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Posted: 12 years ago
your writing is so close to real.. it is not melodramatic but it has a lot of thrills.. khushi fearing about her own safety along with Arnav's is so normal but normally it is not shown.. it is like to worry about your own safety is crime if you are in love is motto everywhere.. i loved the way you portrayed khushi state of mind and how she is handling all these.

beautifully written..
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh nooo...Please Aman remember to rise above your turmoil...Arnav and you can save your family together 😭

The Raizadas are stuck up thats why they lost their daughter and i didnt expect much except from the grandmother, i thought she wud want to see Aranv at least ...maybe these people aren't allowing her!


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Posted: 12 years ago
This chapter knocked the air out of me. Arnav's sorry, the whole part was written with a heartbreaking tenderness. I love how Khushi felt nostalgic, worried for Arnav. And the last lines had me biting my nails. Do continue soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
that was so amazing
khushi is such a sweetheart
she made her choice
i think akash is going to turn negative,isn't he
hope arnav stays safe
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wonderful update !!!!


The part with Aman was nice but Aman changed a lot in the past days ! I mean He seemed so indifferent and so cold with Arnav ! I'm sure if it was the former Aman, he would be completely stunned because Arnav apologized him and he did the first step !! 😕😕

I really wanted Aman to be back with Arnav, but now that I know Aman return to Arnav because of the plan, I'm quite upset with Aman !!
Because all the while he only thought about his plan with Shyam and not about their friendship !!! 😔😔

However it was quite funny when Khushi almost forced Arnav to apologise when he didn't want to 😃😃
He still want to show his attitude 😆😆
and I also love the way he talked to Aman, it was so familiar and so warm at the same time !!!

I don't understand why Arnav couldn't see what Khushi saw in Aman !! I mean Arnav knows Aman since more than 10 years (I think 🤔🤔) !!!
I guess it's Khushi's power !! 😆😆
Aman, you should tell everything to Khushi, I'm sure she would understand and try to help you, and you would have a great weight off your mind 😉😉

So Arnav doesn't like Khushi working with Aakash 😲😲
He's so jealous 🤣🤣
But for Khushi's sake, he agreed 😃😃

Why Aakash didn't expect to see Khushi ??? I didn't get it 😵
Well what Aakash said disappointed me a lot but I understand him !!! Maybe he also want to protect his family !! But it's sad !!
I really wanted Arnav to learn more about his mom thanks to his Nani and maybe find about his father !!! Not that I want Arnav to know that Abaas is his father but Khalid to know Arnav is Aarthi's son !!!
And I also want to know who killed Aarthi !! I'm sure it's that creep Abbas !!! 🤢🤢

The Khalid part was nice too!! I love the way Khalid talked to Arnav, it was so warm !!! Just like a father !
So he agreed Arnav to get married with Khushi : so nice !!
But it's quite sad that Arnav couldn't ask what he wanted to Khalid !!
But I'm afraid : if Khalid refused 😔😔

I loved Khushi and Arnav ride !!!!
And it was so cute
I enjoyed reading that part !!!!
And yes finally Khushi told him about Raizadas !!!

But I just hope Aakash didn't lie to Khushi about he and his family don't want anything to do with Arnav !! Maybe Nani wants Arnav to enter in her family but Aakash lie because he doesn't want to !!!
😡😡

The last part with Aman really scares me !! Please Aman don't do that !! you'll regret it !!!
Please !!
Arnav would be completely broken of you betray him !!!!


Rachel, I loved your update !!!

But i should tell you that my semester is about to start, so maybe I can't be able to stalk your FF often 😭😭
So please forgive me if I comment late !! It doesn't mean that I get bored of your FF, or that I don't like it !! But just that I need to focus more on my studies 😕😕

🤗🤗



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Posted: 12 years ago
Amans situation is like the exponential version of being between a rock and a hard place.. I really feel for him, but unless he carries out what is going on in his mind, I'll still reserve judgement..although on the other hand, even if he does do it, judging him would still be a little difficult.
Khushi is so brave that she chose Arnav! Ive said this already but still, it's really commendable..
And jealous Arnav = adorable Arnav!
Loved the update!

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Posted: 12 years ago
great ...perfect update...with exactly the right amount of everything.

Rachel hope your doing good.

take care

sri.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh My Gosh.

Should I be happy that things are getting better for them or should I be scared that even Aman seem to turn out against Arnav.

This is scary.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Omg, I fear what's going to happen to Arnav and Khushi's future ;(
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was an amazing update!!!!
Loved it!!?:D

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