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Deepika

@_Deepika_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#371

Hey Swthrt...🤗
This update was amusing...i loved the way you described her state of mind...her confusions...her feelings..her attraction towards HIM...

I showed her my knitted brows to make her realize that she is no one to comment on MY Dangar.

Awww..possisive...loved it...

Those doppelganger were so cute...loved it...

"Oh! god. He is so cute."My doppelganger said with her hands on either side of her cheeks standing behind Swayam.

Loved the new mature swayam ...oops sorry ...Danger...he is cute...yet mature...he kept his ringtone which defined their equation...awww...adorable much...

U left in such a crucial point...not fair...Now plz plz update soon girl...m waiting...eagerly😳

Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago

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Shishir Darsh

@marauder

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#372

Really this was the longest update? It didn't felt like that. Infact I went through it quite fastly :p Well Coming ot the update it was nicely penned. Sharon's doppleganger continue to amuse and infact this time she was even more awesome as she appeared at the most unusual times. But the best bit of the update for me was to see another dimension of Swayam's personality. To see him as a mature sensible person was indeed pleasant. Waiting for the update.

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Priyambada Subudhi

@pri_tanvi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#373

Finally the update is here!! Nice to read Swayam's POV.
Pls update next part soon

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Snowey

@Snowey

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#374

Aha...finally you updated :)

Pleasure read and Shaorn's doppelganger are real amusing and i like how they add some comical element and at certain times some clash as well. Swayam on the other hand seems to be a changed guy loving the confused state of SwaRon and looking forward to the next update.

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swa-ron

@swa-ron

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#375

finally u updated...

A good one

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Anindita Sengupta

@Anindita91

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#376

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unres

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hey dear sis...🤗 i am really very sorry for commenting this late...i do remember the rule but this sorry is needed...well coming to the update...it was awesome dear...loved it...sharon's thoughts were beautifully penned..n the doppelganger was so so cute...n wow loved this side of swayam...he didn't go out because he knew Sharon would not be able to handle the pain alone...n that part where his grin vanished seeing her in pain was amazing..he has set the ringtone as per their equation...awww...so sweet of him...loved reading this update dear...will be waiting for the next update...update soon..

p.s: its good that u have planned to update sooner this time...n don't worry i will keep reminding u about ur plan..if by chance u forget...😛 so update ASAP..

Edited by Anindita91 - 12 years ago

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Neeraj

@nature2

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#377

amazing updt👏 but ooo late yaar

😕

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Roger

@HPHolic-3

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#378

Awesome update
Sharon n her doppelganger part was amusing.Its good to read about mature swayam in this update.
Waiting for next part

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#379

AWWHHH, I loved how Swayam went from laughing to serious when he realised that Sharon was actually in pain !! He's so sweet when he made up his mind that he needs to take care of Sharon and not go out and also setting a ringtone that fits both of them...AWWHHH !! I wonder what's going to happen now when they're so close to each other !!