FF: Indecent Proposal #2 [Thread 3 - Page 158]

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aeyshaalim

@aeyshaalim

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#1031

Atleast he realise wht payel or khushi felt
Awesome update

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SunshineGirl6

@SunshineGirl6

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1032

Nice one..strted just now !!!
Pm me from nw on plx !!!

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-JollyJabeen-

@-JollyJabeen-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1033

Yuks, I may say this in all my comments but I seriously cannot stress this enough, You are an EPIC writer! Seriously, I adore your work and literally do a happy dance when I see a PM from you! .😳

Coming to the update, Fabulous as usual. The beggining scene where Arnav is rubbing Khushi's back as she chokes on grains of rice, FANTASTIC! Just like a husband! 😍

The way Khushi screamed at him, The way Arnav dealt with Nani, It was amazing! Hats of to you and your imagination! 😆 Not to mention the Anji scene/flashback as well, Very well done! 😛

I think there's def something their, Maybe Arnav hasn;t completely changed but clearly Khushi's making a difference, A subtle difference! 😃 GOSH, This FIC Is so intriguing! 🤗

Do update sooner & Thanks for the PM!

Edited by -JollyJabeen- - 13 years ago

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fffan123

@fffan123

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#1034

Amazing update. Poor Khushi and Poor Arnav. 😭 😭 😭

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@flowers4u

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#1035

Amazing update good robsee kushi let some steam of ...love the glimse of arnav behind the asr ...continue soon

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Teenu

@t33nu.p

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#1036

great update, really enjoyed it 👍🏼

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smarty94

@smarty94

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#1037

res.

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woOw that was an awesome update mate👏 thank you so much for the pm, really appreciate it😃

i can only imagine her feelings, it wasnt really her fault😭 and i absolutely love you fr showing such a scene where KHUSHI clarifies herself 😉not lyk in the drama, where till 200 episodes ARNAV believed that she was sent by a rival company -.- idiot! bt i am happy he realised wht she wants, happy to know he used his brain😆 and put the CORRECT dots together😛 i hope he complies with her wishes *fingers crossed*😳

thank u once again fr the pm😊 take care and update soOn😃

Edited by smarty94 - 13 years ago

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aadyakali

@aadyakali

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1038

God Khushiz pain and anger is so palpable. i feel like hugging her better. To have all yr dreams shattered and having to means of putting it back tohether is a horrible feeling ... you feel such utter helplessness that you want to thrash everything within reach and beyond.

That was a lovely update... perfectly written ... each word most aptly used. Thank you.