OS: Just Like Him*Re-posted* - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
#91
nice update
plz i want to read further
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
plz can u mail me the blog link

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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
yaar get me ur blog link plzz im miss ing ur updates plzz
dont deny
waiting hope u pm me

HAPPY NEW YEAR
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94

wooww...

nice start...

want to read more..

quite interesting...

plz do give me the link of ur blog...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
I would luv to read the further story.
Please can u pm me the link to ur blog...
And reading this update...I'm vry sure ur stories will be truly amazing...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
lovely update...pls give the second part to it...,really want to know further...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
⭐️ Its really good!!! Loved it 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely OS...was all through mentally blasting ASR for being foolish enough to let his wife and son go away from his life. But then, the unexpected twist in the end, revealing that it was Anjali, who'd forced Arnav to let her go, so that he could lead his own life with his family. Glad that Arnav at least wasn't myopic enough to again inflict pain and loss on Khushi...

But Really felt for the Anjali in your story...would have been a huge step for her, to set herself loose from the tight bonds she shared with her only sibling. And its so bittersweet, that she had a son who reminded her of her "Chotte". Still, its perhaps for the best, that he didn't resemble her perfidious, pathological liar of a husband! 😊

Are you planning to continue this? Just had a couple of queries as to why Anjali was still married to Shyam, knowing his truth; and why she felt it necessary to move away from Shantivan. Had she perhaps earlier mistreated Khushi so much she felt she was unworthy of forgiveness?

Just curious 😊 But thanks again for the wonderful piece, and indeed, re posting in the new format. As a reader, I am glad that talented writers like you have decided to stick around and give us the benefit of reading such well crafted stories.

A plague on all plagiarizers, I say!! 😊

Cheers..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99
Loved ur update. Especially the way u portrayed the emotions :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
This is a gd way to deter others frm copying...good for u dearie n tanx for putting it up here...

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