Arhi: Desert Rose Chapter 11 updated pg 113

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kethgauthami1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

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great going...k payal is pregnant with akash child and he is missing...new twist in chap-1 nly...

loved the update...thanks for pm

k in prologue i missed this end line, Does Arnav marriage is on cards...so many doubts with nly chap-1 😉

Edited by kethgowthami - 13 years ago

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nia252

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

ohhh god

wats up wid akash???

n four years?

has arnav got married

nooo

update soon pls

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nivii

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

Well, akash u better have gd reason for disapearing...
Pls continue! I really like this characterisation of kushi. :)

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peepli

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

Khushi is so strong in this!!!n 4 yrs, did arnav get married n is akash really a cad?? trust payaliya to go n get pregnant...lol

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Dhara Singh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#65

Ohhh you just turned Payal's life into a mess and I feel there's some more mess waitiing for us !!!!!

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angeldream14

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Posted: 13 years ago

#66

loved it

awesome

hope akash is nt fooling around with her. payal hv so much trust upon him.

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shonagudia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#67

Ok my first qsn is what Suraj the saint is doing here 🤣
when i read about palak i was like pls no surajji here but i am loving it...

Khusi and Arnav met 4 yrs back... you took a 4yrs leap between prologue and chapter 1 😆
Why can't for one situation payal act mature. being the elder sister.
She is pregnant with akash's child in just 2 meetings.. Are you making him a villain here.. Hope not...
Arnav was supposed to mrg in a week time in the prologue.. Is he really mrd.. Pls nooo...

Can't wait the for the next part... In one chapter you left so many qsns...
continue soon

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Shivika23

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Posted: 13 years ago

#68

awesome update

continue soon

can't wait to read more

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Gargee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#69

What a fab Story Hon? This is Wonderful! So Is Akash a Jerk, or is he really in Love but Someone (Cough Mami Cough) is holding him back? Oh Poor Payal- she's Pregnant! And Khushi, the burdens on the poor girl will never stop will they?

I Love this Story- Please keep writing fast Honey, and I Promise to comment!😃 Thanks for the PM!

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charlotte74

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Posted: 13 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: shonagudia
Ok my first qsn is what Suraj the saint is doing here 🤣
when i read about palak i was like pls no surajji here but i am loving it...

Khusi and Arnav met 4 yrs back... you took a 4yrs leap between prologue and chapter 1 😆
Why can't for one situation payal act mature. being the elder sister.
She is pregnant with akash's child in just 2 meetings.. Are you making him a villain here.. Hope not...
Arnav was supposed to mrg in a week time in the prologue.. Is he really mrd.. Pls nooo...

Can't wait the for the next part... In one chapter you left so many qsns...
continue soon

Of course Surajji of sweet stall fame has to be there 😊 He is the quintessential good boy and Arnavji ...well everyone knows about him... Khushi can easily have the good boy... but is that what she really wants?