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Posted: 12 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: Asyalover


Agreed with her ...plzzz update na di.😭


luv u asyalover n rash for your comments...i m really happy tat u guys liked this story...tomrrow i'll definitely update nxt part...luv u guysšŸ¤—
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

yesss...em MADLY waiting for 2nd meeting...jaDI SE UPDATE DO DI..PLZ PLZ...

tomorrow pakka...just thodasa likhna baki reh gaya hai...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
ok ok ...koi baat nahi...
tell me the time..plzz...correctly bolnaa...
i want to reserve my cmnt first here on ur gorgeous f...
plzz...
yaa do one thing- plzz reserve a post for ur update...so dat i can reseved just next to u for a coment...done????
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: cherryberry293

Heya Girls, I m Khyati nd I m New on IF
I'm a fan of Rajat nd Mugdha nd badly missing them on screen

Mayuri, I came across to this story while searching in Fan Fiction forum and I must say this story is wowww... Written in simply yet beautifully

I wanna join u all in dis journey of Prithvi nd Nandini... Am I getting a chance to join it?

Plz pm me whenever u update next 😊


hi khyati... welcome to IF...we all r missing rtmc badly...well rajat toh ab jodha akbar mein aane wala hai...bas waiting for mugdhas show...i hope woh dono as a couple phirse tv pe aaye...
i m glad khyati that u liked this story...i'll surely pm u...and dont worry we all rtmc fans will love to have u...rtmc fan club...deko ek aur member add ho gaya...and there r many amazing rtmc ffs in this fan fiction, if you want i'll send u their names...all of them r wonderful and fabulous ...i m sure u'll get addicted to all stories...once again welcome😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

ok ok ...koi baat nahi...

tell me the time..plzz...correctly bolnaa...
i want to reserve my cmnt first here on ur gorgeous f...
plzz...
yaa do one thing- plzz reserve a post for ur update...so dat i can reseved just next to u for a coment...done????


done..i'll ud tomorrow at 5 pm
Edited by mddmayuri - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
sorry for delay...

part 5

Nandini furiously threw her backpack on chair as soon as she entered her room. Her room was 12*14 sq. feet painted in white colour. There were two single beds placed against the opposite walls of the room. Moonlight entered into the room through medium sized black bordered window located in between the beds. Hostel had offered them one old study table and cupboards, which were kept near their beds. Her room was unusually silent. She looked around the room to find her one and only roommate Maria sleeping on her books. Half of her bed was covered with books and she twined her body to adjust herself in the remaining space. Blue blooded species of bookworm that is one of the 100 names Pisto used to refer her. For Maria, her studies was her life, most of the time her head was bowed in her books but still she managed to listen to her conversations and took time to taunt her. Her specs resided in the middle of her eyes and nose. Nandini slowly went towards her and removed her specs and kept it on the table.

Nandini had planned to do her assignments at night, but due to long tiring previous hours, she wasn't able to write anything, or more importantly concentrate on anything, so she decided to do it early in the morning. While recalling the most unexpected hours of her life she slipped into her night dress. The more she was thinking about him the more she was getting restless. By his overall personality one could easily made out that he was a man of means, but then why he was travelling by train. There was something familiar about him but she failed to recognize it. Her chain of thoughts broke when suddenly her phone started ringing loudly. She hurried to her backpack and hastily searched for her phone before it would wake Maria up. But before she could find her phone, Maria shouted while keeping a pillow on her head "shut that f***ing box off"

Nandini hurriedly found her mobile and without looking at the caller id she answered the phone.

Before she could say hello, a girl on the other side started yelling " Nandini, where the hell are you, why ain't you picking our calls, Do you have any idea how worried we have been'.first, when I called, your phone was out of coverage area and when it was ringing you were not picking it up'Are you okay?" Pisto panicky blurted out her worry in one breath.

"Relax, Pisto, I m alright, just reached the hostel" Nandini whispered not wanting to wake Maria up.

"What, you reach hostel now, but you left at 7 and now it's almost 12, where have you been?"

"Actually, I missed my train"

"What? How"

Before Nandini could answer, Maria yelled from back "hey, if you want to talk, then move your ass out of the room"

Nandini closed her eyes at her choice of words; she could have used more sensible words. In the earlier days of her hostel life, Nandini was completely shocked with the language people used around her, she hated it when anybody uses any foul language, but slowly she got used to it. But still it bothers her somewhere. But this is one of the things about which she can't do anything.

