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Tammie

@saomom

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#611

Yikes. Guess that will show Arnav for being so wrapped up in himself!

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srmirji

@srmirji

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#612

fantastic 2 updates in such a short time...

please don't leave us hanging the story is going beautifully...

arnav was himself but poor khushi is in a mess.

lovely update ...please continue.

sri.

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rima

@rima

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#613

Originally posted by: arshi21
Rima ji..

The update was absolutely fantastic.

But you have to update very, very soon...or else I'll go crazy!

You cannot stop here for long.. :(

well i have no intention of letting you go crazy

Edited by rima - 12 years ago

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arushi05

@arushi05

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#614

Read both the updates together. Awesome parts.
The pain which arnav witnessed at his childhood because of his parents specially his mother is unthinkable.
And then with his anger he abandoned khushi in the midst of jungle.
Hope khushi is fine. I think now that arnav have found khushi he will take care of her and repent.

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mon4u

@mon4u

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#615

lovely update...khushi injured😭

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reshkn

@reshkn

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#616

fabulous update...😊

got an insight into arnav's past that had turned him tis way...but again kushi wasnt a reason...he had no right to do that to her...

..i wish she doesnt forgive him so easily...hope she is fine...

she hates him now...really???😉

cant wait to know wats next..😊

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Omoraboti

@Omoraboti

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#617

Reaction to chapter 11: Oh Aranv!

Reaction to chapter 12: Here is your push ASR! Wake up!

Rima, are you pming, dear?

Edit:

I just read your note on PM. 😊

Edited by Omoraboti - 12 years ago

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Noni

@sweetnoni

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#618

Omggg no u cant stop there!!
Soo finally he realised his mistake. I just hope he isnt that late n khushi is fine.

I bet he is gonna regret it. Leaving khushi behind all alone n now she is hurt because of him.

Pls continue soon bec im dying 2 read ure next update:D

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rima

@rima

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#619

Originally posted by: Omoraboti
Reaction to chapter 11: Oh Aranv!

Reaction to chapter 12: Here is your push ASR! Wake up!

Rima, are you pming, dear?

Edit:

I just read your note on PM. 😊

yes I will pm