IBADAT- RTMC ff (part 4- pg no. 7)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey guys...i m mayuri... I m writing a new story on our favorite jodi RTMC.😊
I m posting its prologue, its very short but do comment on it and let me know whether i should continue it or not.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PROLOGUE

''People says a Person can never change his destiny, a person can run from everything expect his destiny, but little did they know that destiny can be change with the power of love, power of faith, power of prayer.'' There are very few people who can change their destiny and it includes one boy who lives in Manali. Who has ability to change his destiny, Who is ready to face any danger to fight for his love. He will fight for the girl who meant to him everything. He will stand against the whole world for her but the question is will he stand against her…………???.


so guys this is the prologue..press the like button if you like it and do let me know your true opinions

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Posted: 13 years ago
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mujhe acha laga, bhott acha laga...
prologue, powerful h,

rt k character main dum h..
bhott brave h,
but hamuri mc ko kuch serious na karna di,

rt has to stnd against her.. dats wrying
i mean, uski death matt karna.. or kinda..

dono jinda n sahi salamat chahiye...😍

mc ka bhi thoda hint do na di.. her role...

but i excited for dis stry..
plz cont. it...

and title ka kya hoa??

title h na, aapke paas...
nhi h, tho i will suggest .usmain tho main number one hun. 😳

lov u di, strt soon, sooper soon..😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
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vry nice yr

loved the prologue
it seems intresting

pls cont soon
luv u
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Destiny is determined by one's willful participation...so can be changed.!
coming to prologue , its nice and interesting...rajat's character seems firm and brave...looking forward to this story...

continue soon...thanx for PM.


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Interesting prologue...esp the last line..very promising
Waiting for 1st updateAre you going to title the story??
Thx for PM
Cont soon
Lov u...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanx dear for starting New RtmC Ff
Liked the Prolouge .It's representing Suspense and Rajat haracter very nicely
loved .n story is interasting.
plzz continue soon
n the last line ..He has to stand against her .means ...
update soon
wanted to read further .
love u
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

mujhe acha laga, bhott acha laga...

prologue, powerful h,

rt k character main dum h..
bhott brave h,
but hamuri mc ko kuch serious na karna di,

rt has to stnd against her.. dats wrying
i mean, uski death matt karna.. or kinda..

dono jinda n sahi salamat chahiye...😍

mc ka bhi thoda hint do na di.. her role...

but i excited for dis stry..
plz cont. it...

and title ka kya hoa??

title h na, aapke paas...
nhi h, tho i will suggest .usmain tho main number one hun. 😳

lov u di, strt soon, sooper soon..😍


are rashu...dont worry mein rtmc ko sahi salamat rakhungi puri story mein...
and abt the title...meine abhi tak socha nahi hai...agar tumhein koi title aacha lage toh plz batana...
and thanks a lot for ur lovely comment...
luv u
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: tejjo

vry nice yr

loved the prologue
it seems intresting

pls cont soon
luv u


thank u riya for ur lovely comment..
glad u liked the promo...i hope u will like the story..
luv u
Edited by mddmayuri - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Ruchi--

Destiny is determined by one's willful participation...so can be changed.!
coming to prologue , its nice and interesting...rajat's character seems firm and brave...looking forward to this story...

continue soon...thanx for PM.



thank u ruchi for ur wonderful comment...
will ud soon

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