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Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

"I wish I could have seen you hitting Shyamji.", she sighed. "I have often wanted to hit him myself, but...", her disappointment came across clear and loud.

okay! 🤣

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devishree

@devishree

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

smita di

it was gr8 and very emotional

finally everyone revealed about that creep to mami and nk

i love mami she is righteous

last part was fabulous as arnav prays to devimaiyya and gets sindoor for khushi

this was the best ...

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Shobhana

@-Shobhu21-

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Wooo !!

That was so beautifully written Smita Di !!

Arnav's pain !! And the way everyone adds in their bits and parts of the story !!
Thank god you started it with the clearing of all MUs of the world !!

And Arnav ... He must have felt hell !! But I guess that he's had enough torture with and without Khushi to last him a lifetime and you did absolute justice the way you re-united them !! This time to be together always !!

Loved the OS

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.Sandal.

@.Sandal.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

hey do continue secondly part soon this was really touchy

do continue soon and do pm me plzzz

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

aww so beautiful
how do you all ff/ss/os writers think of such beautiful pieces
wow that was something

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dramebaaz.af

@dramebaaz.af

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Beautiful OS!
I loved how Khushi expresses her disappointment on not been able to hit Shyam! I know that feeling!

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Swati Hansraj

@swati-89

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Beautifully written as always Smita. Loved the part where Arnav listens to her calling his name and thinks how much he loves his name being called thus from her lips and this part too as it reflects the sentiments of not just Khushi but all our forum members...

"I wish I could have seen you hitting Shyamji.", she sighed. "I have often wanted to hit him myself, but...", her disappointment came across clear and loud.