The Mirage and Oasis...New FF: Chapter 13 updated - Page 60

Originally posted by: reshkn

wonderful update..!!!😊😊

arnav is battling between his mind and heart...and finally opts to go along with his mind...ending up doing the wrong thing...he keeps hurting her just bcoz he doesnt hav a grip on his feelings...

he doesnt apologise,doesnt greet her..seriously..!!!!this man is rude..!!!😡

i loved the khushi part...she lets go of her anger once she finds other worthy stuff..!!!she is a sweetheart..!!!her skating part wer she asks for permission was "so cute"...!!!😊

and the final part..*a cliffhanger* and that too at such a moment..!!!!maybe he got hurt bcos she mentioned his mother...but that doesnt giv him an excuse to leave her at an unknown place and wen she was her responsibility...!!!oh my..poor thing...!!alone in the dark...hope nothing happens to her...

its high time he learns his lesson..

maybe kushi cud call her dad and tell him so that we have some *dishoom dishoom* ...u know..

Originally posted by: Anupama.

I had read a few chapters long back but then i left it coz i thought ermm..i..umm..i thought that it s not updated regularly :D
anywho..i read it all now and i must say its very entertaining,magic like ipk,especially in chapter 11..when he says 'out'..so asr..hmpf!

Originally posted by: blue_jay

Hi Rima, First of all let me introduce myself, I'm Soniya and I'm new in the forum... I had been a silent member for quite sometime but read some of your posts and I really admire them...😊 And now coming to the FFs, I love reading them and recently started reading this one of yours, and now can you plz bear with me coz I'm gonna make a long post... 😳

So, first of all I love this school girl Khushi and her instant crush on her boss... The interview part and the next day cafe meeting was equally cute and funny, loved their interactions and expression and the way Arnav liked teasing her was definitely cute...😆Love the caring Arnav right from the lift scene when he console a nervous Khushi as if she is a child, drops her home and even faces her father's queries, so unlike ASR... He definitely adores her but as usual dismisses it... But then every relation needs its own sweet time to bloom... The flight scene was so funny and Khushi is such a chatter box...😆 I would like to travel to Italy, France and London' she said

'Please do,' 🤣

That was hilarious... 😆

And now Arnav and Khushi together in a cottage and Arnav in his ASR mode; already thrown her out of the car...😭 Typical ASR...

Oh yes, the skating part and Khushi pleading like a child; that was too cute... 😊

Ok, ri8 now I won't irritate you anymore... Waiting eagerly to know what happens next...

And Thank You so much for tolerating me... 😳

Originally posted by: Soloperson

Rima, loved reading the update!!! Now what will he come back?..

Originally posted by: AbdulloveIPKKND

IS HE OUT OF HIS f**kING MIND? HE LEFT HER IN THE MIDDLE OF THE DESERTED AREA. FEEL LIKE SLAPPING THE SHIT OUT OF HIM.