OS: One last chance..please khushi...khushiii

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Kashish

@Arhi_2205

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#51

Very touching and heart wrenching

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devishree

@devishree

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#52

i cried sunara

it was very painful

u have laid beautiful contrast between present state of arnav and then state of khushi at the airport

it was fabulous

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rkapoor1382

@rkapoor1382

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#53

It was simply wow...
Loved it...
N the vm was awesome tooo

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incarnadine

@incarnadine

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Awesome OS! 👏 It made me cry 😭

and TFS the VM.. it's great! 😊

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Archu

@cocoatree

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#55

u r truly a sizzler in writing os.👏.yaar

just awesome..while reading this..i become too emotional😭

i can't control it..great work..sunara👏

thanks for a lot pm..😊

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blue_sapphire

@blue_sapphire

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#56

awesome update...had tears in my eyes at the end...the contrast of the past and present was just mind blowing!!!

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sally2651

@sally2651

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#57

Too good and thrilling
the way both past present were going simultaneously 👍🏼

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sarra0

@sarra0

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#58

Nice os, very emotional, the airport scene were interwoven wit the story beautifully

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#59

thank you for the pm, Sunara... a very moving and heart-breaking os... but loved how smoothly you juxtaposed the airport scenes with the ones of arnav begging khushi to stay with him... there is love and desperation in both scenes, the difference being that in the airport one arnav's anger overruled everything else and he left khushi behind, whereas here khushi is willing to listen to arnav and do as he says but her physical limitations prevent her from doing so!

though painful to see the two of them so broken and alone, still loved the os!