FF: Indecent Proposal #2 [Thread 3 - Page 158]

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@-Sanjana-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1051

oh my god... are you updating this anytime soon? I'm absolutely in love with it. Read the whole thing just now... will be waiting for updates! Bechaari Khushi... please update soon... and do send a pm my way!!!!

Thank uuu!!!

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khushiiXOXO

@khushiiXOXO

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1052

...so happy 2day...bcoz arnav & khushi,finally,said "i ❤️ u dammit!!""'

n others must be too .. so in continuation of dat celebration, how about u gifting us an update??cool,rite???😉 ..btw,it cud b 65th independence day gift to all!!now dont dat make u feel all patriotic??😃

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Anjali250194

@Anjali250194

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1053

Great update! I like how you cannot bear to write about Shyam and Khushi (I don't think i could bear to read it! It's hard enough watching it!)
But the chapter was great too...I like how Khushi told him off, and how Arnav reacted by remembering his Di's broken marriage, as it offered a lot of insight into his character. I feel sorry for Khushi though because Arnav has destroyed her dream of marriage.

Can't wait for the next part!

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hodan1987

@hodan1987

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#1054

Great update. Looks like Arnav is regretting what he did. I just really don't like the way he talks to Kushi sometimes. "I don't like to repeat myself" Seriously, controlling much. Can't wait to see what happens next.

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1055

This is one of my favorite ff's. Love the different, more honest concept of how they are together and Arnav is true to his character. I would not expect him to turn into lover boy and totally go out of character.

You are showing a sizzling chemistry between the two of them, interspersed with her naivet and poignant thoughts. He is noticing the innocence. Let's see where you take this.

Edited by Anamika100 - 13 years ago

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niania13

@niania13

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#1056

Khushi explained to Arnav her point of view about marriage, will it change something for him?
Arnav's right about Payal's groom's family.

I loved the end of the update!