DARK ALLY/LAST PART PAGE 54 - Page 10

Originally posted by: night girl

the starting parts are the boreingest of them all just wait it gets realy good when kripa gose in the dark ally😉

Can't wait 😆😳😛

BTW congrats on the new house!!!!

continue soon!!!!!!!! 😳 and i'm moving in a few days too!!!! 😆

part 7




k-how did you stop dreaming of killing your self

a-i thought you would never ask

angad came realy close to kripa that his body was presed with hers

a-i hid my dreams in the dark ally

k-you mean the ally that me and my sister went in...your crazy

a-look in to my eyes just once look carefully and look at what you see

kripa looked in to angads eyes into the deep brown dark eyes

k-i see nothing

a-and thats how i feel i feel like nothing like iam no one in this world. just like you feel its like are dreams are hold us back from being happy.i always dream of my mom and the truth is my mom will never come back and that is what was stoping me from liveing with my life i tried killing my self but someone stoped me and showed me all i have in this world i have a sister a father and i have a rich life.so now when every i think of my mom i go to the dark ally and keep all my thoughts and dreams of my mom over there.

k-then why are you telling me all this iam happy with my life

a-lier

angad turned kripa around and put both his arms around kripas stomch and pushed kripa aginst his chest

a-you failed all the test i gave you

k-you never tested me

a-i had, iam a doctor and a good one, like when i ask about your father you said he died in a car accident. your eyes said clearly something else happend, and when i touched you, you never slaped me like any normal girl would

k-so what if i lied and didnt slap you it dosent mean i am planeing to kill my self. and even if i was planeing on killing my self why do you want to help me why do you care its my life

a-i had sufferd a lot trying to kill me self and i had promised my self if i meet any one like me then i would help them no matter how much they hated me. that is the only reason i became a doctor

angad turned kripa around again so she was faceing him again. then angad took one hand away from kripas waist but kept a tuff grip on kripas back with the other hand angad took out a folded paper

a-you droped this while leaveing the dark ally. it says that a girl by the name of kripa sharma tried killing her self 3 times by sleeping pills. you neen mental help

k-NO I DONT!!!!(almost cry)

kripa left angads grip and was about to walk off the dance floor but angad grabed kripas hand and brought her back in to his grip

a-come on kripa tell me why do you want to kill your self. why do you want to ruin such a good life of yours

k-a good life,I HAVE NO LIFE!!!!NOW LET ME GO!!!!

a-fine we will talk about this later

angad let goes of kripa

k-no we will never talk about this again got it

by saying that kripa leaves angad and gose and finds rani. when kripa find rani she was still siting at the table but now she was talking to some guys.

k-rani i had to get home soon, please

r-ok i will go find bhi

rani finds angad and all of them go in the car back to angad and rani's house. kripa changes back to her normal clothes and gets her books

a-rani you stay here and get some sleep for tommrow and i will go drop kripa to her house

r-kripas my friend shouldnt i go drop her off

angad gives rani a mean look

r-your right i should stay here and get some sleep

k-no need i can walk home

a-no i will not let any guest of mine walk home alone

angad forces kripa out the door with him by puting an arm around kripas shoulder. as soon as rani shut the house door and angad and kripa were on the ground floor kripa started hit angad realy hard

k-LET ME GO!!!

kripa punchs angad in the stomch

angad grabed his stomch because it realy did hurt when kripa hit him. but when angad saw kripa runing realy fast to get away from him angad ran after kripa and caught up with her and grabed kripa around the stomch to stop her from runing off as angad grabs kripa it starts raining realy hard

a-kripa just listen to me

k-no!!!

kripa starts geting scared because angad was still a stranger to her kripa barely knew angad and here he was grabing her and touching her all over the place. kripa didnt know what to do so she starts screaming

k-HELP SOMEONE HELP ME!!!!!!

angad puts his hand over kripas mouth and pulls her in to a dark ally smaller then the one in the moring but in the ally it was so small angad and kripa could barly fit in there togather

a-kripa dont kill your self

k-i have no reason to live why wouldnt i kill my self(screams right in angad face)

it was raining so much that angad couldnt tell that kripa was crying and that to a lot kripa was crying a whole lot

a-if you have no reason to live then i will give you a reason to live just give me one day to show you that reason(yells right throught the loud rain drops)just one day if i cant give you a good reason in the one day then i will leave you alone for ever



hope u like this part 😊
next part comeing soon

awwww that was a nice part. so intresting. loved the whole dramatic scene of raining and K yelling, then A yelling. continue soon 👏

awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
this is incredibly intresting mann!!!!
i mean Dark Ally and all!!! thats a freat idea and stuff!!!!!
and then like ur writing it which just makes the story a hella lot better!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
well continue soon
this iss really intresting i cant wait to read more
luts of luv hina

Originally posted by: ruby89

awwww that was a nice part. so intresting. loved the whole dramatic scene of raining and K yelling, then A yelling. continue soon 👏

the only reason i thought of that scean was because it was raining out side my house and i wanted to go out in the rain and my mom wouldnt let me (lol me love the rain) so i thought about haveing angad and kripa get drenched in rain instead

Originally posted by: goldi2

awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
this is incredibly intresting mann!!!!
i mean Dark Ally and all!!! thats a freat idea and stuff!!!!!
and then like ur writing it which just makes the story a hella lot better!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
well continue soon
this iss really intresting i cant wait to read more
luts of luv hina

wow thats a lot of exicemt points😆i will try and continue as soon as possible maybe another part today also😉

awesome!!! I love the rain too!! My mom and dad always say i will get sick though.. Continue soon 👏

i love rain
plz contineu soon

awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!!!!!!