Nandini slowly whispered " Pisto, it's a long story, I'll tell you tomorrow, I m alright, okay, don't worry, I'll see you tomorrow"

'' why are you whispering'ohh, are you disturbing bookworms sleep'.then I think you should take advantage of it , and should yelled from the top of your voice'..and wait if you can't do it then just keep your phone near her bed, I'll do the rest of the work" Pisto jumped in excitement. It has been Maria and Pistos favourite hobby to annoy each other. None of them leave any chance to put dirt on each other. And if she did what Pisto said then there would be a clamour of all the ill words in every language and it would get worst when Pisto would start with hindi galis. In order to avoid waking the matron up, because of shouting of abusive words Nandini quickly rejected her idea "Pisto, plz don't start now, I'll see you tomorrow, okay, bye, gud night"

Realising her tired voice Pisto sighed "okay, I leave this golden chance for you'.. But tomorrow you have to tell me every detail of what happened, okay, bye"

"bye" Nandini smiled as she cut the call.

Nandini set the early morning alarm to complete her assignment and kept her phone on charging and jumped on her bed. After making her night prayer to Shivji she lied flat on her stomach and buried her face under the pillow. The instant she closed her eyes, the handsome hunk she met few hours ago appeared in front of her. Nandini immediately snapped open her eyes and rolled on her back. But no use, he again entered in her mind. This time she covered her head with blanket and growled "idiot" and drifted into sleep.

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"chill Pisto, you are going to rock in this statistics test'.after all I taught you" Kunal said while shoving his books in his lockers.

"That's why I m more worried " Pisto rest her back on the locker next to Kunals.

Kunal raised his brows at her comment, and she immediately explained," I mean to say, you taught me very nicely and I also understand some concepts"

"some'I taught u whole syllabus, where were you focusing"

"on you" she naughtily smiled

Kunal smiled at the girl whom he loved immensely. He came close to her and placed a quick kiss on her chicks, n whispered

"well in that case, I don't mind teaching you again'but for now'I m sure you are going to crack this test" he slipped his hand around her waist and started walking down the corridor.

"I hope'. I don't know why Mr. Collin love surprise test, thank god Frank (class mate) informed me about it this morning " Pisto mumbled as she clutched his shirt.

"Surprise test'.Everyone in your class knows that he is going to take the test, then what is the surprise"

" questions" Pisto answered nervously

"by the way, where is my little sis, does she know about the test ?" Kunal changed the topic to divert her mind.

"I m looking for her since morning, but'..there she is" Pisto swept her gaze all around the hall and found Nandini keeping her jacket in her locker.

As Nandini turned she found her friends striding towards her. She smiled as they reached.

"Hey, Nandini, how are you?" Kunal asked in his pleasant voice.

"Fine, just a little scared about the test"

"Same here, I wish I was sitting behind you, at least I could have copied something from you"

Pisto added nervously while placing her head on Nandinis shoulder.

While talking with her pals, Nandini casually looked around the corridor when suddenly she saw a back of male figure entered into the staff room, but before she could further think about it, her attention diverted to Kunal n Pisto.

"Stop it you two, everything is going to be fine" before he could cheer both the girls more, bell rang.

"Okay girls, I gotta go, see you guys at lunch" saying this he diapered into the crowd.

"Nandini, I m hell screwed up" Pisto started regretting as they headed towards their class.

"Why, what happened?"

"You know that Kunal taught me this subject, but I m not able to get anything into my head"

Nandini kept quiet for her to continue

"Nands, all the time during our session, I was not able look anywhere else expect him, and now if I get a bad grade, what will he think of me'that I m so dumb"

"You are not dumb Pisto, you are only in love" Nandini reassured her. "Anyways, our test is after lunch break, we will study thought out the break and I m sure we will at least get B"

"Okay" Pisto said looking at Nandini giving her sad smile.

As she looked at Nandini, she recognized the circles under her eyes and instantly asked, "What happened to you, why are you looking so pale?"

