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Aashifa

@curledup

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Posted: 13 years ago

#441

Originally posted by: ...Doctor...

Khushi: Zara zara kiss me kiss me kiss me☺️

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...Doctor...

@...Doctor...

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#442

Originally posted by: AngelTeen

Dude, no wonder you are stuck on 'almost' kisses!

Itni der se ek kiss nahin kar paaye! :/

Arnav: Shut up Rae! I'm trying okay? It's tough! And why are you here, go away...shooo!

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#443

Originally posted by: ...Doctor...

Arnav: Shut up Rae! I'm trying okay? It's tough! And why are you here, go away...shooo!

How does it matter if I am here or not?! Kuch kar thodi na rahein hain aap! :p

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#444

*EDITED - The rest is on a restricted blog due to blatant plagiarism of my work.

Edited by AngelTeen - 12 years ago

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...Doctor...

@...Doctor...

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#445

Res :)

I'm first! 😆 🥳 *dances*

I want this soon! 😳 😆

Edit:

I was so happy with this chapter in the BEGINNING! But You..ughh!

Arnav was too cute in this update. Its so tough for him to behave like a normal human being still he's trying...isn't he? LOL! I loved the way he was confused when khushi came in front of him. He must be thinking "Kya bolun ab?"

Awww he is so new to all this. Focus Arnav! He needs time to adjust to these alien feelings. Glad that you didn't make him look cheesy! Infact I loved his reactions! Kaise samjhaun tumhe mera pehla pehla pyaar hai yeh...

Damn! Khushi misunderstood him :( Ab aisa hi hoga na if he'll not think before speaking. But its okay khushi will forgive him soon & voila she forgave him. Arnav is drooling over khushi day & night, he's gone buddy! And khushi is oblivious to all this...sigh..I hope she'll see him in 'that' way soon!

I loved khushi & her care towards his family. And I'm glad that she forgave him & is back to her jolly nature! What the! Arnav keeps on drooling yaar! When I see your face, there's not a thing that I would change coz you are amazing just the way you are...

And I knew that he'll lie! So I was not shocked. I would have been shocked if he would have admitted that he met her in the market 😆 As I told you, you know the characters very well & their reactions match their personality perfectly! So hats off to you Rae!

So khushi is finally confused & hence jalebis. Good now she'll think of Arnav in a proper way & that's what I want her to do ;)

Karan is sweet but I hate him coz obviously coz he's khushi's fiance! So I was right..huh? How can you Rae, How can you do this! I hate you! But I love you coz in the end it'll be Arhi & like it is said- It is the end that matters & nothing else! ;)

I feel bad for Arnav :( Dil jude bina hi tut gaye haath mile bina hi chut gaye ki likhe ne lekh kismet ne :(

P.S.- I love that picture so I won't remove it!

P.P.S.- My comment is longer than your update! Learn something from me 😆

P.P.P.S.- SRK ke songs post karna band kar! Though I love them but still give others a chance 😆

P.P.P.P.S- I hate you like I love you! 😎

P.P.P.P.P.S.- You are evil! But I can be evil too 😈

Edited by ...Doctor... - 13 years ago

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Aashifa

@curledup

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#446

2nd *cries*

-edit:

Ooo! What an Arnav! <3 I love Arnav, this was so beautiful his point of view was exhibited so right yet so funny! :D I loved it, right from when he said 'get to the details' their relationship has already begun ;) He has fallen in love, most definitely! The tongue drying, throat parching, all so right! So right!

<3 And then Khushis view, that's right KKG get in there! :D 😆 can't wait to see where you go with this?

Also Karan? Is it NK? Alsho! I spy with my little eyes something beginning with green! :D

Thank you for this <3

Love you

- Aashifa

Edited by curledup - 13 years ago

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Ritu

@.khanak.

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#447

ferf res

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Sorry,wanted to edit this earlier but grr I was too tired and lazy.😳

Anyways I just loved this part.It was amazing as usual...Too much sweetness in this and I AM LOVING IT!

Seriously I just can't see/read fics with redemption and seperations or where Khushi is married to someoneelse *choke*...This is just perfect and lets me forget all the stress and sends me to dreamland.

Bahaha Arnav was just...awhhh in this part.He behaved like a normal person who just fell in love.LOL He was in trance when she stood infront of him.

ROFL I knew it that he would never admit that he saw her at the market.😆

Okay here comes the twist...F**k she is engaged!!!! I hate Karan...well,don't blame me..I am a hardcore ArHi fanatic..I just can't see Khushi with someone else than Arnav...But Gee,I still love this.🤗

Edited by Ri_luvs_ArShi - 13 years ago

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Sona

@mistyrains

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#448

Res

-edited-

Call me sadistic, but I'm super happy with this chapter.

Detail mein, Khushi , the way you've written about her is so magical, it's like she is this sudden burst of energy and joy to an otherwise dull room.

And Arnav, the way you have described every minute feeling, thought in his mind, is sigh. You've got me stumped,literally. It was magical in every sense, like Arnav was in a trance, which he was I think.

But so typical and expected of him to act like he did, ASR kahika. But still I love him. Grr.

And the Karan part, aap toh full blown Bollywood picture dikhane waale ho humein, right?

Me loves you for this story, it makes me so HAPPY!:)

Edited by mistyrains - 13 years ago

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thebubblespop12

@thebubblespop12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#449

This story is so freaking cute!!!
Awww..I hope Khushi is not his fianc. Poor Arnav, his dreams would be crushed before they even fully formed!!
Thanks for the update!!