OS: One last chance..please khushi...khushiii

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multifaceted

@multifaceted

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

Absolutely speechless after reading this OS...beautifully written...amazing...
Thanks for the PM

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priyankaa

@priyankaa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

it was sad but beautiful...loved the entire combination of past n present convo..just luved it..thnx for the pm..😊

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Ash

@~sweet Ash~

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

Amazing!! I'm left spellbound by ur use of past lines alternating with the present it made me feel Arnav's pain!!

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pavi1

@pavi1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

tears in my eyes...😭
beautiful update...😊

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tsultana

@tsultana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#65

that was amazing! It was so beautiful, u write so well! The detail n flashbks of the airport scene was great. Thanku for the pm

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Surbhi

@..Surbhi..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#66

OMG. this is such an amazing OS..

superb job darling..

sooo sad and heart warming.. seriously yyaar.. too emotional.. really

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zohakhan7

@zohakhan7

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+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#67

such a beautiful os it was
amazing nd a heart wrenching os
luved it

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ardis

@Mirza1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#68

aww that was intresting. loved it

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deviarshi

@deviarshi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#69

Ur OS & the VM both were heartbreaking It was a pity that despite all the struggle Arnav could not safe his Khushi & the flashback of the airport scene was fitted in perfectly. But overall it was very sad😭

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mayabegum

@mayabegum

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#70

wow this is was amazing

so beautifully written and so emotional

i like the way you have merged the story in with their past

well done and thanks for the PM :D

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