"I haven't slept properly last night, and woke up early to complete my assignments. Good part is, I finally completed my assignments, but the bad part is I got these circles"

"oh, that reminds me, you are forgetting something, you haven't told me about yesterday" Pisto asked while they entered the class room and settled themselves down on the front benches beside window.

On the mention of yesterday, last night clearly flashed in front of her and she mumbled "I'll tell u after lunch" and looked out of the window thinking why , whenever she was about to forget him, something happens that reminds her of him.

Her thoughts interrupted by Mr. Scott's voice. Despairingly she again started her attempts to forget him and tried to concentrate in the class.

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Pisto and Nandini came out of the class room after giving the test. Pisto excitedly pulled her iphone out and dialled Kunals number and started blabbering about the test. The test was not as bad as they thought. They escaped their lunch and studied throughout the break. But it was worth it. Nandini was a good student and she always scored well in every subject except statistics. She always loses hope, when it comes to stats. But this time she hoped that she might pass this test.

After using so much brain, her hungry stomach started demanding more. Giving into those demands Nandini pleaded,

"Pisto, I don't know about you two but I m very hungry, let's go to cafeteria"

"Off course, my stomach is growling" Pisto hurried her steps saying quick bye and giving some kisses to Kunal. Sometimes Nandini felt outsider between them, not that they don't love her, but at the end they are couple, so sometimes their lovey dovey conversation irritated her and that's why she tried her best to give the couple privacy. But sometimes she wondered how it would be like to have a boyfriend. But on the second thought she always scared to love someone, to enter into a relationship.

When they settled down in the cafeteria, Pisto immediately dragged the conversation which Nandini tried to avoid earlier.

"Now tell me" she finally asked. She has been resisting herself from asking this since morning.

"What" Nandini mumbled taking last chance to avoid the topic.

" Nandini, now you cannot avoid the topic, so tell me" Pisto asked in more orderly tone.

After seeing her determined expression, Nandini gave up her final hope of avoiding it and she finally blurted out everything. As she was telling her, Pistos expression turned from 0 to 360 degree, first she was shocked then surprised and then excited and when Nandini finished her story and looked at Pisto for her reaction. But to her shock Pisto was blank. Her, this reaction was more terrifying than her excitement.

"Pisto , plz say something" Nandini nudged her blanked friend

"Do you like that guy?" she asked, her blankness now replaced by full blown excitement.

Her question completely caught Nandini off guard "what'no, he made fun of me, Pisto, how can I like him?"

"But he seemed like a decent guy"

"What, decent, he is anything but decent'..and I hate him"

"Is he hot" Pisto asked excitedly

"What kind of question is that, I didn't check him out" Nandini defended herself in lower voice.

"But as you said he pushed the doors by his hands, then he must be strong"

"Yeah he is'.i mean he was well built and '"

"And" interest was dropping from her eyes

"Why are you asking so interestingly, as per my information you have a boyfriend named Kunal"

" I was asking for you stupid, if I find him hot enough then I can set you two up, then you two and me n Kunal '. And we can go for long drives on bikes, you sit behind your boy and I'll sit behind my Kunal', Omg it'll be so much fun" excitement was clearly visible in her eyes which scared Nandini more.

"my boy'..eww'...never ever think of that...I hate that guy. Forget about sitting behind him, I don't want to see his face"

Nandini grimaced and sipped her drink. But her drink never went down her throat, as she looked at the entrance of the cafeteria. She started coughing violently as the familiar male figure strode into the cafeteria.

"What is he doing here?" she muttered when Pisto handed her a tissue and came to her side to pat her back.

"Who?" She asked confusingly.

"He is the guy whom I met yesterday night" Nandini whispered.

Edited by mddmayuri - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
hello myuri

finally im here😃

so sorry for late comment...very very sorry😭

now update

updates were mindblasting...aww my god

what a nice story n what a dhamakedaar writer u r

i just love ur writing n story

jitni tareef karu utni kum h bhaišŸ˜‰

hawww after 10 yr they met again wo bhi train me...n he remembered her😲 pehle mujhe aisa hi laga but baad me pata chala ki wo to uske bag par likha tha...but prithvi ne nandini ko pehchan liya na...

oh smoking karne laga😲...acchi dant padi usse apni nadni se...

very nice scene...n then wo fall wala scene haye mein marjawa...itna close aa gye the wo...

