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kvgmatri

@kvgmatri

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#51

That was so beautifully written. Touched my heart 👏

And I hope in the serial too Khushi remembers all the moments Arnav insulted her - no different from Shyam! She probably forgives, but cannot forget so easily.

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SaJanLuv14

@SaJanLuv14

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Cruel as always 😆 Still very beautiful please continue this one :3

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sumond

@sumond

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#53

I wanted just this to happen in the serial, so well written and very heart rendering, pls pls cont 👏

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rachna

@cicilia9

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#54

When r u updating ?it was brilliant .. 👍🏼

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zeedia

@zeedia

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#55

It was so emotional...you are a superb writer.
Thanx 4 pm.

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Priyya

@Priyya0511

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#56

Nope, not at all what i expected. Thnx for d pm

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Manju

@Drwho

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#57

More more, pretty please!

Don't stop at OS, make it into a story, SS/FF!

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Tahreem

@Angel-Girl

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#58

It was so beautifully penned down.

Poor Khushi & Poor Arnav

felt so bad

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Preeti

@preetihere

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#59

Ha! when Shyam, was saying all that esp the characterless etc etc i was comparing in my mind to Arnav's equally venomous words - i was thinking of looking up the dialogues later!!
Good work on that and to top it u have a story to match the agony!
Good one! 👏

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saucechips

@saucechips

Dazzler

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#60

this was truly beautifully written...i actually want some family attention to shift from Anjali to Khushi now..the way you portrayed it was lovely..great job!!