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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 5 - lovely update
Thnx for pm
Madhuri53 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 6 - nice part dear
Thnx for pm
Update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome Update
Continue Soon
Thank You So Much For The PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update.
Maybe just as Julie is united with Nishan, Violin will also be united with Ajay...
Want to see them getting together...
Thanx fro pm dear and plz continue soon...

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Posted: 13 years ago
part 6
nice part...
poor Violin...
where is Ajay?
cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Violin from Goa Part 7

Thanku very much 4 accepting this SS.This is d climax of my SS.plz giv me detailed comment on d climax.Also plz write ur fav charac & fav scene & y u like it

Grace rang up Golsavio.
Gol:Hi Grace.How are you?
G:I'm fine dad.How are you and mom?
Gol:We are fine.Mom has gone out.
G:Dad,if i ask you something will you say the truth?
Gol:What Grace?
G:I know that i hurt you all.Are you still sad about my decision to be wth Prateek?
Gol:We were upset.But not now.I regret opposing your marriage with a nice boy like Prateek.
Grace became happy.Her eyes were wet.
She said in her mind:Thank you dad.Now only i got relief.

Violin,Clara and Golsavio were having dinner.
Gol:I was just thinking...why should we give importance to caste and religion?Love is more important in marriage.Right?
Clara:You are right.
Gol:I simply hurt Grace and Prateek.Now seeing them happy together i feel i would not have been able to find a better guy than Prateek for Grace.
C:That's true.Prateek is so sweet.Before his film's release he ouched our feet siad said that we are his parents.Poor guy.Since he was an orphan he had'nt experienced love before.
Gol:We are lucky to have a son like Prateek.
Violin could'nt believe their happiness about Prateek-Grace wedding.
Gol:Now i wish Violin also gets a nice life partner.Violin,if you fall in love you must tell us.
Violin was shocked.
Gol:I am sure that my daughters' selection is better than our's.
Violin was stunned.
Gol:If you love someone tell us Violin.
She became so emoional tht her eyes got welled up with tears.
V:Yes dad.I love...i love Ajay.
Gol:Ajay who is Prateek's friend?The upcoming music director?
V:Yes.
Gol:I will be a prowd father if you marry a musician.
Violin was surprised.
She was really excited.
Violin rang up Grace.Grace was dull hearing her voice.
V:Grace...i'm sorry..i hurt you a lot.You are right.Now our parents are very happy.You know...they gave me the consent to marry Ajay.
Grace was surprised:Really?
V:Ya.
Suddenly Grace became dull.
G:But Violin...do you think Ajay will accept you again as you dumped him easily once?
It pricked Violin's heart. Tears rolled dwn her cheeks.
G:Anyways you come to Mumbai as soon as possible.
V:Yes.Tomorrow itself.

Violin reached Grace-Prateek's residence.
V:Grace,where is Ajay?I want to see him.
P:He has gone for recording.
V:I want to talk to him.He must be hating me for breaking his heart.But i want to ask him for pardon.I want to tell him that i love him.
P:Ajay does'nt hate you.If he had hated you he woul not have been able to compose beautiful music.If he had hated you he wuld not have entrusted us to give you the gift he bought for you.
V:What?
P:Since you love music last year on your birthday we both had given you a music player.You remember that?It was sent by Ajay.It was Ajay' gift for you.He felt if he gives that to you directly you would not accept it.He did'nt have the strength to bear it.
Violin was surprised.
Grace patted her shoulder:Happy birthday Violin.Today is your birthday no.
P:Happy birthday to you...
He gave her a violin.

Before Violin opened her mouth to say something Prateek interrupted:
Don't thank us.It's Ajay's gift for you.
She was surprised.
P:Last week even though he was busy he had gone to Goa secretly to feel nostalgic.He bought a violin from there specially for you.
Violin became emotional and hugged the violin:I can't wait anymore.I want to see Ajay.