n then usne uske hairs ko bhi hataya so sweet of u prithvi...😳

kya jodi h in dono ki...

dono london me h...ab toh don dana don hoga...

oh ho hostel tak chodne ka offer de rha h...yeh bhi koi puchne ki baat...

arey bada sensible ladka h...😃 45 minute ek sath khaali train me suffer karne ke baad bolta h ki usna aisa kuch kiya kya?//

wo baat alag h ki thodi der ke liye beech me close aa gye the itna ki ek dusre ki heart beats sun rhe the

kya hoga iska...i loved his teasing part tooo😳

dil khush ho gya update p[adhkar...

n i know unki agli meeting jaldi hogi..kyunki prithvi ne nadni ko pehchaan liya n uska hostel bhi dekh liya so wo kabhi kabhi pipe se chadkar nandu ke room me bhi ja sakta h heeešŸ˜†...day dreaming

pagal hun me bhiii😃

n wo beech me jo boy hostel which she claims hers...kahi wahin to prithvi nhi rehta...agar aisa hoga to kitna maza ayega kahi dur bhi nhi jana padega...window to window baat ho jaya karegi...

ur description about prithvi's image is mindblowing...aisa lag rha tha jaise mein rajat or mugsss ka new show dekh rhi hun...

but hmari aisi kismat kahašŸ˜•šŸ˜•

so pl pls pls pls dono hath jodkar

update soon

becoz mujhe nhi lagta ki mein ab jyada wait kar payungi...its a intresting n beautiful story so pls update soon

love u

muahhhšŸ¤—




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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
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sorry for late comment

but update was superb...

awww they r in same college

wow...poore din bechari ignore karti rahi but last e batana hi pada

waise bhi hum apne best frnds se baat jyada der nhi chupa sakte...n after hearing nandni story ...pisto ka reaction jo tha by god...

maza aa agya

aisa frnd sabko milna chahiye jo abhi se hi future planning kar rhi n wo bike wala idea mujhe toh bada accha laga...

exam accha ho gya finally😃 thats gud

n surprise test wala scene is my favšŸ˜†
question sachme surprise dete h students ko...

agla update thoda bada dena pls😃

i want to read more

pls update soon

love uuu😳
Edited by tejjo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: tejjo

resss


for 5th update

sorry rashu but im first here😃

no problem...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ahaannn….nandini ko vo handsome hunk pareshaan kerr raha h!!—arrey don't worry- usne kaha h vo tumse both jaldi milegaaur tumhe aur pareshaan kerega..- he said see u soon!!- sachha mardd aapne vaade se nahi mukerta-!!..

Nandini u are missing him- ^_^ so nice!!!...

Oo!- dis maria- aise logo k liye hi tho bana h English language ka ye proverb- books are your best friend!!.. hahaha!!...

Her language- yaa- I kinda enjoyed reading dat… hum india mei bhi tho saare aise hi baat kerte h- in starting itself ppl say- abbey saale! Kahan merr gyaa tha!!...oyee kamine, tu movie kyu nahi aaya!...abey ullu k patte- dominos ka bill kaun berega!...kuttey- dekhe-jeb mei photo kaudi bhi nahi h!. :D

Doston se aise baat kerte h- dushmano se jab baat kerte h hum Indians- tho maa bahen hi ek ho jati h!!...

Evn pisto has a tight score game wid maria- but as u said- she uses hindi gali's at last- tab tho her fight ki winner pisto hi hoti hogi- coz humari hindi gaaliyaan ka koi match hi nahi h- always winner..haina??

Poori raat neend nahi aayi…

Oops! Surprise test!!... ewweee…

Liked n enjoyed kunal's chemistry wid pisto- they r sweet!..

Shuker h- aapne test ka description fast forward mei likha- if u wud hav written it longer- I wud hav straightly bunked it- I mean skipped it….. bt test ko tho bunk hi kiya jata h!.. :P

Nandini told everything to pisto- areey kuch tho private chodd deti!!...

But chalo- I think pisto wil help her realize her lov!...nice friend she is!...

Pisto u wanna know naa he is hot or not???- dekhlo- saamne se vahi aa raha h…

Nandini- see he is back- he told u naa- he wil meet u soon!.. :D

Okies- jaldi se next update plzz…

Edited by sweetsanyo - 12 years ago

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