12



a-wouldnt kripa get courious in how i have just become the owner of the collage i mean come on she will so not buy the storie that the guy that owns the collage likes my work and gave away the collage to me

r-well just tell kripa that dad owns the collage

a-hello dad will kill us for telling kripa you know how dad dosnt want anyone to know were his kids he is so over protive about us not ending up like mom

r-well dads going to kill us when he finds out come on what are the chances that dad will ever find out we told someone about us being the top 5 ricest people in the world

a-you better be right

the next day it was collage holidays we see angad and rani at the air port looking for some one

r-god were are they

a-some where here

r-look there they are

angad and rani smile and go up to 2 people one was a girl and the other was dillip khanna the guy who gave kripa admittion to the collage. angad hugs dillip

a-hey dad

d-hello so hows every thing going

a-great

d-and rani i saw that your doing realy well in collage and i decied to get you a car

r-no thanks dad iam getting used to the whole walking thing its realy fun

d-thats great oh angad i would like you to meet your future wife komal she will be staying with us at are house(komal will be plaied by kumud form kkusum)and angad and rani i would like that you all from now on live with me

a-sure dad

angad then says hi to komal

komal=ko

ko-hi

a-dad i am geting bored staying home and haveing nothing to do so i was wondering if i could handel all you bussiness and run the collage

d-you know i was going to suggest the same thing sence you will be geting married soon

angad and rani smile realy big

a-awsome dad but i was also wondering if we could have a program in the collage telling every one that i will be runing the place

d-i dont mind when you are there you can also anounce your marrage with komal

angad and rani's smile drops from there face

a+r-what(shock and dull tone)

d-what is there a problem

a-no no not at all its just that when every one in the program is there and see komal they will be looking at her the hole time sence she is so beautiful

komal bulshs and starts turning more and more redish pinkish

d-well thats good then, good ahead in hold the program but i wont....

a+r-ya ya we know you wont come

angad dillip rani and komal leave the airport and go to the 136 bed room house and all of them sit in the liveing room

ko-wow this house is very big and beautiful

d-komal you are welcome to explore the house i my self havent been in all the rooms i got tired of looking around so much

ko-i probly will never be able to find my way out of the house

a-dont worrie about that just keep a cellphone with you so if you get lost you can all ways call me and i will come find you i know off all the rooms here me and rain used to play hide and seek and we know how to get through the house realy fast

ko-thanks

d-angad go show komal her room

a-uuummmm ok dad

angad stands up as angad stands up he turns around and give rani a look which said "help me get out of this." rani on the other hand couldnt help but laugh at seeing angad in such a award place. angad takes komal up stairs and opens a door to the right of the stair way

a-this will be your room and my room will be on the right of your room and rani's room will be the left of your room so you can knock on are door if you need any thing ok

ko-(shy tone)ok

angad leaves the room as soon as angad closes komals room angad gets a phone call

a-hello

person-sir we found out who killed mrs.khanna come quick to the dark ally

a-ok iam comeing


hope u like this part 😊
next part comeing soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
awww that was a nice part. hehe cant wait till the annoucement part. continue soon 👏

-Ruby
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Posted: 19 years ago
great part, poor angad!! bechara hehe 😆 😆 , continue soon 😊
-Amrit
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Posted: 19 years ago
that was a nice part! somehow komal seems fishy to me!
can't wait for teh announcement n angads expression when he finds out the killers daughter!

Cont soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
awwwwwwwwww por angad. 😆 heheheheheh.. can't wait till the anouncements ..caontinue fast..
Divjot
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey omg continue soon that was a brilliant part...

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