Ajay was at the recording studio.He was guiding the singer.
Violin rushed to the studio.She was overwhelmed to see Ajay after a long time.
She screamed:Ajay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ajay was shocked to see Violin.
V:I love you Ajay...
Ajay could'nt believe his ears.He dubted whether it was his dream.
Violin kept the violin close to his bosom.
V:The violin you gifted me is touching my heart Ajay.You know that violin is my favourite instrument.I am Violin and i can't get a better gift from anyone in this world.I have come back to you.Please forgive me and come back to me Ajay.
The producer of the movie:Ajay,first finish the recording.Don't listen to this crazy girl.Your music is very important for my movie.
Violin was tense thinking how Ajay will react.
A:Your film needs my music.Right sir?
Producer:Yes.
A:Violin is my music Sir.
Violin was relieved.He ran towards Violin and lifted her in his arms.
Ajay-Violin forgot themselves and started singing and dancing:
Sunlo zara..
Kehta hai mann
Tumse yeh dhadkan dhadkan
Yeh jo pyar hai
Yeh bahar hai
Hai jo pyar ka khila har chaman
Suno na..
Kheti hai yeh umang
Chalenge sung sung
Leke hum pyar ke saare rang
Jaage hain armaan
Jazbaat hai jawaan
Dil mein nayi hai tarang
Main hoon dil hai tu hai
Bus yeh guft-a-goo hai
Tu meri hai meri hai
Armaan machalte hai
Sapne pighaltey hai
Hum din badaltey hai
Aahistaa aahistaa
Mausam salona hai
Toh hosh khona hai
Deewana hona hai
Aahistaa aahistaa...{Ek deewana tha}.

The Producer was impressed:Wow!Good thing that Ajay's x-girl friend returned to him.Because of that a beautiful song is created.This song should be included in my new movie.I just can't miss it.


After a year...
The filmfare award function...
The best music director' award went to Ajay.
A:Violin..you come with me to receive the award.
V:Ajay..how can i?
A:You must accompany me to the stage.
He held her close and walked to the stage.

He received the award.He took the mike and said:
Violin...this happened only because of you...I love ou dear.
She blushed.
The best director's award went to Prateek for the film 'Rose'.
The best film award alo went to 'Rose'.
V:Ajay...our story is that beautiful?
A:Of course,that's why the movie 'Rose' which was inspired by our life won the best film award.
Violin smiled.

The end



Edited by jasminerahul - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi
the up is really good
grace called her dad and asked him whether he is happy with her wedding or not
her dad said that they are very happy to get a son n law like prateek who not only love their daughter but also gives them respect like his own parents
grace is relieve to hear this
violin parents asked her that whather she love any one
violin tell her grace about this and she rushed to her house to meet ajay
but ajya was gone for his recording
violin goes there and there they met eahc other confessed their love
the way u presented a love story is really good really its love which matters nothing more bcoz religion caste creed everythign is made up by us and only love can blend them together
plz cont with more like this and pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago

m happy k violins mom n dad accepted dat love is above everything...n happy with deir daughters choices...love u mom n dad...

awesome n beautiful update...

loved it...

thank u very much fr such lovely update n also fr d pm...

but m upset...its d last prt...

my favourite characters r as usual non other dan violin n ajay...unke rehte koi aur hone ka sawal hi paida nehi hota...un donoke silent pyar ne humarein dil jeet liye...pyar karte hue bhi violin k kashmakash...ajay k bebasi...dil chhoon gaye...

humarein jo scene sabse achhe lage woh hai jab violin ne apne pyar ko sweekar kiye aur ajay k pass chale gaye...isse achha aur kya ho sakta hai jab do pyar karnewale mil jate hai toh... sahi kaha hai na humne...

thank u sooo much fr such a wonderful romantic ss...will b waiting fr ur nxt one eagerly...keep it up...love u...

Edited by love2_soma - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb
Thank You So Much For The PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update

lovely ending

keep up the good work n like this only write ss,ff,os

thanks for pm

bye
take care

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