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Chandana

@chandana.s

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#61

fabulous...Very touchy ...

Very well written👏..Can feel the depth of the feelings while reading

Awesome job👍🏼

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arooshi

@arooshee

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#62

NICE ONE

WANT TO SEE SOMETHING LIKE THIS...

how can arnav go away so easily

in yesterday's episode also he was guilty for his di..

not one % ashamed of what he did with khushi...ridiculous!!

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@abracadabra

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#63

My Goodness! Khushi's deep anguish had me curling up and in tears.. Arnav's regret and fear of losing Khushi and Payal's fierceness was portrayed well in the story..

Wonderful story my dear..Please continue 😃

P.S: What's your name? 😊

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Zania

@zaniax

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#64

Tht was so touching & beautifully written.👏

Plz continue :)

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Shruti

@...shruti...

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#65

its beautifully written hiru

i hope you continue it

esp loved the payal part at last we got some reaction from her

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starzyasha

@starzyasha

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#66

Wow!! Beautifully written!!! Please do update the next part soon..
Thank you for the PM :)

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Alpenliebe

@Alpenliebe

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#67

nicely written...you gonna continue, aint you!!!😈

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fascination

@fascination

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#68

Amazing OS, You made me cry, and really want to see something like this in the show, I can't believe Cv's forgot this matter wich is so serious, Khushi's health !!!! The same words said by Shyam and Arnav !!!!!
Well written, emotions were perfect :)