DARK ALLY/LAST PART PAGE 54 - Page 22

ok every one next part comeing tonight or tommrow depends i want to post another part today but i have to go the the opening of my new hose today so i might not get to continue but i will try to continue today if i can

awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!!!

great part! poor angad plz cont soon!

part 13

angad leaves the room as soon as angad closes komals room angad gets a phone call

a-hello

person-sir we found out who killed mrs.khanna come quick to the dark ally

a-ok iam comeing

in the dark ally

we see a bunch of goons talking to a guy but we cant see the guys face

goon-sir we found out who killed mrs.khanna but the guy died right after mrs.khanna was killed

guy-(angry deadly tone)dose the guy have any family members

goon-the guy had a wife but she died giveing birth but his daughter is still alive she was adopted by a sharma family but we dont know which sharma family

guy-how many sharma family are there in india

goon-560,000,000,000

the guy laughs

guy-go find the girl i want to see her alive.

the guy comes out of the darkness and it is angad!!!!

guy-who ever this girl is her blood is going to pay for my mothers death

all the goons leave the place and go to look for a girl who was adopted. angad started to leave the dark ally but as he is leaveing he see kripa walking on the sidewalk to some were and there was a big crowed but he only saw her and all angad could do was see kripa from the huge crowed. angad quickly took out his cell phone and called rani

r-hello

a-i found her

r-found who

a-she was in a big crowed and i saw her and only her

r-see i knew it you do love kripa

a-now theres another challange

r-whats that

a-how am i going to break up with komal and get kripa to like me

r-go after her right now and tell kripa you love her

a-no i cant what if she dosnt like me what if she starts hateing me

r-just to let you know angad kripa already hates you so you have nothing to lose go tell kripa you love her

a-no what if i chock or trip or something

r-just go kissing her was not but telling her i love you is hard for you

a-yes

r-guys i tell you, angad go and tell her before i tell her my self

a-NO you dont say any thing got it, i will tell her

angad hangs up the phone

r-(thinking)works every time

in the dark ally

angad starts walking behind kripa thinking of ways to say i love you

a-(thinking)kripa i love you, no no that wont work. kripa your so nice a preaty and loveing and perfect and i love you will you marry me, thats perfect i will tell her that

angad taps on kripas shoulder and kripa turns around to see angad

k-ANGAD!!!!

a-kr..kriiii...kriipp...krripaaa uummm uhhhh will you sleep with me

angad quickly covered his mouth in shock not knowing what he just said

a-ii...i..i-i-i-i-i-i-i-i i mean not ...i didnt...

kripa got so angry at angad she just kicked him in the knee and then took off her sandle and started hiting him nonstop. angad tried to stop kripa but it became worse because when angad tried to stop kripa it looked like angad was messing with kripa thats why kripa was hitting angad so other people around kripa started hitting angad also

7:00pm

in the 136 bed room house we see angad and rani in the liveing room talking we see angad had a lot of cut and bruses from when the people hit him and rani was puting cream on one part of angads forehead where angad got a deep cut

r-i cant belive you told her you want to sleep with her

a-aahh god can you stop putting that stupid cream it burns

r-well this is what you get when you tell a girl you want to sleep with her if it was me i would have hit you 50 billion times harder

a-well then i must be very luckly right now

r-luckly no because the next time kripa sees you iam preaty sure she will kill you

a-so what should i do

r-well it is obvious that if you talk to kripa in publice then other people puls kripa will hit you so what you need to do is get kripa alone and trap her so she has no choise but to listen to you

a-oh and how am i going to get kripa to be alone with me

r-you are the stupidest guy i have ever met leave the whole being alone with kripa to me all you worrie about is pretend to love komal and looking hansome and leave the rest to me.....i cant belive you realy said to kripa to sleep with you, man i wish i was there to see that scean

rani starts to laugh

a-it is so not funny

r-ok sorry just be sure you are one hour earl before the program starts tommrow

a-but what am i going to do one hour earl

r-you are very stupid

and rani starts laughing again

a-what!!!!!

r-look i have a plan in how you and kripa can be alone togather but you will have one hour to tell her what you feel ok this is what you have to do

rani tells angad some thing but we cant hear what angad and rani are talking about

r-ok good idea

a-it is a perfect idea


hope u like this part
next part comeing soon
comeing up angad and kripa (make out)or(fight)choose one!!!! 😉

OMG!! i can't believe angad said that 😊 😊 😊
it was just funny 👏
terffic job!!! keep it up 👏
can't wait 2 read the next part 😊 😊
continue soon 👏

Originally posted by: pal89711

OMG!! i can't believe angad said that 😊 😊 😊
it was just funny 👏
terffic job!!! keep it up 👏
can't wait 2 read the next part 😊 😊
continue soon 👏

lol just trying not to keep my readers bored i will try and post a lot of parts because sence iam going to be moveing i might not get to use the computer at all while iam shifting my things

oh god...i'd rather have them making out then fight lol...continue soon 😊

wow, if somebody said that to me, then i would probably slap them really hard on the face right in public....i think they're gonna defintiely fight and then maybe (i said maybe) make out 😉 😆

they should make out, lol! gReat part! Cont. soon!