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nareshSV

@nareshSV

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Posted: 13 years ago

wow hope it happens in the same way in the show...

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Posted: 13 years ago

Well done sweetie.. as I say Arnav has a lot of make up to do...

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priya pinky daswani

@pinky_blueskies

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Posted: 13 years ago

i could imagine this entire scene.. beautifully written 😊

do continue 😃

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Gunjan Mukherjee

@gunjanmkj

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Posted: 13 years ago

The sadist side of me was so pleased wid d situation arnav had to face..he dsrvs it..
bt d othr side of me felt bad for khushi..really really bad..i got worried abt her..n i second arnav's fear abt her leaving him forevr..
i was amazed at d way payal stood up for khushi..a true sister..i loved her in dis os..
hiru, u wrote it beautifully, like u alwez do..vry engaging n intriguing..

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claireDD

@claireDD

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

gosh !!! this is heart wrenching...

i thought u'd give it a sweet ending...
but im not complaining...i loved it anyway...

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yashasvi57

@yashasvi57

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Posted: 13 years ago

Ahh! Beautuful!! Absolutely wonderful,. You poured out the feelings so well!

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shagun-rocks

@shagun-rocks

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Posted: 13 years ago

do continue..this is pretty intense ...loved it..would love to see what happens next...also could you please PM me if possible??...😊

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neha

@nehusashhh

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Posted: 13 years ago

payal was 2harsh in dis os...i dint lyk dat...but i luvd arnav nd khushi...dey made d whole thing so beautiful

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sun_shine_girl

@sun_shine_girl

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Posted: 13 years ago

How do you write so beautifully!

My heart broke for both Arnav and Khushi.

Loved how you have woven Shyam's and Arnav's words together for Khushi.

And the fierce Payal was a very pleasant surprise.

Would you bring Arnav and Khushi together? Please.

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.x-bumblebee-x.

@.x-bumblebee-x.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Brilliant..:) !!!

P.s Erm.. will you continue..? Lol..

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