Mirage #3 Check note on pg 149 for next thread! - Page 9

oh dear my post are getting loopier by the minute, it's cause i'm sleep deprived!!

Ahhh apologies for missing so many updates! I was on holiday with barely any wifi :(
But wow. I just caught up and jeez I love the way this story has progressed! You've portrayed everyone's emotions so so well and I honestly feel like I am Khushi or Arnav or even Aman when I'm reading in their point of view. It's fabulous to read. Aman is such an interesting character and has a big effect on Arnav. I even remember reading a conversation with Arnav that HE dominated as opposed to Arnav as usual.
I'm glad Khushi didn't conform to society and did what felt right by having sex with Arnav. But I must say I loved the scene after that when Arnav revealed some more of his past and hinted to Khushi about his life. It was beautifully painted. My heart went out to him- poor guy!
And thank god you're not leaving IF, it wouldn't be the same without your writing! And I hope that everything that is going on in your life is sorted soon and that's Khushi's happiness spreads to you too!
And inline your little notes at the beginning/end of the chapters hahah theyre really funny. And omg, how awesome would it actually be if Aman was gay. High voltage drama right there!
Thank you for the PM and for the story! :)

I really wish it's Arnav himself and if not him then Aman but no one else xD cuz I think if Arnav comes out on his own, not only does it deepen his and Khushi's relationship, but I think in the end no matter who's mouth triggers the revelation, Arnav owes the true explanation to Khushi, she's given him everything and honesty only with all the love she's filled with

Chapters 38 and 39: Loved them. Lol, after your note I was like "But he never seemed gay. And he always referred to Arnav has his friend. Is she kidding?" Lol, glad you put the second note in. Also, thanks for explaining the Khushi marriage issue. I wasn't sure if she was like the Khushi in the show or not but your explanation helped.

That's amazing, I nearly started crying. Great work x

Stalked again!

I am so glad he has told her the t Ruth almost

Waiting for the revelation..Awesome update as usual

Ohk...first thing first...stop being aadatein at 2...it can give us a heart attack...um still trying to figure out...if wot u said about aman was true lol...

Ha ha...aman gay!!

I seriusly felt id dere is a need for khushi to b shattered...i mean I cant c khushi and arnie apart...bt den its ur story and u olready said "its dark"...and if she has to heartbroken like completely den it can b ARNAV...it shud b either la,aakash...or probably she overhears ARNAV z convo wid some members if d gang...

Omg!!...um olready waiting for d D-day...