The Mirage and Oasis...New FF: Chapter 13 updated

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Omoraboti

@Omoraboti

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#541

Rima!

I am so happy you updated. You should be updating more!

I love this story so much. Will be waiting .. :)

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reallyhappy

@reallyhappy

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#542

Liar Arnav's..whom is he tryin 2 lie dt he's nt attrctd 2 her..hahawelll d more dey wud distnce d more dey wil cum close..poor Khushi..1 taref uska crush n dusri syd her conservativ Dad..bt if she wud xplain her dad abt d situation he wud hopefully undrstnd..wont he?yes may b..:)loved it..:)thnxx..:)

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desisweetheart9

@desisweetheart9

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#543

Thanks for the PM. Loved it. Sweet of Arnav to look for other hotels. Khushi being worried makes sense.

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moomin4455

@moomin4455

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#544

Poor Khushi! It's difficult for her...and Arnav may not be understanding but he does have a point!

But to blatantly say she was not his type...that was a bit harsh...

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NANDHINI

@hellokitty94

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#545

just awesome yaar...jist read all 10 chapters..so awesome

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Kehkasha

@K.Ahm

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#546

lovely part dear

sorry 4 not commenting much coz i was bzi wid uni

grt going n loved arhi a lot

aweee d last scene was so cute <3 <3

well done n waitin 4 d next part

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mamidis

@mamidis

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#547

Read all in one go .. loved this story. Waiting for new update.

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arshi1986

@arshi1986

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#548

Hi rima

read ur ff true colours Yest. I was so impressed tat I wanted to read this ff too.

Really both r so different .loved both concept .I'm loving this Kushi n arnav

Kushi is so scared of her dad.loved it.arnav asking dad s permissions .

update soon