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Shweta1691

@Shweta1691

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#91

So he dodges the "bullet" once more n pacified her with half truths🥱

Waiting for the day she gets know the other half

Good update

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umama shahid

@umamashahid

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#92

as i read what u mentioned at the top...i was like.."what the ****??????

this cant be true..he always address him as bhai"...the whole update instead of being emotional i was smiling nd laughing like a fool...and now when i read what u mentioned at the bottom ..i thought "so it was just a joke, thank god"...nd yes u r so evil...u want us to deal with a shattered khushi...plz dont do that...well yes i know its important...bt phir bi...uff nevermind..will c to it afterwards...hope arnav reveals 2 her himself...plz do this favour atleast...now for the previous update...i was feeling hooottt in an A.C. room...u know what i mean, right...that part was just awesome...glad that at last arnav confessed his love to her...yayyy.
continue soon

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velangini

@velangini

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#93

arnie baby's past is so painful

he has to go through so much at very young age

fabulous update

arnav is slowly opening upto khushi

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Preeti

@preetihere

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#94

How can i have a secret crush on Aman if u go and make him gay ☺️
Shatter Khushi? So no running off into the sunset at some isolated island eh?😭 Yeah i guess that was coming anyways, she's such a ray of sunshine - i hope for her to get lots and lots of love!

i like how u used the title to describe what Khushi's optimism is for Aman and Arnav...same way the dreams that Arnav gives Khushi is also a mirage! That's beautiful!

Edited by preetihere - 13 years ago

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Salsa

@coldy07

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#95

Fab update as usual..Right blend of emotions.

Loved Khushi-Arnav's conversation. I liked how you gave more details to Arnav's thoughts, while he was speaking to Khushi. He obviously didn't share the whole truth, did he?

One could actually feel Arnav's pain. Khushi is just too good..Aww..I feel for her already.

I like how you make Khushi speak those sentences with innocence, which prick Aman and Arnav...😛

Nothing else, your note at the start, had me curious throughout...😆

But, I still don't get the first point..False alarm?? [:/]

As for the final revelation, let her gather bits and pieces from different people, and finally from Arnav, as he cannot handle the guilt of hiding this from her anymore.😳

Edited by coldy07 - 13 years ago

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bablio09

@bablio09

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#96

Fabulous update Rach. Arnav has started revealing his past. i think it should be continued by him cause if someone else tells her may be she will not believe and the effect will be lesser than when she hears it from Arnav. but that is just my POV. you know the best person to do it. will wait for your update