The Mirage and Oasis...New FF: Chapter 13 updated

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casker

@casker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#561

loved the update.

He will come back.

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#562

Awesome, to me back to the show...he is admiring her but from far, he is talking to her but in his heart, mind and thoughts...

Loved the way this chapter came out! Loved Khushi waiting for his apology and finally giving him a piece of his mind...loved her ice skating...loved how is mesmerised...

And then he throws her out of the car...so she surely has hit a nerve...maybe he wanted her to want more from their relationship ? !

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..Anita..

@..Anita..

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#563

I cannot believe Arnav kicked her out of his car...wait I can believe that

I cannot wait til the next update

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jenshad

@jenshad

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#564

OH NOOO, I Think Arnav Will Come Back . Poor Khushi :(

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__blossom__

@__blossom__

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#565

He did not just abandon her in the middle of the road0_0 reminded me of the show :')
But srsly poor khushi arnav needs to grow up! *rollseye*
Great update!

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musicfan5

@musicfan5

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#566

Ahhh...Rima...A Cliffhanger...kya yaar...

Arnav is being downright rude and mean...Poor Khushi...feel bad for her...Can't believe arnav left her alone... in the dark... in a strange city...sometimes he's such a jerk...

Rima u gotta update soon...just can't wait to know what happens next...

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Riima_Azraa

@Riima_Azraa

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#567

Omg he kicked her out the car!! How ASR!! But I know he will come back for her!!

Awesome chapter Rima 👍🏼

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niharika111

@niharika111

Navigator

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Posted: 12 years ago

#568

Arnav can be a royal pain in the derrire sometimes! Poor khushi!😭

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Mahnoor

@Mojoo

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#569

Awwesome update... Arnav is still ruthless but i Find him a bit right that he does not want to give Khushi any slightest idea... Khushi's skating part was cuuttte...n her attempt to make things normal..aalll went invane...poor girl... But at d end of the update I was like WHAT THE... how one cn b sooo rude...he wil surely regret it...Plzzz update soon..U have left us on Cliffhanger...*sniffs*...I m lucky one to have my name in PM list so i m expecting a pm soon..*yayy*..U r a nice writer...