The Mirage and Oasis...New FF: Chapter 13 updated

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#521

loved the update khushi is so crazy and childish poor arnav she had him driving about looking for other accommodations loved how he took care of her when she feel asleep thanks for the pm

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saba

@ASR6262

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#522

awesome update very nice story
continue soon please and thank u for pm me

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#523

amazing updatekhushi is so innocentthanks for the pm

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Crazy4IPK

@Crazy4IPK

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#524

Lovely!

I can understand Khushi's dilemma. Any decent girl in her situation would do same.

Moreover I loved caring Arnav too, It was so sweet, how he carried her to the bedroom.

The story is getting really interesting.Update soon.

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multifaceted

@multifaceted

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#525

Just read the last 3 parts...their conversation at the airport and in flight was hillarious

interesting turn of events..cant wait to read the next part

thanks for the PM

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Amrita

@Amti4u

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#526

Loved it... It was really a beautiful update

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kiddy-kavya

@kiddy-kavya

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#527

When you mess with the childish lady, you'll have to pay a greater price Mr. Raizada.

I think Khushi will soon start biting his head off...lol.😆

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candykrush

@candykrush

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#528

I loved der conversation...thats beautiful :)

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Mahnoor

@Mojoo

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#529

Wooowww this is Awwesome Rima...I red all the chapters in one go n While reading I was just praying that it is not discontinued or on Hold...welll it's not...I loved the adorable concept of this FF...Khushi is sooo adorable n ASR being ASR is just amazing...looking forward that what u'll bring for us in next updates...do pm me plzzz...n update sooonn...would love to read it..