OS: I Can't Do Without Her!

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Varsha

@Psychedelic

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

I knew we were due for a post from you soon! :P

*sigh*

It was so beautifully written. I loved it!! Linking events so perfectly.
It had everything. Drama, tears, confessions, humour, romance, eve a temple scene and filmy maang bharo scene! :D But it all fit in so well! :)

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smileyhug7679

@smileyhug7679

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

I was so hoping u will write soon

Thanks for a nice os

But pls do give us an ff

Amazing one like living without u

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tennismaniac19

@tennismaniac19

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Second part was sooo awesome that I had to post another comment!

LOVELY Smita!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏

That was fabulous. You know just what all is required to connect the past and the present. The sindoor bit was awesome! Plus the part about Khushi being upset about missing Shyam's dhulai 🤣

You are too AMAZING!!!!!!!!!

Thanks for an awesome OS!!!!!!

🤗

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Addie07

@Addie07

Inactive

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

*takes a deep breath... takes another*

You know how i'm feeling right now??? As if you have mastered telepathy and read all my thoughts and penned this amazing os.. the scene you have described is just the way i had anticipated and much more...

beautifully written.. Loved the confession, Arnav's reactions, the temple scene.. everything... with every line you made the scene come out alive and flash before my eyes,...

thank you so much for dedicating this one to me,,,,,,

p.s: do u mind if i share the link to this os on my prediction thread??

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Newbiesoapfan

@Newbiesoapfan

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

excellent -- hope something like this happens on the show! The Anjali angle could go any way .. they may all pretend that all's well for her sake ... but what that holds for Arnav and Khushi ... we have to see... can you continue with these stories please?