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ananya randhawa

@Ananya.SwaRon

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#381

Originally posted by: swaronamit
I just forget abt this ff...thnk god u updated so soon

is that a sarcastic statement? 😕

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Amit

@Swaronvrushan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#382

😛

Originally posted by: Ananya.SwaRon
is that a sarcastic statement?

yup

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ananya randhawa

@Ananya.SwaRon

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#383

Originally posted by: swaronamit
😛 yup

waiting for your comment regarding the update and not the sarcasm.

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Amit

@Swaronvrushan

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#384

Okk critics apart i like the update...how u mention both swaron pov tht was nice to read..also i luv how swayam was concern for sharon when he will nt b there for her...loved it nd pls update fast nd nd nd thnk u for the pm

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Nikki

@HR-DMG4life

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#385

Superb update and thanks for the pm :)

Nikki <3

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Binuja(binju)

@Anomic_loner

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#386

phew...finally i read all the parts of this ff...😎

i loved each and every part of it...starting from their meet in Toronto,their stay together,their cute nok-jhoks and finally they realising their love...everything was just beautifully penned down...😊

i like ur style of writing...its different...do update the next part soon...😃

Edited by binuja_ - 12 years ago

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Sanskriti

@SanskritiS

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#387

Awesome update 😊

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enrique305

@enrique305

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#388

awesome update😊

loved it so very much 😊

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Nehal92

@Nehal92

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#389

OMG! did i read it right?? I mean seriously Kiddo decided to update...hmm interesting! 😉

well coming to the update...i liked it! you do have a good hols on English language girl!...

honestly i had to read all the chapters again to get the flow of the story 😛 Never mind i believe you will update early this time!

i liked the doppelganger Sharon! will swaron will talk to each other properly even for once in this SS!

I dont mind if they wont i like them this way!

And this was a long update Huh! this was a very short update indeed!

one request do update soon this time! Plz...

Love you kiddo

your sissy ❤️

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Mihika

@Legilimens.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#390

Firstly, sorry for commenting late..
And secondly..for the update..OMG!!!
Why is there a cliffhanger??
It was brilliantly penned down and I am glad you wrote according to both, Sharon and Swayam's point of views..It's so cute, the way Sharon admires Swayam and his cute face..Aww!!I liked the doppelganger part!!It was amusing!!
It was so sweet when Swayam turned all serious on realizing that Sharon was hurt and she was in pain!!And it was good to see that he really cares a lot...He made up his mind to stay back because he wanted to take care of her!!
Then the ringtone part..Swayam actually set his ringtone is such a way that it defined their equation...It was nice!!It's good to read the gradual development in their equation..
Why did you leave it on a cliffhanger??To some extent, the last part was in a way more enthralling, and it made my adrenaline level go up..As the SS is proceeding, it's getting more and more exciting!!
Update soon this time!!
P.S - 9 pages in word??I didn't take much time to read it..:P
Nicely written..Update soon...😊

Edited by tanha29 - 12 years ago

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