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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: night girl

angad dosnt like kripa he was just flurting with her just to see what she would do it was like a test to see how she acts and all

and trust me the whole love thing it is going to be very diffrent😉

lol different ehhh???😉

that is all we get from u different ofcourse in a good way!!!!

welll when r u continuing is my only question???? u siad u mihgt post another part...

well i dont see it!!!!1

lol jks

nyways try to continue okk

luv hina

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Posted: 19 years ago
part 8



k-i have no reason to live why wouldnt i kill my self(screams right in angad face)

it was raining so much that angad couldnt tell that kripa was crying and that to a lot kripa was crying a whole lot

a-if you have no reason to live then i will give you a reason to live just give me one day to show you that reason(yells right throught the loud rain drops)just one day if i cant give you a good reason in the one day then i will leave you alone for ever

kripa starts to calm down

k-just one day and then you will leave me alone

a-just one day as in 24 hours

k-when and were do you want me to come

a-i will come for you tonight go home change in to dry clothes when every one is sleeing come out side i will be waiting out side your flat

k-just 24 hours and nothing more, ok

a-ok, come on i will walk you home

angad grabs kripas had and both walk home in the rain holding hands in the darkness it was like one of those wierdest days in which you meet a person for the first time and within hours of your life you have no choice but to be with that person. angad and kripa reached kripas flat and kripa showed angad from the outside that she lived on the 3rd floor angad looked up at the 3rd floor window and saw tina at the window looking at him and kripa

a-kripa looks like your sister spoted me

k-angad if you want to wait in the rain be my guest buy it will talk tina like up till 12am to get her to go to sleep and right now its only 9pm

a-i have no problem waiting out in the rain for 3 hours but if your not out here by 12 iam comeing up to your room and foceing you out of that flat

k-you wouldnt

a-try me

kripa looked at angad and could tell he was serious. kripa left angad in the rain and went up to her flat and angad kept looking in the window and tina kept looking at angad. tina had a confused look on her face think what kripa was doing with angad. angad on the other hand just stood there looking in to the window

in kripas house

kripa opend the house door the lights to the kitchen/hall was closed the only light come from was her/tinas room kripa opend the door and saw tina still looking down the window

k-hey tina

t-didi why were you with that guy

k-he came to drop me home

t-but you do remember the guy was from this moring

k-ya but hes cool

t-didi has he been following you

k-no, you know rani well she foced me to come to her house and he is rani's older brother

t-ok well how come he is standing outside our flat looking up at are window

k-i dont know just go to sleep iam going to change and also go to sleep

kripa changed in to dry clothes around 9:30 it stoped raining and tina also was asleep kripa quitly got out of bed and when out the door and saw angad still waiting outside for her.

a-come on lets go

angad grabs kripas hand and they start walking

k-angad were are we going

a-you will see, i think you will like the place iam going to take you

angad and kripa walk for about one hour before they reach the place it was a house and a very big huge house make out of white bricks

k-were are we

a-this is my house, well my realy house were my dad lives

k-your dads inside

a-no hes out of town now come on its go in

k-so uummm no ones in the house

angad now has the famouse grin on his face

a-you dont trust me

k-i dont care what you do to me iam planing to kill my self any way (in a strait voice)

angad loses his girin

a-(stricked voice)once we get in to that house no one is allowed to talk about any type of kill iam here to give you a reason to live not to hear crap come out of your mouth got it

k-got it

angad and kripa go inside the house

k-wow your house is realy big

a-i know it had 136 bed rooms

k-i know rani told me

a-ok lets go up stairs to my room so i can get chance and we can start talking

k-ok



hope u like this part 😊
next part comeing soon
comeing up kripa watchs angad change out of his wet clothes 😉 😳
Edited by night girl - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
so hot....i really cant wait till u cont! u have to cont the suspense is great man!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
ooooo that was sooooooo awesum!!!!!! cant wait..cont soon
himani
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Posted: 19 years ago
con con con continue soon that was nice plz continue soon 😆 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
amazeing part
waiting for the part so continue soon plzzz 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: untouchable520

lol different ehhh???😉

that is all we get from u different ofcourse in a good way!!!!

welll when r u continuing is my only question???? u siad u mihgt post another part...

well i dont see it!!!!1

lol jks

nyways try to continue okk

luv hina

lol i just cont...my freakin science just told us today that we are havin science finalzzz🤢😡...so i have to study but i updated...so u read my ff as far as i remember u never commented😉..btw since ur 13 r u going to take the SSHSAT exam???

xoxoxo- Hawa😊

Edited by hawoo - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
ooo nice prt...cont soon 😊 ... i wonder wut his reason isss 😕
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Posted: 19 years ago
that was a nice part 👏 continue soon. wonder wht angad does in that 24 hours 😕 . continue soon soon soon 😆

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