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Simren

@DanCing_DiVa_SK

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Posted: 12 years ago

#351

Hey nice updates...⭐️⭐️

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Phantasm

@Phantasm

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Posted: 12 years ago

#352

Edited

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/68812168�

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#353

Awesome update ananya! 👏
It was amazing funn to read sharon's pov...you have carried out her pov and has explained it so well that there was no point in between that i felt bored. I seriously loved it. 😳

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Mihika

@Legilimens.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#354

Hey Ananya,

Firstly apologies for commenting *so* late and congo for becoming a goldie :D

Now coming to the update, it was beautifully penned. Sharon's state of mind is awesomely written and looks like she is slowly coming in terms with her feelings for Swayam. She was talking with her conscience and was slightly blushing too, thinking about the "almost" kiss :)

"I love him."

At least she said this, though she "corrected" her statement later on :P

I am glad that she now thinks that Swayam is sweet :)

Jennifer Lopez drool..Oh my god I think this summarizes most of his reactions is like oh puhlease. Am I jealous of her? no, I am not. Why would I be? I am fine with the fact that he loves her. No-no rectified, he likes her, just the way I like Ryan Reynolds.

This was certainly the best bit of the update...It was awesome, seeing Sharon convince herself that Swayam likes Jennifer Lopez just like she likes Ryan Reynolds. 😊

Hope she comes in terms with her feelings soon..

Overall, great work from your side.. 😊

Edited by tanha29 - 12 years ago

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tanuka

@Tanuka_TanHa

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#355

EDITED :D

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/68812556

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Gunpreet

@gunnu1

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#356

sorry for being late!!

D update was oh-so-masstt!!

hehee!

But y is she not realizing that she loves him!!

Saari baatein yaad h?

Soo cute!!

ty for d pm nd plsss cont. soon! =D

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ShrutikaSwaRon

@ShrutikaSwaRon

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#357

Awesome update...u have very well written sharon's pov...luved how she was thinking all about swayam n the way she was arguing wid her conscience...continue soon n thnx for pm.

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beeny

@beeny

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#358

hey ananya knha gayab ho gai he tu ajj kal..
sorry for being late for 2 updates..
loved it both last two soo sweet dat sharon finally realizeing dat something she feel abt him sers.. so happy for dat
waiting for naet update
Thanx for PM😃