Violin from Goa Last Part Gurmeet Drashti SS

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Panna

@OptimisticEyes

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Posted: 13 years ago

#121

Great update

Cont soon

Thanx for the pm

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Remya

@Remya_Pillai

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#122

wow!loved to c such a drastic change in violin's parents...
The gift was so touching..
Ajay made violin as his strength..

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Sri_Radha

@Sri_Radha

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#123

Awesome update👏

happy ending..Liked it⭐️

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punam2712

@punam2712

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Posted: 13 years ago

#124

SO HAPPY FOR BOTH THE COUPLES

GOL REALIZED THAT CASTE AND RELIGION DONT MATTER IN THE END, IT IS THE LOVE WHICH MATTERS

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Umna S.

@AshleyAngelena

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#125

Hey I read all the parts so ok I will come on part one first.

It was really funny when Ajay ask about the shapoo!!!

And the song was really good!!!

Really like the convsersation between Violin and Ajay

Part 2

Part 2 was really great too!!!

So Grace and Prateek love each other and Ajay have come in Violin house

accidentily by hearing the music!!!

Really liking it

Part 3

Part 3 its fantastic so Ajay wants to marry Violin but violin is confuse about her feelings

and she can't go against her parents!!!

Really like this part you are doing a great job!!!

Part 4

Part 4 its interesting Prateek comes with marriage proposal and he said that he is a anglo indian

really interesting will surely read more you are doing

a great job!!!

Part5

Part 5 its awesome so the parents have agreed too th e marriage and Violin refuse

to love Ajay beause she don't want hurt her parents hmm...!!!

Interesting doing a awesome job!!!

Part 6

Actually don't shout at me but I feel Violin is over acting

how do she know that her parents are happy or sad and how can she hurt her sister!!!

Anyway you did a nice job here!!!

Part 7

Part 7 What a beautiful end

Love it you did a beautiful job in every part!!!

You should do another SS, FF or OS.

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Tabinda Areeb

@t_areeb

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#126

wow perfect end

the best part was her fathers realisation of what he wants for his daughter

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Daayan Bai

@KunwaariDaayan

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#127

So happy that Ajay/Violin united at the end.Violin's parents finally realized that caste,religion etc don't matter at all where there is true love as true love prevails all and has no room for nothing else.Loved the song at the end!Could just picture them dancing and singing in proper filmy style.My favourite character's of course has to be Ajay/Violin,the best scene for me is the when they met for the very first time in train carriage.That scene is so clearly etched in my memory.I Another memorable scene is when Prateek and Grace meet for the first time and realize that they have found their lost love.You did an awsoem job Jas, in writing this love story with one of my favourite jodi's,plese do continue to write more and do keep us updated!Looking forward to your next venture.🤗

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Hinal.94

@Hinal.94

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#128

wow loved it sooo much

loved how violin's dad understood that caste n religion is not important but love is

n violin n ajay got together.

n wow they won so many awards for their love story

loved it very much

it is surely one unique love story

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Ratna

@--Ratna--

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#129

Jasmine 🤗...thank u for the awesome update and PM...finally Violin's parents are happy with Grace's marriage and encouraged Violin to talk about her love story...loved the way Ajay and Violin were reunited and the song u used...loved the finishing touch...Ajay and Prateek winning awards...will miss this lovely story... plz PM me if u start another story...TC 😊