Arhi: Desert Rose Chapter 11 updated pg 113

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purplelove

@purplelove

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#81

Wow really nice update for chapter 1. You have moved the story a lot from the brief meeting in the prologue (Khushi). The Payal and Akash saga, very unexpected turns. Looking forward to reading more. ⭐️

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Isha

@gilmore

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Posted: 13 years ago

#82

she is pregnet he dosent came what an ... lets see how they will find them and also bazzigar

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Nira khan

@nirbasito

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Posted: 13 years ago

#83

it's FABULOUS work!!!!! 👍🏼

concept is very strong...

I love this part! ❤️

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arhifrvr

@arhifrvr

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Posted: 13 years ago

#84

wow... there r so many questions after reading this update...

but i guess the cake goes to...

WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH AKASH???????????????

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Gunjan Mukherjee

@gunjanmkj

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#85

Woah! Payal's pregnant! Wid akash's child!!! Wat the..! In first chapter only such a news! And akash's mssng!! Double 'what the..!'
akash, u bttr hv a good reasn behind dis dsappearing act..
m intrigued..

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Nehasupnfan

@Nehasupnfan

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#86

Holy!!! Well way to go Payal! LOL :D I can't wait to see what happens next! :) Thanks for the PM :)

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#87

akash better have a good reason for not showing up knock the girl up and never came poor khushi she is doing everything to keep her sister happy hope payal is not let down thanks for the pm awesome update